Ok, so, I'm not going to continue this story, for a number of reasons:
It's going WAY too fast
The characters are out of character
It's backed up by too little support
So, I'm posting the edited version up soon. It's not going to have the same title; because I changed the plot a little bit (you'll see how I changed it when I post it). When my beta-reader approves of the first chapter, I'll post it.
