Review Response.
StrawberryMud.
First of all I'm guessing most of the review is about chapter 1?
1: Thanks for pointing that out. Nanowrimo encourages you to pay no attention to spelling/grammer while writing. That can sometimes be a curse(but refreshing). I'll go correct those.
2: It was short wasn't it? Perhaps Holly Short wrote it? 'Holly hits me'. Owch!
I expanded it a bit.
3: I'll add a little something saying what happened earlier. And actually it's not supposed to be a epilogue , just a quick scene.
Thank you. And Nano does kind of drain you.
Geth Hunter99.
I'm not sure what to say really ,other then the best genius's rambles and thanks for the first review.