So! The time has come! For me too pick those lucky six who get to be in
my story! Let me just tell you that it was REALLY hard to pick from all
of the GREAT choices I had. I'm really impressed with all of the
creativity I saw here! It was a really fun experience. As a side note,
all of the charactars (in your reviews) will be removed in case the
people who clean out fanfiction come across this and try to delete the a
I already started.
Okay, time for our...LUCKY SIX!:
-Full Name: Natalie Lily Swanson (Prefers to go by Lily because she does
n't like Natalie too much, and people have called her Lily her whole
life so she got used to it. Lily fits her love of flowers. Only her
parents and occasionally her teachers call her Natalie.)
-Godly Parent: Demeter
-Personality: She's pretty cheerful, but she's also sensitive and can
crumble under big drama. However, she can be a really tough competitor,
and when she's in it, she's "in it to win it". (Her competitiveness can
surprise many people who don't know her too well.)When something
happens she doesn't like, she tries hard to change it. If she cares
about something, she's really passionate about it and stands up for it.
She may seem smart and collected on the outside, but once you get to
know her, you can see she can actually be crazy/weird, too. She'll help
those who need it. She is not an artistic person, and if she tries draw
ing something like a hand, it might turn out to look like a spider or po
tato with straws, instead. However, she does have a good eye for spottin
g beautiful things and to make up for her lack of artistic talent, she
can plant flowers and make them grow to be beautiful and arrange them
nicely. She's a good student and cares about her studies, tending to be
a pretty busy person.
-Appearance: Her height is a bit above average. She has straight brown
hair growing about two inches past her shoulders and a muted tone of
green for her eyes. She has a rounded, honest face. Her hands are tough
from doing a lot of work on planting flowers, etc.
-Clothing: She doesn't like wearing dresses and rarely wears skirts,
settling for jeans,t-shirts, and converse instead. Lots of cute sweat
shirts, sweat pants, and boots. She doesn't exactly care about the brand
s of things she wears. She has a simple silver flower necklace she
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-Background: Her life used to be pretty normal: she had an older
step-sister she got into arguments with, a younger step-brother who like
d annoying her, a dad who was twice divorced (he claimed Lily's mom was
his first divorce, and when he met Lily's older sister and younger
brother's mom who already had them from a divorce, they married, but
divorced after a year). Her dad didn't pay much attention to her because
she was the middle; he went to many of her little brother's baseball
games and her older sister's concerts. However, he didn't go to her even
a result, this made Lily competitive, trying to fight for her dad
's attention and prove to him she can be as good as her siblings. She
came to Camp Half-Blood and found out about her mom when she was twelve,
after experiencing her second monster attack (the first one she tried
to convince herself was a hallucination, but from which she got a scar
on her leg from that she tries to keep covered up). She was supposed to
go on a quest when she was 13, but something happened/went wrong and it
was called off. She goes back to her family after the summer, and he
dad tries to pay more attention to her.
-Romance? Sure, if you find some place to.
-Die or no die? Rather not, but if it's important to the story, go ahead
, I guess.
-Weapon: A type of sword that's light to hold but can do a lot of damage.
-Age: 14
Full Name (First, middle, and last. BE CREATIVE. If I get even 1 John
Smith I swear...): Roshan Alicia Davis (This is my actual name, so I hop
e it's not too ordinary)
Godly Parent: Apollo
Personality(At least 7-8 sentences on the personality folks, the point
is for you to make your own charactar, not for me to do it for you.): A
really random girl who always has something to say. She will always
have the last word, even if she's the only one who heard it. She always
tries to look the other way when it comes to snotty people. She'll be
nice up to a point and after that point she'll rip their hair out and
not blink twice. Other than that, she's always the first one to do some
thing stupid and laugh about it, then want to do it again (sometimes
even if it's deadly). She's always trying to be the loudest (and it gets
ANNOYING), and ALWAYS smiles, even if it's just for the sake of smiling
.She's one of those people who always has their ears open and will go
anywhere and do almost anything to find out what she wants to know. This
doesn't necessarily mean that she'll back-stab a friend, though.
Appearance(Again, fairly descriptive. I don't want just hair/eye color
I want features.):
-Certain Marks on Body (Scars, Tattoos, birthmarks; etc; etc): Nope
-Nationality/Race: She is half Greek, half Jamaican
-Eyes: Dark brown with long eyelashes
-Hair: Jet black. She has long, wavyish hair, but she like put put it in
weaved braids, because that makes it easier to handle. She'll wear it in
a ponytail, with one of those braided around-the-head headbands, or both
.She'll even wear it with top half of it up in a ponytail and the other
half hanging loose.
-Height: 5'2½" (Shortie!)
