"I'll make it Clear: I'm not a toy. My feelings are not your playground And my life is not your game." - Unknown Source
Everyone stared at Zack for a while as they were definitely shocked by this relevance. Though Zack smiled as Tessa then noticed something is very off about his Aura. That's when a memory kicked in as her eyes widen.
"GUYS BACK AWAY!" Tessa screamed only for Zack to use his aura to pin her to the wall as he choked her.
"Zack what hell!" Ash yelled but everything was very confusing as he was not sure about Zack's remark. The guy laughed as his body melted to everyone's horror only to be shocked by the transformation.
"Oh my Arceus, you guys are so pathetic, you really think that I am Zack this entire time!" The new person stood in the room as he held Tessa hostage in the air as he kept a choke hold on her as she wheezed for air.
"Who the hell are you!" Alexa yelled as her Espeon woke up and hissed at the man as he huffed.
"Watch your mouth kid, the name's Jordan, though that is as far as I'll go with introductions," The man said as he blasted the door open sending alarms in the hotel as an evacuation.
"You're not going anywhere!" Ash yelled as he sent out Zorua who snarled at the man.
"Yeah, what Ash said you punk!" Zorua growled.
"Now now, you don't want anything to happen to this girl right?" The man moved Tessa in front of him as everyone hesitated. Alexa was about to command Espeon but the man turned to her so fast that before she even blinked she was launched to the other side of the room with espeon as they were knocked out from the impact.
"Alexa!" Serena and Nicole ran over to the unconscious girl as Ash stared at Jordan.
"Damn you…" Ash muttered with gritted teeth as he couldn't believed he was played.
Tessa seemed to run out of air as her arms flailed weakly as her eyes seemed to become discolored.
"Well, seems as she is about to die, but I can spare her if you come with me, Aura Master," Jordan smirked as he held all the cards in this situation.
"What did you do to Zack?" Ash hissed at the man who looked at the ceiling for a moment before remembering.
"Oh, him, I disposed him," The man simply said as Ash's eyes glowed skyblue.
"Then you just dug your grave, Zorua shadow ball!" Ash yelled only for the Man to tighten his fist a little making Tessa gasp as she felt very weak and her eyes were about to be blank. Just this little action made Zorua hesitate as Ash told him to wait.
"Man, you are a pretty easy to manipulate boy, ever since you guys got here, I had been playing as your...friend, is that what you have? Zack never had been with you guys from the start of the tournament to now," Jordan said.
"Then how you got his pokemon without them knowing you were not him," Ash retorted as the man huffed.
"Easy, because my client gave me duplicates of them, in fact, exact copies," with that said, a shiny Gardevoir popped out from one of Jordan's pokeball with killer eyes staring at Ash.
"Now, if you excuse me, I will go ahead and kill this..ACK!"
The entire room exploded and shook as a Metagross bashed through the balcony area. Due to that, Jordan's hold on Tessa was loosen as she fell to the floor unconscious from the lack of air. Ash, Zorua, Jordan, and Gardevoir recovered to look over to the Metagross to see, ZACK?!
Zack's eyes were blazing blood red as he jumped off Metagross's head and landed on the rubbled floor glaring at the man.
"How?! I thought I killed you!" The man screeched as Zack used his aura to send the man flying to a wall. Jordan cried out as he felt a snapping sound at his arm. Zack walked to the man as he sent out his Gardevoir who automatically mega evolve as Jordan's Gardevoir looked in fear at it's counterpart.
"You really think you can kill me that easily, I made a promise to kill the man who killed my parents, not just that, you lied to my friends by trying to take my place, not to mention lie to them that I am from the future!" Zack snarled only for the man to chuckle at that last part.
"My arceus, you never told them who you really are huh, only one of them knows but the rest you lied to...just like your deceased friend," The man laugh menacingly as Zack just stood still glaring at the man.
"Who…" Zack asked slowly as Jordan looked at him in the eye.
