Reviewer Response Time! Although I would like to point out that I'm cutting out any character submissions from reviews in order to save room. One other thing I'd like to say that I will still be accepting characters until the last chapters of my story. I'm not sure when that'll be yet, but I'll let you know if I'm not accepting characters anymore.
Late Night Angel 2011-06-08 . chapter 4
Hey this is really cool! It is amusing and I always love OC stories. I really like Daichi! He's cute and the calm is kind of funny. I understand why girlslike him. Are you still accepting characters? I would love to submit one!
Thank you! I'm happy that you find my story amusing. And I'm also glad that you like Daichi; it took me a while to think of a good main character for this story. And as you already know, I'm still accepting characters.
l2s2 2011-06-08 . chapter 4
I think it cute story but need to have more of the main characters in it good luck
Thank you too! And I've already talked to you about main characters being in the story.
Disclaimer: I do not own School Rumble in any way, shape, or form. That is owned by Jin Kobayashi. If any other references are made, it is owned by it's respective owners.
Today, I present a new character that was submitted by l2s2; Luna! I'm not going to post the character description, because you'll find out what she's like from reading the chapter anyway. So let's get this started!
Class 2B, Final Class of the Day
Daichi, Hiroshi, Kiyoshi, and Kaz all sat together, as usual. Kaz was a bit antsy today, because he needed to make sure that Hiroshi didn't find out that Yumi likes Daichi. It was kind of hard to do so, because Yumi and Natsuki kept on looking over at the group and laughing, then they would turn away. They kept this up for about five minutes.
"I can't take this anymore! I'm saying something!" said Hiroshi.
He was about to stand up when Kiyoshi grabbed his shoulder and had him sit back down.
"No, there's no sense of going up to them." said Kiyoshi.
"But they keep on mocking me!"
"What exactly are you two talking about?" asked Daichi.
Fear came over Kaz. He needed to change the subject and fast. He quickly looked around the room, trying to find something strange to help him in this time of need. He caught sight on something rather odd and that he was now honestly curious about.
"Hey guys, who's that?" asked Kaz.
He pointed to a girl in the corner of the room. She had her legs crossed and was in a meditating stance… while floating. She wore the usual school uniform, but had changed it in various ways. She had shorts instead of a skirt, wore black stocking that went all the way up to the shorts, wore the brown jacket like a vest, leaving it opened up. She also left the top button of her white shirt unbuttoned. She turned the bow on her neck into a loose hanging tie, wore a black chocker with black, fingerless gloves and several black bracelets.
"Oh, that's Luna." said Kiyoshi.
"Can someone explain why she's floating?" asked Kaz.
"Who knows. She wasn't here last year, but was with our class on the first day of school. No one knows what she's like or really who she is." said Hiroshi.
"And you were never curious as to why she floats?" asked Kaz.
"…Not really." said Daichi.
The bell then rang. Kaz wiped his head, relieved that he was able to avoid such a bad situation. They couldn't know what was really going on. The worst part would be that he would be directly in the middle of the fire set between Daichi and Hiroshi if Hiroshi ever found out about Yumi liking Daichi. This is because Hiroshi suspected Kaz knew what was going on and he would be able to put two and two together and that would be the end of everyone's friendship. He spent so much time sitting there, thinking, that he hadn't realized that everyone else left. He noticed that the Luna girl was still in the room. He went over to her. She was still meditating and floating.
"Hey. School's over; you can go home now." said Kaz.
He didn't get a reaction from her. She continued to sit there, meditating.
"Hey! Earth to Luna! School is over!"
Luna's eyes open and she fell from her meditating stance. She lost her balance and fell on top of Kaz. At first, she had a look of shock on her face. Kaz looked into her eyes, in which one was blue and the other was green. Soon, her face of shock changed to a smile, and both of her eyes became blue.
"Sorry about that, Luna." said Kaz.
The two were now sitting up, looking at each other.
"Luna's not here right now, please leave a message after the beep… beep!" said Luna, poking Kaz's nose as she said beep.
"Umm… I got to go now." said Kaz.
He tried to stand up, but Luna grabbed his arm and pulled him back down.
"But you haven't introduced yourself to me." said Luna, as she began to cuddle next to Kaz.
"I-I-I'm Kaz. Could you please stop that?" he asked.
"Hello Kaz, I'm Lulu."
"Lulu?"