-Weight: 110 pounds
-Build: She doesn't really have a figure yet, but she's leaning toward
hourglass.
-Other parts of appearance I may have missed: She doesn't really have a
problem with her appearance, but she hates how large her hands are
compared to her wrists. She wears jackets and fingerless gloves to hide
it.
Clothing(Gimme a brand or a link to a picture.):
-Camp: She'll wear her camp T-shirt, a jacket around her waist, and her
older pairs of jeans and sneakers, because she knows how messy it can
get at camp
-Casual: Hot Topic. Just clothes with really funny slogans. She'll
almost never wear a skirt or dress (like, once a year). She wears shorts
, capris, and jeans, but her favorite pants of all time are jeggings.
She usually have a jacket on her back or around her waist, and
fingerless gloves now and then.
-Formal: She'll wear a dress and slippers if it's formal. But she'll
have a pair of sneakers ready if things get serious and she needs more
functional shoes.
-Swimming: She has a light blue and dark purple three-piece. If she's
not swimming, then wearing the skirt if a necessity.
Background(What'd they do before Camp Half Blood... Have they been on
any quests... so on and so forth.): Never before been on a quest before
but is itching to go on one. (But as for how she got to camp...) One
Bring Your Pet To School day, a girl brought her dog to school. The
Mist prevented everyone but Roshan to see that the dog was a hellhound.
It smelled Roshan and attacked, killing a teacher in the process.
Roshan eventually killed it with a piece of sharp wood. The incident was
seen as her fault, and Roshan was expelled. Her mother moved them to
Manhattan, which has been their home ever since. Now Roshan goes to camp
.
Romance?(Optional. But this is after The Last Olympian so don't include dead people. Before Son of Neptune, Just in case you were wondering.): Sure. Either a funny Hermes boy, a sweet Demeter boy, or a smart/nice Athena boy. Better if they were older than her, though
Die or no die? Its a pretty simple question: I'd prefer for her to stay
alive and not dead.
Weapon/Magical Item(Again, optional. I can make up a weapon if needed.):
Bow and returning sonic arrows concealed in a silver "R" on a charm
necklace. She always wears this necklace.
Age: Fourteen (Birthday: October 17th)
-Full Name: Maxwell Chase Raymond
Godly Parent: Hermes
-Personality: He's funny, and he likes to say random things that are completly different from the current conversation. He can get hyper a lot. He's sarcatsic, and bites people if they get on his nerves. He says his mind, and sometimes that can get him in a lot of trouble. He'll try and take you down if you're mean to him, or if you're an enemy. He like music, and if there's music playing during a fight for some reason, he'll fight to the beat.(Yeah idk either) He's outgoing, and good with secrets and solving riddles. He cares a lot about his friends, but if
they need help, he'll stop to think what's in it for me?
-Appearance: Black hair with thick curls that's kinda right above his ears, which are elfish, like all the Hermes kids. Pointed nose, with a mischevious smile. He has tanned skin and bright blue eyes.
-Clothing(Gimme a brand or a link to a picture.) Sorry, no link or anything. This is made up.(but if it were real,I would SO buy it) A white tee that has Rattata on it(ya know, th Pokemon?) And it says 'I like stealing food from stupid travelers' in big letters. The rattata is winking. Blue jeans, and a black jacket that has Pikachu on the back. Converse tennis shoes.(He likes pokemon btw)
-Background: Lived in Oklahoma for a while, until a hellhound attacked him at the age of 10. His mother then realized the danger he was in, and took him to camp, where he was claimed by Hermes after stepping in the Hermes cabin. He has not been on any quests, but will go on one if he has to.
-Romance? No.
-Die or no die? It's time to play, Die or No Die! Lol, anyways, no die!
-Weapon/Magical Item: A silver sword that turns into a pencil.(Yes the p
encil part works!) It has rubys on the hilt. It was a gift from his fath
er.
-Age: 14
-Anything Else: He has a pet rat, Missy. She's an pink-eyed white.
(Aka PEW) also, a border collie named Pip.
-Full Name William Kilmurray (don't you dare take the piss)
-Godly Parent Nike the Goddess of victory (pick him I bet no one else has her down).
-Personality Will stick up for his mates and not take anything lying down. If hit he will hit back. Will not back down still he is proven wrong. So in other words he is stubborn. He seems completely predictable, but right when you think you've figured him out he surprises you. He is extremely loyal, and never would think of betraying his friends. He is well liked for his sarcastic but still kind nature. The only thing about him that annoys people is his extremely competitive nature.
-Appearance Has brown skin and brown eyes. His hair is black and bushy, with a bit of a fringe. His size is average and he has a runners build.