"Who else, the one friend that took you out of the shadows, the one that led you on the path to meet THE Ash Ketchum, the friend that introduced you to that bitch there,' Jordan pointed to Tessa's body before continuing, 'and...The friend that lied to you every step of the way," at that part, Zack grabbed Jordan's collar and slammed him into the wall making a huge crack as his eyes were a wildfire.
"Don't talk to Kuroda like that! He never lies!" Zack yelled.
"Really, did he ever told you why he found or why he helped you? Or even told you his true identity," Jordan asked as Zack pushed a little pressure on him causing Jordan to grimace from the pain.
"He help me in many ways, he showed me the one person that shows the kindness of humanity, he showed me a friend that gives happiness to others, he even showed me my past self and who I was, how would he lie!" Zack yelled in the man's face as the man snickered.
"You definitely don't know anything about him, now I would like to stay and talk but it seems as I need to…" Jordan was about to tell his Gardevoir to use psychic only to look in shock as he forgot about the mega evolved Gardevoir who stood over a knocked out Gardevoir. He turned back to Zack who only smirked as his reaction.
"You aren't going anywhere," Zack smiled as his eyes flashed a bit brighter staring at the now nervous man who realized his plan has been compromised.
"Zack, stop!" a feminine voice called out as Zack let go of Jordan and turned around to see Tessa being helped up by Ash while Alexa is being supported by Serena and Nicole at they all looked at him.
"Zack, please, this isn't you, you never take your anger out that easily," Tessa spoke.
"How do you know me, my true self that is, I hate people who are abusive and evil!" Zack's eyes flashed dangerously as the girls backed up a little while Ash and Tessa still stared at him.
"I know you because I been there with you, you and Kuroda been there with me, and what that guy said….it is true….Kuroda died," Zack's eyes stopped glowing as they came back to normal colors as his eyes were growing tears.
"You're lying! No way in the Distortion World that Kuroda died, I can still feel his aura!" Zack yelled.
"Zack...that might be the leftover aura that he left behind, we aura users leak out aura scents behind, remember?" Tessa said again as she winced in pain from her chest.
"..." Zack stood there motionless as Ash helped Tessa walk over which Tessa then used her little bit of strength to fall into Zack's chest as she hugged him.
"He was a brother to me Zack, just like you are as well, the pain is still there...there are things you need to know but….I'm sorry," Tessa then cried as Zack stood there as the fire department came in to see several kids in the wreckage all bruised and tattered clothing with a huge hole where the wall should be.
"What are you kids doing here?! Follow us down to the ground floor for your own safety!" One of the firemen yelled as the group turned to them.
The group turned to one another before they agreed to comply with the firemen as they all walked to them. Zack turned back to see the corpse of the man but all he saw was a letter in its place. Zack walked over to it and checked it out as he was curious but was also pissed off on the guy escaping. As he picked up the letter, the words that he saw were:
Death is coming, darkness shall consume, A betrayal is committed within your friends
Zack crumpled the paper and used his aura to shred it before turning and ran to catch up with the others. As he disappeared around the corner with the firemen following from behind, they never noticed the figure who was hanging from the ledge of the building as he carried himself back up.
Jordan catched his breath as he smiled while taking out a device which he pressed on the button at the top of it as he heard a voice from it.
"Did you do your job?" a voice said from the other side.
"Yes, they bought most of the story but that damn kid came back and ruined the plan along with that small bitch," Jordan grunted as he ripped his shirt to make a bandage from it.
"Well, at least they seem to be distort from the events is what I am guessing, right?" the voice said as Jordan sweatdropped.
"Y-yeah, you are right…" Jordan stopped talking as he didn't want the person to be ticked off.
"Well, return back to base, we will now launch operation Betrayal next," The voice said.
"You did it...didn't you," Jordan said with gritted teeth as he tighten the makeshift bandage on his wound.
