So if nobody guessed by now, I'm obviously not going to be redoing this 'story' since I'm sure the outcome would just be the same. I don't know why I thought I could make a Gary Stu, self insert, or whatever you wanna call this story, good. Now this is usually the part where I rip myself a new one by listing the things that are flawed with this garbage, but I'm sure y'all can see them yourselves. So to summarize, this is being deleted, it's something that shouldn't have been attempted and I apologize to everyone who read, favorited, followed etc.
Sorry for wasting your time.