Ok first chapter, PLEASE tell me what you think.
Icefall's P.O.V.
"Now that we're all here, what do we do about Sparkclan?" Winterstar asked.
"I don't believe they pose that great a threat." Nightstorm stated firmly.
"Don't pose a threat! They killed three cat's in Shadyclan!" Banestep hissed from beside me.
"A medicine cat an two elders, big deal any cat can kill a medicine cat and elders." Nightstorm hissed back.
"Leafbreeze was an excellent fighter." Willowfrost insisted.
"Enough! Arguing will not save lives!" Lyxnstar snapped.
"Indeed, there's also the matter of getting in contact with Starclan, why have they not warned us?" I said to the other cat's around me.
"Perhaps they are upset with the lack of thought put into certain choices lately." Nightstorm said eying Banestep, who bristled but said nothing.
"Nightstorm, if Starclan was angry with my choice of deputy why would they kill a Wetclan kit?" I said sternly.
This seemed to effect Nightstorm, for she glared at me but before she could say anything, Eagletalon spoke up, "We all know that there are only meant to be four clans in the forest, so Sparkclan must be a threat." he said.
"Plus Sparkclan gets their power from dark force, like an evil Starclan." Littlefire mewed.
"Yeah, there's now way we can untainted Moonscare." Goldenpelt said.
"So what do we do? Wait for Starclan to decided that it's time for them to give us a hint as to how to get rid of Sparkclan?" Nightstorm snapped irritability.
"Are you trying to say Starclan has deserted us?" Blackcloud mewed, an edge to his voice.
"No, I'm trying to say Starclan can't tell us how to defeat something that they have absolutely no control over." she responded.
"Nightstorm's right, there no easy way out this time like with the comet's sickness, there is no far away savior." Banestep said.
"There, has to be something." I said, raking my brain for anything that could help.
"True, Icefall's right we have to do something," Sandflower piped in, "perhaps we should attack Sparkclan."
"There's no way on to rouge island that doesn't risk lives, only rouges can swim across." Eagletalon mewed.
"Ok so, what dowe do?" Sandflower asked.
"Maybe, until the threat of Sparkclan passes we should stay in close contact." Willowfrost suggested.
"That would be wise, considering how ruthless Sparkstar is." Littlefire agreed.
"Why sould we? The clans have faced perils before and we never had fequent meetings." Nightstorm mewed.
"We have never had a threat from an evil psycho kitty, and his demonic clan!" Banestep snapped.
"Well… so? Wetclan should not have to aline it-"
"Enough Nightstorm, last time I checked, I was the leader of Wetclan." Swiftstar snapped.
"So every different moon fase we'll meet here? On the island." I asked trying to divert the tention.
"Dustclan will be here." Lynxstar stated.
"As will Wetclan." Swiftstar said giving her deputy a warning glare.
"Flameclan will as well." Winterstar mewed.
"And so will Shadyclan." I mewed, then the four different clan leaders, deputys, and medicine cat split toword there own territories.
Sabriel's P.O.V.
I looked at the kit's playing together, Stonekit, Cedarkit, Pumakit and Crispin were on one side while Meadowkit, Branchkit, Bramblekit, and Russetkit were on there other, they were pretending to be clans at war. Just then I notice Sabryna, and Spark's only daughter were missing from the bunch. I looked around, my eye's scanning the clearing, I saw Whisperkit play fighting with Dustypaw, I spotted Spark or Sparkstar, himself laying on his back near by in a patch of sunlight, warming his belly, then I saw the small tortoiseshell pelt of Sabryna creeping toward the blood red tom, I felt panic rise as I remembered hearing that he'd killed kit's before. I felt my heart stop as I watched Sabryna pounce on Spark, "Sparkstar! I got you!" she squeaked.
Spark let out a grunted and opened his shadowy eyes, lifting his head to look at Sabryna, then after staring at her for a heart beat he lick her between the ears, "So you did." he mewed.
"Won't I make a great warrior for Sparkclan someday, if my mother lets me?" she asked, her amber and green eye's shining with hope as she slid off his belly.
"If she let you, then yes you'd be a great warrior." he mewed, and for the first time I noticed Spark's unreadable gaze softened. I stood and padded over to them.
"Come now Sabryna, let Sparkstar alone." I mewed to her. With a last admiring glance at Spark, she scampered off to join Whisperkit, "It's seems you've won the affection of my daughter. You never cease to amaze me" I mewed sitting beside him.
Spark stood and stretched, "Gotta keep you on your toes." he mewed and padded off to join Cyspin. I watched him padded away, it always seemed as if there were different cat's all locked inside Spark.
Eagledawn's P.O.V.
I quietly padded through the forest, slowly, until I spotted the familiar blue grey pelt of Cyspin, next to him was the blood red pelt of Spark, "Greeting Cyspin, greetings Spark." I said dipping my head to the two.
"Hello Eagledawn." Cyspin mewed.
"Hi…" Spark said, his dark eye fixed on the sky, he seem distracted by something. Then after a few moments of silence Spark shifted his gaze from the sky to me.
"Eagledawn," Cyspin addressed me, "Spark, and I have been talking about you, we both agreed that we want you to join Sparkclan." he said.
I felt my eye widen, I was shocked, "Of course we don't expect you to make a decision now, you go ahead and think it over." Spark said his eye once more resting on the sky and his voice giving away his distraction.
"Yeah, we have something to attend to so you make you desition and we'll be back tomorrow." Cyspin mewed.
As the two of them walked away, Spark said, with out turning, "Don't bother showing up tomorrow if you don't want to."
Ok that's the first chapter, let me know what you think, also I am going to try to involve cats that have ne even been mentioned in the past. Also to those who are interested, I am starting another story, check my profile for details, it probably won't be up for a while.