"Maybe, you will have to see it for yourself," with that, the call ended as Jordan laid back against the rubbled wall.
"...is this really the path I wanted?" Jordan said.
Base of the Hotel
As the firemen guide Ash and co to the ground floor a gunshot was heard from the entrance.
"Where is the Aura Master!" a voice yelled over several screams of civilians.
Ash and the rest looked at each other but Zack walked past them and was about to exit the building to confront the person when both Alexa and Tessa grabbed him.
"Zack, stop! You will be killed!" Alexa grunted as Zack struggled against their grasp.
Ash, Nicole, and Serena looked at one another before Ash sigh.
"Guys, keep an eye on each other, I need to do this.." Zack stopped struggling at that and turned to Ash with a shock face.
"What you mean?! You lost your pikachu and also the memory!" Zack yelled at Ash who backed a little bit back before giving a glare at Zack with his eyes glowing blue.
"I don't know about that but one thing for sure, I will find a way to remember if I can," Ash sternly said as he used his aura to hold Zack and the rest in a paralysis state as he walked towards the door.
"ASH!" the group cried out to him except for Nicole who didn't say anything as her eyes glowed violet purple. The group was so busy yelling at Ash that they didn't noticed Nicole breaking the aura spell and slipping away except for Zack who turned at the last second seeing her running off in the opposite direction.
Ash opened the door and his eyes widen with shock as people were on the ground scared as there were people with bandannas and weird looking street clothings as they had pokemon surrounding the people who wince as one of those weird pokemon hissed at them.
"Well, well, this is the Aura Master?" a voice said as Ash turned to the owner as he glared at a red cloaked woman that was a bit older than him.
"Let these people go!" Ash snarled as the woman only giggled.
"Oh my, aren't you a it rude?" the woman smiled as she took out a glock and held it at a little kid's head with the mother nearby being held by several grunts they seem to be as the lady cried out for her child.
"Urgh, you damn bitch, I'm going to kill you," Ash snarled as his team came out ranging from Charizard, Sceptile, Garchomp, Gigalith, and Greninja as they stared down at the woman who only chuckled.
"My my, you are a feisty one, sadly, I won't be battling you," Ash snorted at the woman's comment.
"Why, because you are an actual pussy?" he smirked as the woman looked at him with a frown.
"You know what? I'll let my pawn do the dirty work from here," she snapped her finger and Ash gasped as he couldn't believe who it was.
"Kuroda?!" Ash mutter as he looked at his friend who seem to have no color in his eyes as he looked at Ash with a blank stare as he had a pure black cloak on him.
"Oh? Too scared to fight against your friend? What if he attacks you though?" Rias smiled as she clapped her hand once and Kuroda's eyes flashed a dull yellow-green and a pokemon popped out of a pokeball from his belt revealing an electric hound.
"JOLT!" Jolteon cried out as it glared at Ash with a look of evil.
"Tch, I don't want to fight you Kuroda, snap out of it!" Ash cried out only for Kuroda to hold out a hand as he made his move.
"Volt tackle," he bluntly said.
Jolteon soon covered itself in an electric energy as it sped right at Ash. Ash held his hands in front of him only for a pokeball to open up and a pokemon he never knew he had popped out from its pokeball and blocked the attack with an iron tail.
"PI!" a small electric mouse swatted Jolteon away with its small tail as Jolteon hit the ground hard only for it to jump back up and glare at the little mouse.
"A...Pichu?" Ash awed at the little one's strength.
Pichu heard its name and turned to Ash as it held up a thumbs up to him as he smiled back at the little one.
"Okay, I got it," Ash look back up towards his enemy and friend as he made his move.
"Pichu, use thunderbolt!" Ash yelled out even though he doesn't know the moves but for some reason his mind seems to know instinctively.
