Hey, erm regarding a review that I can't reply to from "Elizabeth Whitwood"-
My grammar- excuse any mistakes I make in my grammar but I don't tend to beta my own work, I use a pre-written storyline for Everlasting, so I keep track of events and tick them off a list.
Thought to my writing- I'm not sure exactly what you meant by this
OOC- My fanfiction is generally supposed to be out of character. Excuse any huge flaws in it, but I wanted to keep it different to the original DeathNote. I wanted this as an effect for them to not act like themselves in general, so yeah. Sorry if it doesn't appeal to you.
I noticed you reviewed for just chapter 7. did you stop reading then, or keep going? The story does develop.
To all the other readers, an update is coming tomorrow night. Thankyou all for your reviews!!
Love,
LustAndVengeance