Guys if any of you are good with battle scenes and grammar like periods and commas and stuff i really need a beta i would of course offer full credit and mention as well as some creative control i really am new at this so i would need someone who can walk me through the steps help if you can guys thanks.

Okay i will admit that i was getting tired writing the chunin exams so that's why the ending sucks and i felt that the chapter was taking too long.

On another note i will be taking a short break from ROD as i have several fic ideas that are floating around in my head that i am really excited about so i will focus more on them for awhile.

"Human talking" 'human thinking'

"Devil, Demonic,jinchuriki in cloak, and mutated being talking" 'Devil, Demonic,jinchuriki in cloak, and mutated being thinking'

"Angelic, person using angelic chakra talking" 'angelic,person using angelic chakra thinking'

"Something from the shinigami realm talking" 'something from the shinigami realm thinking'

Chunin exams taking off the seal anko's date training with jiraiya invasion

The two months the contestants had been given was up. Well not exactly (just a few filler paragraphs) they still had a few days till the day itself and ino was taking that time for some girl time as she called it gathering tenten sakura hinata and herself for a day of shopping and fun (okay the reason i'm doing this is i thought that the outfit that i described hinata in didn't really do what i wanted when i was thinking about her personality in this fic than what i was trying to and i can't really just say oh she is just suddenly in this new outfit so yeah). Hinata found herself in a ninja clothing supply store which ino described as cute and functional so there they were. Hinata was looking through one of the racks and saw something she might like. It was a corset in red with black siding the tie was in the back. The design on the piece was a large whirlpool in the background and skulls on top of that stitched in burnished orange on the front panels and gold on the side hinata tried it on it pressed her breasts up considerably but still gave coverage there was strips of cloth that came from the top of the corset covering her shoulders and forming a type of collar around her throat.

"Can you tell me what this is made of" "yes of course let me see a coton iron mix with a triple tri weave stitch with self repair comfort and temperature adjustment seals" "can you make some alterations" "of course what do you need" "well that's the thing i don't really know you see i want some discreet carry and i have a bladed whip and a small tanto and i'm thinking about some daggers" "i think i can help you for your wip we can make a slit with some seals will make it look like it's not there the wip will wrap around your midsection are you right or left handed" "right" "well the tanto hmm i think we can do something similar and i think you should just wear your daggers at your hips" "how long should the alterations take" "2 or 3 hours" "okay how much will it run me" "about $120" "wow that's cheap can you make something else for me" "sure what do you need".

After hinata was done with the cashier girl (what would you call her seamstress i don't really know) she went to find some pants and new shoes. "Hey hinata chan ready to go" ino yelled"yeah where are we going now" "we're just gonna go get something to eat and some coffee god i've needed this for so long i mean surrounded by guys all the time it's exhausting".

The entire group had moved to a coffee shop and all placed their orders. "Hey ino why didn't you get anything you didn't even order coffee" "well i'm on a diet" "ino were ninja any fat we do gain would just be worked off during training so why stay on a diet" hinata spoke up "well i don't want to be fat" ino replied "ino no offense but right now you look anorexic and if you are doing this for a boy trust me he doesn't want a girl who looks like she just spent 12 months in solitary with only scraps of bread" tenten added her opinion "but sauske kun doesn't like fat girls" sakura added her useless opinion "yeah i really like sauske i want to look good for him" ino sounded embarrassed "ino when has sauske shown even a passing interest in you when has he ever even once acknowledged your presence in any fashion other than by saying 'go away' or 'stupid fangirl' face it he isn't interested in girls only revenge" hinata placed a comforting hand on ino's shoulder as she realized hinata was right "you're so stupid hinata if we don't diet then sauske kun won't notice us" sakura again opened her fucking mouth "no she's right sauske has never not even once noticed us in a positive way we've only been an annoyance to him but oh god i'm so late on my training i might as well drop out of the ninja corps" ino was heartbroken "no ino you don't have to drop out me and naruto will help you just come to this address after the chunin exams and whatever you do don't touch the gate stay away from it" "oh come on hinata naruto's apartment doesn't have a gate you're just lying that's what demons and demon whores do" sakura received only silence from hinata "that was uncalled for sakura hinata has not sold her body to anyone you as well as i know that" tenten looked angry at sakura "she's obviously a whore she fucking that demon and the only person that could ever be capable of loving that monster is a whore my sauske kun is so much better than " "what about your little one inch finch (i think that's original i might have to check) pleas naruto could beat him so easily" "really you think the dead last could beat the rookie of the year" "sakura their just titles which mean nothing outside of the classroom but i guess i can put it in terms you can understand naruto-kun beat zabuza an A rank nukenin, the demon brothers trained by zabuza C rank nukenin, and a small army of about 200 sauske couldn't even handle the demon brothers so who is stronger the one who handles countless opponents and wins or the one who gets knocked out on their first real mission" hinata was met with silence.