The little chu launched a bolt of lightning at Jolteon who absorbed it as lightning rod took effect. As Jolteon absorbed the last of the electricity it roared as it launched an even powerful thunderbolt at Pichu who used iron tail to absorb the electricity as it slammed its metal tail to the ground dissipating the electricity.
"Well, I see this will be a while," Rias sigh as she held a hand up signalling the rest of the grunts to send out their pokemon who surrounded Ash and the rest of his team. The powerhouses all got in a defensive circle around Ash as Pichu got onto his shoulder as glared at the opposing pokemon while Ash's eyes were glowing blue trying to find a weak point in the enemy's pokemon.
"Sadly, I hate waiting so I will get over with this," Rias than let her hand fall to her side which the grunts holding the hostages took them away while the ones surrounding Ash commanded their pokemons. Ash in response told his pokemon to counter the attacks.
"Take out the pokemon!" Ash cried as his pokemon split to engage a trainer and pokemon.
Rias turned around with Kuroda following behind her but Rias stopped him as she gestured the controlled boy to Ash.
"You stay here, take care of that kid if you can, once you're done, fall back," Kuroda bowed down in understanding as Rias continued to walk away with the men that held the hostages while Kuroda turned back to Ash with his Jolteon as the two ran at Ash and Pichu who were fending off the attackers with their defensive attacks and moves.
Hotel
Meanwhile, Serena, Alexa, Tessa, and Zack stood where they were as Ash's hold on them is still in effect. Alexa sigh as she felt like she needed to take business, in fact she felt very anxious which caught the other's attention.
"Uh..Alexa, you okay?" Tessa asked.
"Yeah, you seem...uh," Zack was about to say something but decided to not to speak as it might make things worse.
"Alexy, you good?" Serena asked as Tessa and Zack looked at her weirdly which she noticed.
"What? We been calling each other pet names for a while,"
"Uuuhh, it sound more like you two went fast as a river," Zack said and that was when a meep sound was heard.
"Mmmmmm," Alexa's face was suddenly really red as the three looked at her with concern.
"What now?" Tessa asked only to look at her pants and noticed why.
"What? Is it something ACK!" Zack was about to look the same way Tessa looked but his head suddenly twisted away horizontally as Tessa's eyes glowed pink to keep him from looking.
"DON'T LOOK YOU PERVERT!"
"Uh, is it a bad time?"
The group minus Zack turned to the voice and saw Nicole standing at a corner with a weird look on her face.
"Where were you?!" Serena frowned at the mysterious girl only for Nicole to gesture around the corner.
"I was getting a friend," Nicole said as a white cloaked girl walked out of the corner.
The girl took off her hood which made the girls gasp while Zack muttered something about girls being forgetful since he was still looking away. The girl is revealed to be Lillie, her eyes were suddenly a bit dull green and her skin is a bit more pale as it seems she hadn't been out in the sun for a long time even though she wore a short sleeve sweater and a white skirt along with her white sneakers and socks. Lillie took out a watch-like device as she pressed a button on it which caused her eyes to flash a little bit of blue. The group suddenly felt their bodies freed from the aura hold as they rubbed their arms. Alexa even ran off somewhere to hide to do her business. Serena, Tessa, and Zack who regain control over his head as well looked at Nicole and Lillie as they gave each other serious looks.
"What happened to you in the past three days?" Zack asked Lillie who just looked out of the hotel doors to see a huge battle going on out there.
"Time doesn't really mean much to me anymore," Lillie said as a Salandit slammed into the door and slid down on the glass as it was knocked out.
"What you mean by that?" Lillie sigh at Zack's questions as she sent out Shiron who looked around to see the others including espeon who was looking around the corner.
"Vul!" Shiron ran over to Espeon as Espeon turned to the alolan fox and smiled as she ran over to the little fox to greet her.
"Anyway, I am here now because for one thing, I need your guys' help, and also to get Kuroda back," Lillie said.
