This is my first ever NCIS, fan fiction. I have had this idea for quite a while but after watching the season 5 finale it inspired me to write this. Please review, I love to know what you think.
Gibbs stood by Jenny's grave as they gently lowered down the coffin. He felt the eyes of his team on the back of his head. They knew he wouldn't break down here in front of them, they presumed over a newly opened bottle of whiskey.
Everyone knew Jenny and Gibbs had feelings for each other; it was a common bet around the head quarters when they would finally do something about it. But standing and watching as her coffin was lowered into the ground he wished he had done something about it. He looked up in to the sky and tried to ignore the tears burning behind his eyes.
He looked to his left and saw Abby with tears running down her small pale face, and Ducky trying to quietly console her. To his right was his team, Ziva had tears in her eyes, so did Tony and Tim. He looked around at the people at Jenny's grave side; it was a quiet ceremony with only her closest friends. As far as Gibbs knew she had no living relatives.
Then he saw her, a quiet girl he would have estimated around 16, staring at the coffin with tears streaming down her face. He looked around trying to see if there was anyone with her, No one. He looked back at her. As if she knew he was looking at her, she looked up and looked him straight in the eyes. He recognized her instantly; he felt his heart beat increasing. It was the girl in the picture on Jenny's mantle piece. The girl Abby had made out of the pictures of Jenny and he.
He was looking at his daughter; he could feel it in his gut.
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