Hinata left after assuring a downtrodden ino that things would get better.

A few days later chunin exams

It was the day of the chunin exams. All the kage had shown up kumo, iwa, mist,sand. "Ladies and gentlemen the chunin exams will now start with the first match naruto uzumaki vs neji hyuga will the two combatants pleas make their way down to the arena". Naruto and neji made their way to the arena the fight began in earnest. Neji leapt back and started into his little bitch monologue "it is hopeless you can not defeat me i am fated to w-" neji was cut off by naruto's boot in his face "can we stop talking so i can kick your ass" "very well if you're that eager for your destruction" naruto drew benihime "great smoke explosion" an explosion of smoke far greater than the one used against kiba erupted "that trick won't work on me byakugan" neji saw an army in front of him hidden by the smoke each had another color aura around it "your clone circus jutsu doesn't work on me uzumaki i can see each clones elemental type" the clones charged neji but were no match for neji's taijutsu.

Naruto sheathed his swords and made several hand signs "gaea's rebellion" a line of spikes erupted from the ground heading towards neji who for once in this battle felt fear which was quickly overshadowed with confidence as he remembered his rotation. "Rotation " neji went into a hurried rotation therefore missing the smirk on naruto's face

Kage box

"That genin uzumaki is quite impressive hiruzen" the raikage commented "in truth he's really not a genin i gave him jonin rank after some truths were revealed to me and just put him on a team so the council wouldn't go into a rampage over it" "uzumaki wasn't that the last name of the fourth hokage's wife" the tsuchikage asked "no i don't believe it was" "don't act stupid with me hiruzen it wasn't a question but a fact he is the 4th hokage's son and i know it" "onoki old friend make one move against naruto and i will raze your pathetic village to the ground" "don't worry about it sarutobi i hold no ill will towards the child or his father and neither do my people oh sure we were angry for a time but we got over it war is war and what happens in war stays in war".

The hokage turned to the mizukage a rather attractive woman by the name of mei "mizukage dono i would like to welcome you to the position of kage" "why thank you hokage dono i will not lie it is quite tiring what with all the paperwork and bureaucracy at times but overall i like my new role" mei made her address in a seductive yet formal tone.

"Hokage dono that hyuga genin isn't doing very well" indeed he was not neji was currently being slapped around by naruto quite literally.

"Kazekage dono your very silent are you well" "oh yes quite im just very engrossed in this match" "yes it is quite a good match"

Back to the match

Naruto had finished beating the fuck out of neji and now had him by sword point "how i was fated to win" "who told you neji if no one told you and even if you trusted them how could you possibly think you know what fate has planned and any ways no one's fate is set in stone nothing is definitive now conceed" neji noded cementing his defeat.

"Winner naruto uzumaki there will be a 10 minute intermission and then the next match sauske uchiha vs gaara of the desert will begin". After the intermission gaara made his way down to the arena but sauske didn't show "will sauske uchiha please come down to the arena" when no one made any move to do as directed the proctor body flickered up to the kage box "what do we do hokage sama" "disqualify the boy and give naruto the match but do the others first so he can recover" "hokage sama i beg you to re consider most of the spectators came to see the uchiha if you disappoint them they will not do business with you" "if that impudent boy doesn't bother to show up expecting special treatment then he doesn't deserve to be chunin".

" sauske uchiha has been disqualified the match is moved to the end of the exams and will be fought by naruto uzumaki the next match temari sabuke VS shikamaru nara begin".

Temari sent a blast of wind shikamaru's way but the boy dodged it "your gonna have to do better than that temari you should know me by now stitching shadow spikes" spikes made of earth rushed towards temari. Temari slammed her fan into the ground so that a few inches were buried in the ground causing an earth wall to rise from the ground blocking the spikes advance.

