To the Guest who reviewed recently on the newest chapter i am sorry that the story is choppy at the moment it is meant to be that way at least for the next chapter or the even the one after the next one, due to their being important plot points in the story i am not ready to bring to light yet and thus the choppiness and jumping around that has displeased you so much and i am grateful for your review it wasn't rude by any means and has made me realize that i have failed to add more info about certain things, i do hope you'll keep reading the story and give me your honest thoughts again but i am sad to say that i may not be the type of writer that you enjoy reading the writing style of, and if you choose to not read the rest of the story or my other story's for that matter it is alright, i am just thankful to you for the review filled with very good concerns about the plot holes, as well as to the other inscribable people also have reviewed this story all i am able to do is give my most sorrowful apology to you all and do my best to learn to become a even better writer.