discalmer i dont own naruto
an/ thank you rangerh hopefully this is better
(thinking)
"talking"
kyuubi speaking
Back at the hospital
"sakura hurry up and put some pressure on that gash"
Tsunade couldnt understand what was going on neji was a jounin one of the best in konoha who could of dont this to him
naruto was on this eleventh boel when he sense someone's chakra and they where strong
kurenai and hinata where travling to the only place they knew where naruto would be ichiraku when they ran in shikamaru,ino,and choji
"hey kurenai and hinata where you guys heading off too" shikamaru said lazily
"well hinata and i are deading to ichirake she thought she heard naruto eariler and where going to ivestigate"
"really he's back"
ino shouted excitedly she had lookat at naruto alot differantly after his fight with neji in the chunnin exams
"do you guys mind if we join you i would like to see what naruto looks like after 3 yrs"
"n..not at all i..ino" replyd hinata but she was coroius as to why all of a sudden ino would want to see naruto
"troublesome but we have nothing else to do what do you say choji want to join"
"munch,munch""sure shilamaru and if hes thier i can challenge him to a eating contest its been along time since me and him could have one and if hes not thier we can have lunch"
"choji i told you that you need to slow down"growled ino
"but ino you know my jutsu reflex on how much weight i have" he reply sheepishly
"enough shall we go or stand around doing nothing" kurenai pratically yelled
"hai all of the replayed at once
AT THE HOSPITAL
tsunade finally got neji stable and was walking out of the emergancy room with sakura right behind her looking completly exhausted
(i wonder have they made thier move already but hes not even back yet why would they attack if he wasnt back)
"master tsunade did you hear me"
"huh?""oh sorry sakura what did you need"
"i asked if you wanted me to go too the waiting room and tell everyone hes condition i can already hear guy and lee talking about the sprit of youth or do you want to do it
"no go ahead im going to head back to my office"
"hai master"
(now back to my office to see if it was akatsuki and if not pff more paper work)
WITH hinata
the group where about a block away form the ramen stand when they saw someone that look like naruto but this couldnt be him this guy was about 6 ft tall their was orange in his cloths but it was mostly black and this person looked strong
but kurenai and hinata knkew who is was
"naruto it me Kurenai naruto? naruto!! are you listion to me"
but kurenai notice something naruto was giving off killer intent strong enough to actually scare her she looked up to see what he was staring at so hard with such malice
her eyes focued on two men wearing black coats with red clouds on them
gaspAkatsuki
"ino inform tsunade-sama choji go get the ANBU and any other remanding ninja around" she shouted
"hai" and they where off
"shikamaru,hinata with me "
"hai"
jiraiya walked next ot naruto cautionly he knew how naruto felt about the akatsuki and he didnt want him to lose control and let out the kyuubi in konoha naruto was still hated by most of the town this would only fuel the fire
"naruto dont get angry you cant afford to lost control you know that right"
"i know jiraiya im trying"
naruto was trying to remember who these guys where one had blonde hair kinda like ino's and his left eye was a camara he also wore a rock headband with a scatch in it the other was hunch over and he had a suna symbol with a scatch going thought it too
"what do you guys want i know you guys aint itachi or kisame werent they assign to capture me or did i scare them away"
the first to speak was the blonde hair guy
"my name is deidara of the rock and this is my master sasori we come to give you a message yay"
"silence deidara i finsh here you take to long we'll give you seven days container to come with us on your own free will or we will destory konoha and everyone in it"
"like hell you will" naruto jumped up nd a resengan ready
but 10 feet from sasori a white bird flew in from of him the he heard some one say art is a BOOM!
naruto was sent into the building acroos the street
Jiraiya had to thyink of something fast he knew after the naruto was going to be angry very angry
"goukakayuu no jutsu"(great firge ball technique) "thier that will by me sometime to find him"
deidara made a bird big eonough for him to ride on and took to the sky while sasori just jumped to the left
"hinata use you byakugan to see if naruto is alright and help him if he's hurt shikamaru use your shadow to to him down"
"tried my shadow wont connect i dont understand it"
"shit now what hey hinata go now"
"sorry kurenai-sensei"
hinata ran over to the building and stood thier she did know what to do (no i have to be strong for naruto) thier was dust floating everywhere she couldnt see anything but she heard something growl
it was low but she knwe she heard it but what could it be she stood thier trying to find the sound but that she way somehting that scared her to death red eyes two red eyes staring right back at her
whatever it was started to growl low and than got loader until it let a roar out and sent such a strong chakra burst out that it actually pushed her back to the other side of the road
IN SUNA
termai ran into his office at full speed
"gaara did you"
"Yes...i felt it naruto uzimaki is in trouble we leave now grab kankurou
IN THE SOUND VILLAGE
sasuke looked to the sky (was that)"naruto"
IN KONOHA
tsunade stood up and turned around so she faced the window
"was that"
"tsunade-sama" ino cam rushing in out of breath
"t.t.tsunade-same akatsuki"
tsunade didnt even say anthing she just jumped out the window praying she wouldn make it too late (naruto please be alright)
BACK WITH HINATA
what was the she could still see the red eyes and what look like three red tails too but she wasnt sure thier was still to much dirt flying around (naruto)
"BYAKUGAN"(must find naruto)she could help but look directly into the red eyes
NARUTOS MINDSCAPE
"where am i she looked around her ankles where in water and thier was a gaint cage in front of her and she saw those eyes again those evil red eyes
"hyuuga why are you here "
"ummm ummm" she just said the first thing that popped in her head
"sleep great one"
the red eyes just stared at her she didnt know if she said something wrong
"as you wish hyuuga"
the next thing she knew she was standing in front of naruto
"naruto"
"Hinata is that you whats going on"
"master sasori what should we do"
we'll reterad for now where about to get some unwelcome company but first i want to make sure he gets the point a metal scorpion tail pooped of out sasori back he looked around for who was going to be his victim
"thier"
naurot saw it a metal tail was heading stright for hinata
hinata was confused (naruto was just in front of me where did he go)
"cough,cough" hinata didnt want to turn around but she had too slowly she turned she could started to cry thier was naruto with a metal stinger sticking out of his bakc
"AHHHHHHHHHHHH!! NAURTO!!"
"rainken" the only thing hinata saw was a bolt of lighing shooting though the steel tail and it falling down
Kakashi was all of sudden standing in front of the everyone with he sharingan blazing and he was pissed
"deidara its time for us to depart"
"hai master sasori"
withy that the two akatsuki members canished "i dont think so"
"you guys just of a sudden run right after you hurt my student your dead!"
kakashi vanished to
jiraiya, kurenai and shikamaru came running to naruto side hinata already had naruto laying on her lap
"jiraiya what sould we do"
"thier is no need to worry the best person who can take care of him should be in a minute kurenai"
tsuande landed in a mini battle field she look around shuiken and kunai where everywhere two building where destoryed and "naruto"
tsunade rean over to where everyone was
"jiraiya what happen to my little one"
"akatsuku"
about that 20 ANBU landed along with all of rookie nin and everyone except neji from team guy
jiraiya suddenly remeber (shit kakashi)
"rookie nine and team guy go after akatsuki kakashi is after them right now rest of you clean up and look for anything those teme's left behind
"Hai" they all shouted
a vein appeared on tsunade's head "geez jiraiya if i didnt know any better i say you where thier hokage"
"hahaha sorry about that tsunade what about the brat"
"im taking him to the hospital right now i want everyone to meet me thier and give me your reports got it"
"hai"
authors note
well thier is my second chapter i hope its alot better than the first one was and hopefully i can make all of the chapters this long of longer from now on until next week