-Clothing Just plain t-shirt, trainers and jeans. And a hoodie if needed. His trainers and jumper are Nike as a joke.
-Background On the way to camp for the first camp he and his dad were attacked by a Hellhound. It was about to kill his dad so he prayed to whoever his mother was (didn't know who he was at first). And his swords appeared (see weapons) and he used them to kill the Hellhound in a was then claimed but didn't know what it meant until he told
never been on a quest but is training all the time so he can go.
-Romance Okay why not?
-Die or no die? NO DIE. If you kill me I will haunt you and go by the
name John Smith.
Weapon/Magical Item Two short swords that can shrink into the hilt called. They are called honour and glory. One says "without honour" and the other says "there is no glory". See Background for more information.
Name: Faelyn Grace Smithson (goes by Gracie)
Godly parent: Nike
Personality: Really competitive, like REALLY competitive, she cant stand loosing. If she hasn't recently lost in anything, she's like on high cheerful, creeps most people out :/. She's ridiculously stubborn and determined, so if she's made up her mind about something, you have no hope. She takes change well because her brain is physically unable to look on the dark side of things. She is innocent almost to the point of naivety. She is a RUBBISH liar, but she can be persuasive when she wants to be. She is also very defensive of her friends, though she finds it easier to go give the person who hurt the ass whooping of a lifetime than actually comfort them. (is that enough?)
Appearance: Chestnut brown hair that reaches to the small of her back and is wavy (normal wavy, mind, not glamorous wavy), her dads Italian so she has a kinda pale olive skin tone. Pale blue eyes, almond too big mouth. A little short for her age.
Clothes: do I have to have a photo? She just wears average Hunter gear, y'know silvery jackets and combat boots and all that? I don't have that much of a clear image in my mind, sorry D:
Background: (20 years ago) Brought up by ex-Olympic fencer, who now runs sport shop in Washington D.C. She was close with her dad, and his friend Ian, like really trusted them both (home schooled). One day when her father was out, Ian tried to rape her (I had to give her a reason to hate men for all eternity) she was rescued by the Hunters, who offered her a place. At first she refused, thinking of her father, but when she found out Ian had murdered him, she joined. Did awesome hunter stuff for about 20 years before Artemis ordered for a Hunter to be placed in camp to keep an eye on them (she doesn't exactly trust the males
running the place), and Thalia chose her.
Romance: None
Feel free to kill her off, but I'd be happy if I could see at least
three chapters of her.
Weapon: A sword, fte?t?, meaning Winged (her mum has wings), it's a
weird one, cause it's a lot thinner than usual, not thin enough to be
a fencing sword, but yeah. It can be conseled as a gold Alice band but
with turn back into a sword if you press on the angel wing printed on
the side (I love the concealment thing, don't you?). If you feel like
it you can make up a story of how she got it, cause I'm certainly too
lazy D:
Age: 33, has been a Hunter of Artemis for twenty years, so still looks
and acts 13.
Name:Kolby Hayden Stanko
Godly Parent: Ares
Personality: Fairly arrogant, like all Ares kids. He is a bit of an attention hog due to the fact he was neglected as a kid (Read Background), but he does give other people a time to shine when he's feeling generous. He's good at almost everything, but the one thing he loves is football. He was planning on being a pro football star before he came to camp half blood.
He tries to teach the boys at CHB football, but they just don't like it. He loves Boondocks, Mac Miller, and mainstream music. He's a typical jock, but he has a should have more girls swooning over him, but he's a little sexist without meaning to. (Again, read backgroud :)) He's sounds like a typical Ares kid, But a way he is different is that he cares for his friends and is kind to them and really supportive.
Appearance: Spiky blonde hair, and electric blue eyes. Tan skin, He loves the beach :) Small/pointed nose, medium sized mouth, and a little sticky-outy ears. Blindingly white teeth. Muscular build, like all Ares kids.
Clothes: Usually just basic black gym shorts, or sweats. Lifeguard jackets occasionally, a lot of construction shirts. Ocassionally his old football jersey.
Background: It used to be just him and his mom. He loved her more than anything, then she got married to a guy with 6 kids. He was swept to the side and forgotten about. Always being outdone, never being the first to do anything anymore. He couldn't take it much longer, so at 10 years old he ran away for negative attention. He intended to come back until a cyclops attacked him. He had to live on the streets until a satyr found him and brought him to camp.
Die or no Die: Maybe... I'm OK with it...
Romance: Why not?
Age: 14
That's it for today folks! The I'll try to get the first chapter up by the 20th or the 21st! Need to get my laptop back :) Anyways, much love do you all and sorry if you didn't get picked, TRY AGAIN!
-Jazz