"Yes, and I think we're going to be good friends." said Lulu, as she tickled his chin.
This sent a chill up Kaz's spine he quickly ran across to the other side of the room, going out the door. As he ran out, he ran into someone.
"Who do you think you are?' asked the person.
Kaz looked up, and instantly recognized him. He was Harima; the baddest guy around. Everyone spoke of him in fear. He was warned to avoid him at all costs; he was recognizable for always wearing sunglasses and sporting a small moustache and goatee.
"I'm sorry, it's just…"
Lulu then came out of the room. She looked at the two. Her eyes got wide with excitement, and she ran up to Harima, hugging him.
"Kenji! I haven't seen you in forever!" shouted Lulu.
"Hello Lulu. When did you start coming here?" asked Harima.
"I came here just for you, Kenji. Why else would I be here?" said Lulu, as she began playing with Harima's goatee.
Harima turned toward Kaz, anger in his eyes.
"What happened in there?" asked Harima.
"I was talking to my friends when the bell rang. I then started day dreaming and I didn't realize that everyone had left. Luna… Lulu… whoever she is was still in the room, so I got her to stop meditating and she fell on top of me. She then went all gaga eyes on me and was all over me! I went running out of the room and that's where you came in!"
"Ah, I see. C'mon Lulu. You too, Spaz!" said Harima.
Kaz decided it was better to not object and go with them. As they were walking down the school halls, Lulu held tight onto Harima's arm, rubbing her head against his arm.
"Where are we going?" asked Kaz.
"To the candy store." said Harima.
Sato's Candy Store
The three walked into the store; candy was everywhere. They walked over to the counter and saw the owner of the store.
"Mr. Sato?" shouted Kaz.
"Hello, Kaz. I wasn't expecting you today. It's been a while since I've seen you, Harima. I take it you're here for the usual."
Harima nodded. Mr. Sato went and got a bag full of sour heads. He gave it to Harima, who paid for it and held it out to Lulu. She just smiled at him.
"If you want me to eat the sour head, you have to put it into your mouth." said Lulu.
Harima still held out the sour head, ignoring what she said. Lulu sighed and ate it from his hand. There was a change in Lulu's face. Her eyes went back to one being blue and the other being green. He bowed to Kaz.
"I'm so sorry for earlier!" she said.
"Umm… it's ok. Thanks for apologizing, Lulu." said Kaz.
"I'm not Lulu; I'm Luna."
Kaz was confused.
"Let me explain. She has this thing where she becomes someone else if something happens to her." began Harima.
"So she's bipolar." said Kaz.
"Actually tri polar. There's three of her. Normally, she's Luna. One blue eye, one green eye. Happy go lucky person; she's rather sweet."
"Oh, thank you, Kenji!" said Luna.
"But if like a guy falls on her, or something perverted happens to her, she turns into Lulu. Her eyes turn blue… and well, you saw what happens."
"What about the last one?" asked Kaz.
"If she gets anger, she becomes L. Her eyes will turn green. Don't let that happen. She has no control over herself it that does happen." said Harima.
"What do I do if she becomes L?" asked Kaz.
"Once again, don't let that happen. You see, now I know that she's in the same class as you."
Harima leaned towards Kaz in a threatening way, handing him the sour heads.
"Since she's been friends with me since middle school, I find her safety really important. If she ever gets in trouble or gets hurt, I'm holding you responsible for it. If I'm not around, you need to be watching her; protecting her. I expect you to walk her home after school everyday and keep her safe. You don't want to know what will happen if I find out you did anything to hurt that girl. Got it?"
Kaz nodded really fast.
"Good. I'll see you two another day." said Harima.
"Bye Kenji!" shouted Luna.
"So are you ready to go home?" asked Kaz.
Luna nodded. The two then headed out of the candy store. Kaz still had the large bag of sour heads.
"Luna?"
"Yes, Kaz?"
"How did you know what happened when you were Lulu? You apologized for what you did. Also, why do you meditate?"
"Well, when I become Lulu, it's not like I'm completely unaware of what's going on. It's more like I'm watching a T.V. As if I'm watching what Lulu or L does. I can't do anything to stop it, but I see what happens. As for the meditating, while I'm doing that, I'm able to talk to Lulu and L. I see them as sisters to me, since I'm the only child in my family."
Kaz smiled. The two continued to walk to Luna's house. Clearly, a friendship was being born between the two.