Shikamaru smirked and the shadows cast by the earth spikes and the wall converged on temari who desperately jumped back to avoid them "fireball jutsu" 2 fireballs shot out of the shadows currently pursuing temari who blew them away with a gust of wind "my turn" temari sent out 4 bursts of wind which moved like they had a mind of their own forming a pseudo cage around shikamaru "wind palace" the wind imploded kicking up enough dirt to completely cover shikamaru.

When the dirt cleared there was an earth dome. "Temari as much as i hate to admit it this is pointless we both know how this will go i attack you counter you attack i counter" "your right temari" "yeah i guess you're right" both in unison's (proctor we forfeit).

The match was called and some of the less anticipated matches started like yugito nii vs random taki genin. When all the unimportant matches were done it was time for the last match naruto vs gaara.

The air was tense as the two combatants stood apart from each other. The air was filled with leaves indicating a leaf body flicker. Kakashi and sauske appeared back to back. "Am i late" sasuke's voice was filled with arrogance "yes and the hokage gave your match to naruto uzumaki i'm actually gonna need you guys to leave so we can start the match" "well naruto will just give the match back to sauske like it was meant to be" "no" Naruto's voice was filled with indignation "GENIN uzumaki you WILL be giving sauske your match" naruto didn't answer well not in words but in action booting kakashi in the face and punching sauske in the throat.

The match started in earnest with gaara shooting several sand bullets at naruto who just cut through sent some fireballs at gaara whose sand just blocked them. Naruto jumped back when spikes of gaara's sand tried to skewer him. Naruto quickly came up with a plan to beat gaara. Naruto sent out several bursts of water and as predicted gaara's sand blocked them but the sand became sluggish. Rushing forward naruto was about to impale gaara but at that moment the kage box exploded.

Kage box

The kazekage was revealed to be orochimaru and all the kages were now on the roof of the kage box with orochimaru's bodyguards making a strange purple barrier. "So my traitorous student returns" "i've come to destroy the leaf sensei and there's nothing you can do to stop it i have the combined forces of both suna and oto at my command not to mention the shukaku jinchuuriki konoha will be razed to the ground" "i have bad news my wayward student we knew about your invasion even before you finalized the plans for it" orochimaru's face twisted into rage when an explosion sounded off from one of the clearings were oto nin were supposed to be summoning snakes.

South gate

A large force of oto and suna ninja just got south gate open and were met with zabuza and haku "hello scum" zabuza's grin was bloodthirsty grin "please return to your home i don't wish to kill you" haku announced then the combined forces glanced at each other and then just charged.

North gate

A similar situation was happening at northgate only with a blood thirst anko and a grim ibiki

With naruto

Naruto stood surrounded by sand and sound nin "oh finally i was wondering when this was gonna start but i'm afraid i don't have time to play as i have to go help jiji so i'll deal with you quick" "what are you talking about kid we're gonna beat the fuck out of you" the apparent sound jonin charged naruto with a smirky grin well till a glowing blue spectral sword pierced his chest and then hinata appeared stabbing him for real in the chest with her tanto "go i'll take care of these chumps".

With the kage

Orochimaru had done the unthinkable he had used Edo tensei to resurrect 8 people and they now stood in front of the horrified hokage (from left to right): hashirama senju the first hokage, tobirama senju the second hokage, minato namikaze the 4th hokage who was decomposing for some reason, kushina uzumaki,toka senju, mito uzumaki,mikoto uchiha (i looked through the previous chapters and couldn't see anything about me sparing mikoto but if i'm wrong tell me and i'll take this out), and finally a strange woman with pure white hair.

Naruto with his wings out was speeding towards the barrier that separated him from the hokage where a tense situation had developed see the current kage and the old kage were in the middle of a tense standoff. Naruto sent several blasts of benihimes chakra blasts causing a small rift to form which naruto flew through with one of hinata's chakra swords clutched in his hand.

Naruto landed right next to the third and a moment later and a purple flash hinata appeared next to our favorite blond. "Orochimaru you bastard you would dare to bring back these resting souls with that foul jutsu" naruto sounded angry "sarutobi you've grown so old" "yes tobirama sensei i have it's been awhile since you were back" the hokage was sad at seeing his two predecessors used in such a way.

