Author's Note - okay this is as far as I have gotten in my original writing normally at this point the movie/story was supposed to skip to a completely different set of characters to explain their origin and then revisit this one later so that eventually the two sets of characters stories cross paths... so do you want me to skip to the next set or continue on with these characters and explain what happens next in their story and if so I would like to get your input on what should happen next and if I like your ideas I will take them into strong consideration... thank you so much for taking the time to read my stories/script and I look forward to your reviews and ideas... thank you.