Hey guys, just woke up and figured doing this is much better than writing an essay. So, here's Bill and Fleur, naming Victoire...


"Bill, where are you?"

"Kitchen."

"Are you eating again?"

"Psch… no… of course not!"

"We had supper ten minutes ago."

"I know… I was just nibbling on leftovers."

"Humph."

"Okay, okay… snuggle time."

"Good."

"I don't understand why you insist on this."

"I like it."

"Yes, but just sitting here on the couch and snuggling…. is a bit… different."

"We talk about our feeling too, don't forget that."

"Gee how could I forget?"

"Well what would you rather talk about, Bill?"

"What about baby names?"

"_"

"Fleur? We don't have to."

"Shush, I'm thinking."

"Oh."

"I've got it… Isabelle."

"Why?"

"It's my middle name."

"Oh."

"You don't like it?"

"I think we should just get more creative… dig deeper."

"Well what did you have in mind then, Bill?"

"Nevaeh?"

"Don't make things up."

"I'm not! It's 'heaven' spelled backwards."

"That's ridiculous."

"That's American."

"Let's be serious, Bill. You're mother will want her first grand child to have a nice name."

"Oh, don't bring Mum into this."

"Don't whine."

"Fine. Fleur, what about Victoire?"

"Where'd you hear that one?"

"Your mother suggested it on their last visit. I forgot to tell you."

"Now you're bringing Mama into it."

"So?"

"Well, no matter, I rather like Victoire anyway."

"Then it's settled."

"Not exactly… we need a middle name."

"Oh yeah."

"Did Mama mention anything else to you, Bill?"

"No."

"_"

"_"

"Well, what about something English? So she has a French name from me and an English name from you."

"Did you have anything in mind?"

"I always thought Abigail sounded pretty."

"I like that one too."

"Victoire Abigail Weasley… it has a nice ring to it."

"Yes… and our mothers will be pleased."

"Oh, gee, you're so funny."

"Funnier than you are, Bill."

"Uh huh, sure."


I wanted to share this review with you all:

I don't like odd numbers either, but I think six chapters is a bit anti-climatic :P
"For instance, isn't seven..."
"Seven! One is bad enough, but to rip the story into seven pieces..."
I'm just kidding - I actually liked this story, which is more than I can say for most of the others on this site. Nice work.
Just one suggestion: a name next to the words would be useful, as I sometimes lose track of who's talking.
That's not a reflection on your story or writing style, but rather my own reading style ("power-reading") brought on by years of "power-reading" hundreds of lines of code in a short amount of time working to a deadline. It's a hard habit to break.
I haven't read your other stories yet, but I'll be sure to give them a glance sometime soon.
- Quis Custodiet Ipsos Custodes

It made me laugh for nearly fifteen minutes ad even when I stopped I couldn't stop smiling and would chuckle to myself at random moments. Don't get me wrong, though, all of your reviews make me smile, because it makes me happy to know people are reading my stuff.

I just have one question… Would any of you like there to be names next to the dialogue? Think about it.

Oh also, I didn't Fleur an accent. I wasn't sure how. Anyone have advice for that? I suppose I could ask my French teacher considering it was his first language but that might be a little odd. Maybe I should just pay more attention in class.

Well, enough insane rambling from me. Thanks for reading.

~EM~