I just want to say that I'm surprised that the first chapter got such positive feedback! Thanks to you guys for being awesome! Also, I have no idea what last name, well fake last name, to have Vali use because I'm pretty sure she wouldn't use Lucifer as her last name. A bit too obvious to me. So any suggestions are welcome.
Reviews:
Guest(1): Well I'm not to sure, I mean I'm leaning towards having just one pairing, maybe some pairs on the side.
RoboVolcano4: You can find that out in a later chapter :P
Exis21: I don't know about giving Issei those powers, because it's someone else's fanfic idea, and I wouldn't want to use their idea. So probably not. I wouldn't want to take their idea. I can probably figure something out.
Sunsengnim: Well, I'm glad that you liked my previous fem!Vali fanfiction. I didn't give it up, per say, but I just didn't have many ideas so any updates are really slow for that one. But I'll definitely try to update this one, maybe the other one as well. As for the harem, I actually have no idea about the whole harem thing. I could try, but there could be two outcomes. One where I could make it work, or where it would just turn out badly. So I'll be thinking about it.
Guest(2): I know which makes me excited on how I can do this :D
Guest(3): As for who would be in the harem, I would probably still be thinking on who would be in it. Because I know that I'd keep a few of the original ones from the anime/light novel/manga and maybe add a few of my own. But still I know I should think about those factors also.
abc: Thanks! Glad you like the story so far.
NoName: as for a different name, I don't know, so I might keep Vali unless I think of an actual full first name. Because I feel like Vali would be like a nickname or something.
Alright so as far as I can tell, not many want the harem, but that's okay! Now on to this chapter!
One thing Vali noticed as soon as she woke up again was that she wasn't alone, wherever the hell she was. This wasn't the pavement where she was almost dead.
Instead, she was laying on a couch, which was pretty comfortable. The room she was inside, seemed to be lit up with candles, the blinds were closed. Looking at her body, her clothes weren't ripped anymore, and whatever injuries she did have, were miraculously gone. Her ankle
[You alright there Partner?] She heard Albion ask.
Vali nodded slowly,"More or less."
A new voice spoke up,"Oh good, you're awake. I thought I was too late." The feminine voice sounded relieved, which she couldn't tell if it was a good or bad thing.
Looking up, she saw the crimson haired girl from earlier. Then she was on the defensive. The girl could be a good person for all she knew, but the descendant of the original Lucifer could not risk it. It seemed that everyone was out to get her these days.
Vali stared at her, then she could tell, this girl was a Devil, but unlike Vali, she wasn't a half human.
"Oh, I didn't introduce myself, I am Rias Gremory, and as of this day, I am your new Master."
This girl couldn't be serious.
Okay, this girl was completely serious.
Rizevim had told her the system Devils, well Devils who weren't complete asses, used ever since the Great War. Because most pure blooded Devils were killed, they found other means to increase the population. Which were now called peerages.
Although Rias was kindly explaining what she did, Vali already knew what she was saying. After all, Rizevim had many rants about devils who weren't "pure." It got annoying after a while.
"You're my pawn..."
"Vali. Vali Lucifer." Her surprised face was honestly funny. But Vali wouldn't tell her that.
"L-Lucifer?!" Rias exclaimed in surprise,"Then that means-"
"I'm the descendant of the original Lucifer," Vali waved off the notion,"Big deal, I get it."
The red head almost wanted to speak her disagreement, but decided not to and Rias seemed to compose herself, and now she was back to normal, although the silver haired girl could tell that she was a little embarrassed about her small outburst.
"Well, as I was saying. Vali Lucifer, you are now my pawn."
Raising an uninterest eyebrow Vali stood up,"We'll I'm not all on the idea of being someone's slave. So, sorry but no thanks." Making her way towards the door, and leaving while ignoring Rias' protests.
Elsewhere
"You fools!" A voice hissed angrily,"Look at what you have done!"
The angry voice came from Rizevim Lucifer, who at the moment was fuming with rage.
The hooded group that stood before him back away from their employer, they didn't want to report their failure in the first place. But if they hadn't, they knew for sure that he would come after them.
"S-Sir, if we had known that the Gremory girl was going to show up, we would have gotten her faster," The green haired woman from earlier spoke up.
Rizevim sneered,"Oh? But wasn't you that landed the blow that killed her? I should kill you for your stupidity." Then he inhaled deeply, then exhaled,"The doctor said not to stress. Remember Rizevim, breathe in and out."
The group only watched quietly.
"Since I'm so kind, despite being a devil, I'll let you all go for now until I require your services again." He spoke, more jovial then before.
The group scurried off, afraid of what would happen if they stayed a little longer.
Rizevim watched the retreating group. He pursed his lips in annoyance, and held that face for a few moments. Soon he smirked to himself, thinking of something new. "Alright then, if you want something done, then you have to do it yourself."
Kuoh Town
Vali sighed, she completely forgot that she had little to no money, maybe a few coins of yen, maybe a bill. She was sadly not as familiar with the currency here in Japan, which was totally different from the ones back in her original home. Maybe she could buy herself a small meal and a drink. Or maybe a bigger sized meal, just no drink. All she knew was that she was hungry, and just wanted food.
She would've grabbed more money before she left, but she was in a rush running away from Rizevim's home.
What she'd do for a large hamburger, fries, and a milkshake.
"Hey! Leave us alone!" She heard a girl's voice exclaim.
"Oh c'mon, my buddies and I just want to have a good time with you two lovely ladies." A voice replied.
"Well we're not interested! You've been following us here ever since we got here, and we've told you more than once, we're not interested." A second female spat.
Looking around, she saw said girls who were trying to get away from what looked like college kids. She shook her head, honestly it was like every guy expected a girl to answer to a catcall. She felt bad for the two girls, having to deal with the three guys, who seemed to not get the message.
"Hey, I'm being nice, and giving you the option, so come on." The older male spoke, causing the two girls to move away a little, in turn making the males move closer.
"Or you could be a respectable human being and leave these two girls alone."
The two girls, one with brown hair and pinkish hair, looked up surprised. They had no idea who the silver haired girl was, but they were grateful that she decided to help them out.
"And who are you?" The apparent leader asked, looking Vali up and down as a small smile played on his lips,"Unlike your friends here, you look like you like to have a good time."
Vali scoffed at his attempted flirt,"Sorry, but I'm not interested, so take your group of friends and leave them alone."
If the guy didn't see the group on her face, he probably would have kept doing what he was doing. But when he did, he finally got the message and he and his little group left.
Turning around, Vali saw the brown haired girl let out a sigh in relief, sending Vali an appreciative look,"For a second there, I really thought that creep would have done something. You are a lifesaver."
Her friend agreed,"They can't get girls their own age, so now they stooped to anyone that looks female."
"I'm Murayama," The brown haired girl introduced herself, then gestured to her friend,"and she's Katase."
Yes I just did that. I'm sure that she wouldn't be too fond of Matsuda and Motohama. So here's what I've come up with.
IM SCREECHING I SAW ARTHUR PENDRAGON ANIMATED(FROM THE HIGHSCHOOL DXD BORN OPENING) AND ALL I'M THINKING IS """OH NO HE'S HOT"""
*ahem* Anyway, I hope you all enjoyed this chapter. Until next time friends! /(^o^)/
