A.N. it's been a while. But I'm back, not beter than ever considering I was suffering from severe writers block.
This is not a chapter to read more of my story though. This is mainly to thank the people who have commented on my story. Both the good and negative comments, I love them anyway they come. It let's me expand as a writer. Although I'm not much of one am I?
I love all my reviews. Most were really nice saying my storie is good. THANK YOU ALL FOR THEM!!! I am putting this here though to answer a very long question. Hope it answers any from anyone else also.
From Billie Arm
This story is really confusing. I read up to chapter 3 and I still don't understand it. First of all, I believe Inuyasha wouldn't attack Sesshomaru for his positon as Lord of the Western Lands since he isn't that type of person. However, if he did, I don't think it would be as simple as written in your story.
Point 2: How did Kagome manage to get Sango, Miroku and Shippo through the well and where are Sango and Miroku living? It makes no sense that they are living on their own since they have no knowledge of the customs here in the future.
Point 3: Why would Inuyasha still be alive if Koga's dead? I mean Koga's a full demon while Inu. is only half (unless you tell us that Koga dies in some type of war?)
Point 4: Why does Inu have a girlfriend? You claim he still loves Kagome, so why does he have a girlfriend named Sasha( is Sasha Japanese or American?). This makes hime seem like a two-timer like her friends claim in the anime.
Point 4: If Kagome was born in 1995, she wouldn't be 18. If that's the case, I'm older than she is.
From what I've read, this story is really cluttered. However, it may get better with time.
Good points on everything. I really didn't give much of a description, I kinda went off and didn't realize that certain things weren't tied together.
Point one: It's InuYasha, he is the type to get big headed and attack when he gets the chance. And if he did have the jewel in his possession whole, it would be in his best interest to make sure that he lives to see Sesshoumaru again he wouldn't want to die. I didn't write him attacking his brother to show him taking over the western lands, but to show that he would come out the victor in a battle against the older and considerably stronger demon. No one ever said anything was easy, I never said how long it took him to succeed mainly because I'm not going to say. It would clearly take a long time and I want to keep certain things like that a secret to have some mystery in here somewhere.
Point two: I just kind of put Kagome bringing the other's to the future because I like the way it sounds. I haven't figured out how that work's, it is a work in progress for me to add that in. it'll be added soon in another chapter how it work's. Also, if Kagome brought Sango Miroku and Shippo to the future wouldn't you think that she helped them out with all the basic living amenities??? That would automatically go along to say that they didn't just get thrown out on there own, like is said. EVERYTHING WILL BE EXPLAINED.
: I just kind of put Kagome bringing the other's to the future because I like the way it sounds. I haven't figured out how that work's, it is a work in progress for me to add that in. it'll be added soon in another chapter how it work's. Also, if Kagome brought Sango Miroku and Shippo to the future wouldn't you think that she helped them out with all the basic living amenities??? That would automatically go along to say that they didn't just get thrown out on there own, like is said. EVERYTHING WILL BE EXPLAINED.Point three: I thought I put how Koga died? If not then I will add something in. I don't read over my stuff and I don't save any of the chapter's I've written.
Point four: InuYasha got a girlfriend because it would be the logical thing for me to say. Yes he waited for Kagome for 500 years. But he is still a man. Like anyone he isn't going to wait, especially after he pussied out of seeing Kagome when he returned to Japan. Sasha… I don't know the origin of her name. I will look that up. Good question.
Point four(which would be five): Kagome was born in '95? We'll say she's older. Cuz I would be older than her too. a lot.
The best stuff get's better with time. I never claimed to be the best writer, although I do claim to be the best photographer, I am neither. I do this in my free time. It's not meant to be taken too seriously, obviously otherwords it wouldn't be on fan fiction and I would've tried to write my own book along time ago.
Love you all. Cant wait for more reviews.