Suddenly the doors exploded as a body flew into the building with a pichu in his arms. The group turned immediately to see Ash holding a Pichu closely to his chest as the rest of his pokemon regrouped to him as they were bruised and injured. Several grunts ran in as they readied themselves to attack with their pokemon. Kuroda walked in as his black cloak flew from behind him. The group looked at the enemies with hatred as Nicole ran over to Ash to see if he was okay.
"Ash, you okay?!" Nicole looked at the kantonian with concern as Ash slowly got up groaning as the pichu in his arm ran back up to his shoulder with sparks flying from his cheeks.
"Piiiii," Pichu growled at the Jolteon who jumped in front of Kuroda.
"Give it up Aura Master, you are coming with us," Kuroda said emotionlessly.
The group sent out their pokemon as they prepared for a fight. Out on the field were going from Alexa's Espeon to Tessa's Greninja to Zack's Magmortar to Nicole's Bellossom and also Serena's Braixen. The miniature army of pokemon roared at the opposing team as the grunt wavered a little but Kuroda got them back into ranks with a glare.
"You think that this little team will stop us?" Kuroda snarled as he sent out two other pokeballs revealing a Vaporeon and a Flareon.
Ash and the group stood ready as they prepared to engage but then Lillie walked in front of the group looking at Kuroda with a serious look on her face as well as hope.
"Lillie, what are you…" Ash asked but the blonde turned to him with a look as he understood which she turned back to Kuroda.
"Kuroda, please get a hold of yourself, that neurotoxin is killing you, fight it, this is not you…" Lillie said slowly.
She tried to walk slowly to him only Kuroda to scream out in rage as a blast of Aura launched her back. Lillie closed her eyes to brace for impact only to feel rough skin grabbing onto her as she felt the floor. She looked up and saw Gabite, Charmeleon, Scyther and Pichu coming out of a portal. Scyther was grabbing onto her as he gently placed her back to the ground before joining the rest of the pokemon.
"Grrr," Kuroda gritted his teeth as his eyes blazed with Aura.
"You guys take care of the grunts, me and Zack will take care of Kuroda!" Ash yelled as the girls nodded even with Lillie reluctantly accepting.
"Alright, Let's Go!" Ash cried out as Greninja copied his movement as a water orb consumed him only for it to explode revealing Ash-Greninja.
"Magmortar, use Blast Burn, Metagross use Meteor Mash, Gardevoir use Shadow Ball!" Zack yelled as his pokemon launched their attacks.
"Greninja water shuriken, Charizard steel wing, Sceptile use leaf blade, Garchomp Giga Impact, Gigalith Stone edge, Pichu Thunderbolt!" Ash commanded.
The entire team launched their combined attacks as they engaged with Kuroda's team.
"Trio Attack, go," Kuroda said bluntly as the three original eevee-lutions grouped together as their eyes glowed with power as they launched the three element attack which was equal strength to the combined attack.
"God damn it, Gardevoir, use Psychic!" Zack called out.
Gardevoir's eyes glowed as the trio attack reversed and headed towards the eeveelutions smashing into them causing them to fly backwards and landing on the ground in pain.
"Ash, now!" Zack yelled as Ash's body suddenly was filled with energy as the pichu also saw and smiled as he ran up to Ash.
"Alright, here we go!" Ash's body suddenly radiated power as Pichu ran over and grabbed his hat while also jumping on his shoulder.
He did a weird dance move with Pichu as Pichu did two flips on his shoulder as it seems he is storing energy. The hat from Ash fell off as he did a very fast and quick motion to the dance move as Pichu then radiated with rainbow energy as he ran across Ash's arm with the Hat falling onto his head before landing on the ground with a pose of him like he is about to launch a thunderbolt.
"What the…" Kuroda glared as the three eeveelutions got up and ran back in front of their trainer but as they got together they cried out as they glowed before merging.
"Here we go Pichu!" Ash yelled as his eyes blazed with aura as Pichu's eyes started to flash blue with a smirk on his face.
