Okay so i have something to say first, the reason I was gone for so long was because my grandfather who was diabetic had decided he wanted to stop fighting. So I was spending as much time with him as I could to make up for lost time, he passed away in his sleep and after the funeral I wanted to keep writing for the few ppl who actually liked this garbage if mine. But I never found any motivation to do it, nor did I see a point.

Another thing was, I do ask that anyone can criticize my story as long as it helps me, not kicks me while I'm down. Anyway I am my own critic, brutally so. You guys have no idea the hours I'd spend on a chapter then as I go through it and re-read it I'd find something I didn't like then see more and more mistakes. Ultimately leading to the whole thing being deleted.

While this isn't me saying I'm gonna completely stop the story, I'm probably gonna re do the entire thing as I realized alot of things seemed rushed to me as I wanted to get too much done in the short time I had to work with.

So I'm deciding to delete this story and redo it from the VERY beginning, but before I do just a few more things I wanna go over/rant about.

1. Plz stop saying this is another mary sueXTeam RWBY fanfic okay? I mean when I first came up with the concept of Gabriel he was waaaaaaaaay more overpowered than he is now. The tattoos that were suppose to be seals? That was a half assed attempt dial him done more and shut you guys up. But after I do this STILL the pms came in. The same reviews were being posted. So what do I do? I make the 'tattoos' extend to his neck then eventually his legs, the purpose being if he used the power too much BOOM cripple. Just another half assed nerfing I guess.

Also I know I started it out as Weiss in mind but I did that because I actually like Weiss (not like a creepy crush waifu way either!)but I eventually pop out of the left field with tryna throw Ruby into the mix. Only later on writing did my friends say it was a bad idea so my solution? Have them both reject him once he confesses he likes the both of them, but again I changed my mind as I wanted a little romance in the story so I had Ruby be the one who stayed. JUST RUBY, pretty sure in that one chapter when he gets rejected YANG tries to hit his head off his shoulders. WEISS says he disgusts her.

Stop saying TEAM RWBY X mary sue, cause honestly it ain't true only annoying when you try and make ppl think it is.

2. My character's name wasn't always meant to have that Azarox name alright? Normally I was just going to leave this alone but then I got a pm, not a REVIEW LIKE I'VE BEEN POLITELY requesting ppl to do but a PM! (hooo...calm down me...)Saying that my character is an insult to Monty's rules and his show, like really? One person did leave a review (thank you kindly btw)Saying the name rules yeah but he ended with a good note. Complimenting the chapter (thanks so much) ANYWAY do you guys know how hard it is for my uncreative ass to think of a name? like honestly I was just gonna say Gabriel Grun, the later being green in german I think, for his last name to begin with. BUUUUT I have figured out a different name and look for him. Expect hair and eye color change in rebooted story.

3. Other Characters I didn't get much hate from my other characters (not much love either) but I did get one about the team namm4e GAME. Also the cheesiness of when Gabriel said Game time and Game start. Honestly I do agree with the cheesiness haha, but not the 'GAME is a bad name part' honestly when you learn all their last names you'll all hate me for being so lazy with the.

okay that does itfor my ranting I believe, anyway I will see you guys in the new story! Cya!