Naruto stepped forward to meet his parents for the first time "mom dad it's so nice to see you" "sochi you've grown so much it makes me so happy" "son it's so nice to se-" minato was cut off by naruto clocking him in the face hard "guess i deserved that" minato rubbed the back of his head in a naruto like fashion "mom dad i'd like you to meet my fiance hinata hyuuga" hinata stepped forward "oh she's lovely naruto i ho-" kushina was cut off by orochimaru "enough with the pleasantries it's time to die you worms" everyone who was resurrected with the edo tensei shot forward and the other group doing the same (here's whos fighting who the first and second A the raikage. Minato hinata. Mito and kushina onoki. Toka senju mei. Mikoto sarutobi )

First fight: A vs 1st and second hokages

A charged the first hokage his lightning armor at full blast causing him to be ten times faster than should be possible for a human, ramming a right hook into the 1sts houth with a cry of "Lariat",the 1st hokage's head flew back. The second hokage jumped over his brother and sent a punch at A's head, the raikage moved his head enough to avoid the punch but was unprepared for the hook of water to send him into a front flip. The shodaime sent thick tendrils of wood to ensnare the raikage but A dodged them by rolling to the side 'i can't fight them both if i remember my konoha history right these two are brothers and some of the best tag teamers their attacks would compliment each other' A was trying to think of a plan while trying to stay alive from the two brothers pounding him hard (no innuendo). Finally the raikage got it.

Ay pushed himself up and made several hand signs "lightning stream" a bolt of lightning shot towards tobirama who dodged, Ay fired off his jutsu several more times before hitting hashirama then quickly made more handsigns "secret kumogakure art: conjunction of the lightning gods" the electricity that was coursing through the first hokage split into two lines that formed into two huge beings that slammed violently into the 1st hokage completely atomizing his resurrected body.

Ay was violently panting that jutsu took a lot out of him it was a secret jutsu for a reason. The second seeing the 'death' of his brother decided to bring out the big guns. "Apocalyptic wave" a brobdingnagian sized wave converged on the fourth raikage who noticeably paled as the behemoth of a wave converged on him he put up a token defence "earth dome" a dome of earth rose around the raikage but was destroyed by the force of it sending the raikage rolling across the ground.

'That jutsu took a lot out of me and i still have another brother to go. I need something powerful but low on chakra' He was furiously dodging the water sharks the second hokage was sending at him. The raikage did several handsigns and shot out several lightning streams and when they hit using the same secret art as the first.

Hinata V minato namikaze

Hinata faced the 4th hokage who had been given only 4 of his special kunai. Around hinata's neck was a tattoo the konoha symbol on the back of her neck with two lightning bolts coming out of it wrapping around her neck pointing at the uzumaki symbol.

The 4th threw one of his kunai at hinata then flashed towards it ending up right in front of hinata who sent him flying with a devastating right hook, the 4th was sent rolling violently across the ground

In the side lines

Hiruzen observed the fight between the hyuuga princess and the 4th hokage.' release mental control' 'sarutobi sensei i'm so sorry for this' occins voice sounded genuinely regretful and you can hear the spikes of pain her actions caused herself 'it's okay my dear student at least we had advanced notice i want you to release your voice control on naruto's parents it'll be good for him' 'okay sensei and tell naruto kun that i want to give him the kusanagi i can't trust what my controled self will use it for'.

Back to the fight

"You're a hyuuga" "yes" minato flashed towards hinata sending a kunai at her but she jumped away

"You are kimonos child yes" "correct" hinata pulled her whip free and slashed of minato's arm with the blade attached to the end "i have something very important to tell you your mother is alive, you see what happened was that your mother discovered a plot inside the hyuuga clan council to mold your father into the perfect figurehead your mother found out and told your father they confronted the council and they were both captured and placed under crude seals making them pawns" hinata was sent sprawling from a backhanded punch from the 4th "due to her pregnancy with you the seal was weakened when your sister came around she broke free and the council poisoned her we took her to tsunade the sannin and she was able to live but in a coma like state my wife placed her under a barrier that prevented the flow of time and reversed it till your mother was in her 20's again".

The fight continued absentmindedly until hinata was able to come to terms "thank you for sharing this with me now shall we kick it up a notch" hinata gained a bloodthirsty grin "you have no choice child" purple chakra exploded from hinata a tail with a fleshy heart shaped barb sprouted from just above her plentiful ass.

Leathery bat like wings sprouted from her back. Hinata's eyes glowed with a pink lite her breast swelled and her hair gained an ethereal shine." executive order" a wall of hinata's chakra swords formed behind her shooting forward as they formed littering the battlefield and impaling the kage.

Hinata flashed around hitting the former kage with her bladed whip and tanto causing minor wounds.

There was a blast of white light and a vaguely female figure was slowly revealed.