"Pi-chu!" Pichu cried.
Suddenly energy figures of a Pikachu and a Raichu of both Kanto and Alolan appeared around Pichu as his eyes flashed again. The energy figures soon dissipated as a huge orb of electricity is formed above Pichu as the energy figures are absorbed into it causing the orb to spark with rainbow energy. The energy formed stopped all the fighting around as everyone was shocked by Ash's power.
"What the…" Tessa and Alexa said simultaneously as Espeon and Sylveon looked up from two fainted pokemon to the orb of power.
"No way…" Nicole muttered as she and Serena looked away from their opponents who did the same as they looked at the main battle.
"Ash really is the one…" Lillie muttered as she stared in awe of the amount of aura power radiating.
Zack stood there motionlessly as he couldn't believe his eyes. Ash never been this powerful in the Primun Cave but it seems…
"Grrr, eevee, use trio attack!" Kuroda growled as the three eeveelution that was merged together revealed an Eevee as the little evolution pokemon opened its mouth showing a red, yellow, and blue energy ball forming.
Pichu glared at Eevee who glared back as the two waited for the other one to make the move. Though it seems Ash is way ahead as he punch the air in front of him.
"Alright! Pichu let a rip, ARCEUSIAN BLAST!" Ash cried out with power as the two mimic one another for a quick second as pichu's paw which held the massive orb in the air floating above him threw the orb which Ash mimic sending the Orb straight towards Eevee with blinding speed as it left a trail of rainbow energy residue.
"Eevee use-" Kuroda was instantly cut off as the Orb engulfed Eevee but also caught him in the blast as he was engulfed as well as an explosion filled the area as everyone braced themselves from the blast with a few pokemon and grunts flying off while the rest just got scared as ran away from the scene.
"LETS GET OUTA HERE BRO!"
"YEAH THIS ISN'T DOPE AT ALL!"
"I WASN'T PAID ENOUGH FOR THIS SHIT!"
The group braced themselves behind the rubbles as the afterwind of the explosion blew powerfully as Ash's pokemon gather around him with Pichu landing on the ground with a tired smiled as he looked at his doing.
"Did we win?" Ash muttered tiredly as he felt the same burden with Pichu but it seems as Greninja felt the same pain as Ash as it seems as the three were linked together during the entire thing, with them sending strength to one another.
Ash waited for the smoke to clear and grunted as he saw Kuroda on one knee with a hand protecting Eevee with his body from the blast as his attire smoked with heat as the Teen stood up slowly as he looked down at Eevee.
"Take a rest," Kuroda said as he returned the tired evolution pokemon into its pokeball before looking up to Ash.
"It seems as my master is wrong about you, you seem to be more of a troubling obstacle than a simple bush to cut," Kuroda sneered as he secretly unsheath a hidden blade from his jacket without Ash knowing.
"Oh yeah, well you aren't the same guy like the shady non-talking but also very helpful friend that I know!" Kuroda snorted at that.
"Please, you really think I would be friends with you?!" Kuroda snickered before looking at Ash with a look of Hatred.
"I will enjoy seeing the look on your face when I-UGH!"
Kuroda fell to the ground unconscious as a pissed off Lillie stood behind him with a large stick probably from the rubble, Gabite with a glowing wing arm which is possibly karate chop, and a Charmeleon with a glowing iron Tail as the two pokemon beside Lillie sweatdropped as they probably over did it. Lillie sigh as she tossed the stick away with the entire gang walking over to her.
"So uh, what now?" Zack asked as he gestured to the group of the damage around the entire Hotel place as the gardens were ruined, the beach was filled with debris and the hotel itself was a disaster.
"We will probably have to go to the Pokemon Center," Nicole said but Tessa gave a better one.
"We still need to find out how to reverse Kuroda's state, I think it is best if we go home," Ash and Zack turned to her with a weird and childish look as they yelled out in unison.
"WHAT ABOUT THE LEAGUE?!" they cried as Serena and Nicole grabbed their ears.
"You boys know there is always a second chance right?" Serena frowned at the two.
"Also, the league has been cancelled due to this...Terrorist attack, we need to recover from this," Nicole said as the two boys finally agreed.
Lillie stood up with the help of Scyther and Gabite to Carry Kuroda. She turned to them as she looked out to the sea.
"I have a friend who can help us, Dialga!"
The time lord pokemon appeared through a portal as it looked down at the group with all of them staring at him with awe except Lillie.
"What is it this time?" Dialga said with boredness.
"Sorry to disturb you but can we have a portal to go back to the Primun Cave please?" Lillie asked as Dialga sigh.
"Fine, but this is the last time, I need to rest after this, also, my creator wants me to return now, a disaster has fallen upon us, trust is going to be essential at this point, the tiniest of betrayal or suspicion will cause you young ones to turn against one another, don't do that like your past selves"
With that said Dialga opened a portal underneath the group sending them away as they were shocked by the sudden fall. Once all them including their pokemon fell through the portal, Dialga closed it and opened another portal which he entered through and disappeared from the devastated hotel area.
Boat
Rias sat in the passenger seat of a patrol boat as an aether employee drove the boat toward the foundation building. As they rode near, Rias smiled as she is coming closer to her goal.
"Time will tell, Time will tell of your downfall my love," Rias giggled madly as the boat neared the docks.
Primun Cave
Kids and adults are going about their days as an elderly man with his Lucario sat on the porch meditating. The man grunted as he slowly opened his eyes to see a portal open near the secret entrance spitting out some teenagers and a bunch of Pokemon to the ground. He stood up and started to walk to the door as his Lucario followed behind.
"Master, do you feel it?" Lucario spoke as the man nodded.
"Yes, seems as we have some old youngsters coming back, and I feel as they are in distress...also, seems as there is a cute one with them as well," The man's face glowed a bit pink but Lucario slapped the man in the face bringing him back.
"Sorry, let's go Lucario," The man then continued walking as Lucario stopped a little bit looking up at the entrance before he followed the elder.
Notice: Sorry for the confusing chapter and also that this isn't the best of chapters I have done due to how confusing it is, I am explaining why down below in another notice but here is the author's note-
Well, sorry for the late upload, Been busy with school but I have been writing on this. Also, I kind of noticed my writing style is a bit...peculiar, though I am holding off on re-writing everything as it seems I am still learning. So uploads will be a bit slower as I will be checking my writing and also trying to take scenes slowly as I need to put more details in them and try to not do too many changing POV. So chapters will be variant as I might do only 1-3 POV or scenes depending. Also, I am writing an original story which thanks to "CatSpat", I know to go to FictionPress to do it, I am pretty sure you guys saw it in my Profile I think but yeah, I ain't starting on it until this one is completely done. I may start a sequel to this but I ain't going ahead of myself like before as I need to focus on this now. Anyway, below is a notice and something I want to get straight.
Notice: Okay, so I have been in a conversation with someone about their OC not being what they want them to be. So I am okay with you guys reviewing about foreshadows and other comments that aren't too personal. Though I may ask you guys about some details in OC related stuff. But here is the thing, Once you submitted the OC into this story, you are saying that I have the rights to use your OC for the story plot and so on. I got a complaint about someone not wanting their OC in the story plot the way I am writing it up and this chapter sums it up due to having to comply with that person's complaint. I know that some of you guys may see this as a bad way of me using your OC's but in order for me to write my stories, I have to do several twists and tweaking with the OC's to fit the plot. So once you complain about how your OC is being used in the plot it technically ruins the pace of the story and I have to think of a new way which will make it difficult to write as shown in this chapter with the top part being all wanky as I am unable to continue the plot and have to redo all of it. This is all and thank you for reading.