Okay, I have one thing to say. Every time I put out a new chapter I get always new people putting the story on their alerts.
But I haven't gotten a review from just about ALL of them.
I checked my Story Traffic and about 89 people read chapter five! But do you know how many people reviewed? Four. Only four people reviewed. Before I checked the traffic I was gunna say that Star Wars: The Clone Wars does have a smaller fan count than something like Percy Jackson, but now, I think people are just getting lazy. I mean come on! Most people here are because they like to write, and want to get better at it! If no one tells us what we did wrong, or what we did right, then how are we supposed to get better?
Guess what I did. I did the math, and around a thousand people have clicked on Revenge, Rewritten yet I only have 18 reveiws? Most from the same readers over and over again? I should threaten to cut off the story, but then I would feel guilty because I do have people who like this story. But still, it kinda makes me feel bad people!
Anyway, now that I'm done with my rant,
Onward to the Chapter
Ahsoka and Obi-wan jumped out of the ships along with about half a squadron of clones, including Rex. From what Anakin said, the only place he could be was in a metal structure that was about two floors high with no windows, and had red lava streams flowing around it casting a red shine on the dark metal. It lay in a valley of rock below them.
Closer observation would reveal that on one of the sides in the second floor was a large spilt in the metal. I looked as though many blasters had shot in one place made it, although why that would be made was completely beyond the Jedi and clones. However, it was there that Anakin was being held in chains.
"Okay men!" Ahsoka yelled. "Begin descent!" Everyone began to crouch and run down the hill, so they could get to the building fast but still have a chance at being undetected, even if that chance was still very small. Once at the bottom of the valley and hiding by leaning against the wall Ahsoka gave the orders.
"Master Skywalker is there somewhere, we need to get in, get him, arrest that woman if possible, and get out as soon as possible. We don-," Ahsoka stuttered for a second, the dark thoughts of what condition her Master be in. She pushed them away and bucked up, trying to look confident as she spoke.
"We don't know what kind of condition he is in. We need to get him out as soon as possible." She said. All of the clones nodded.
"Lets's move then!" She said, maybe a bit too harshly. Obi-wan gave her a look and she immediately calmed a bit.
Everyone ran together through the winding hallways before they hit fork.
"Rex, pick a few clones and go with Ahsoka, I'll take the rest." Obi-wan said. Rex called over a few clones by the names of Flash, Oddball, Echo, and Fives before standing at the ready with his blaster set and ready.
*The Cell*
"So, Skywalker. Are you ready to die?" Isha asked. She looked totally calm, but Anakin could sense the eagerness, the satisfaction that this was giving her. She wanted so badly to kill him that it was all she could do to not stab him right there.
Anakin wished there was something he could do. He defiantly didn't want to die. He had a life that he wasn't finished living yet. But with his brain so muddled from lack of oxygen, he couldn't think of any way to stall her. Anakin was just closing his eyes, accepting his fate, when Isha's comlink went off. She growled and ignored it, before turning the taser on and watched it power up. The comlink went off again. Isha roared in frustration before dropping the taser, standing up, and fishing out the comlink before yelling, "What is it?" into it.
"S-sorry to i-i-interrupt you Isha bu-but we have a problem. The J-Jedi are here." The voice sounded small and stuttered with fear, probably with what Isha would do to them. Anakin had felt that first hand.
"WHAT?" she roared.
Isha looked at Anakin with suspicion before walking over to him. She glared at him before punching one of his slahes, making Anakin cry out and fall to the side. He lay there panting while dreading what Isha would do. Suddenly, Anakin could feel the anger and hate towards him multiply by a thousand as Isha stood up and held his black comlink her hand. The light was still green, signaling that the connection was still live.
"Y-you lead the Jedi here?" she said quietly.
Anakin just smirked. Isha looked at him and he suddenly wished she had already killed him. Her eyes were dark, so dark, and they held more anger hate in them than a Sith Lord, and Anakin bet she could give one a run for their money. The hate and anger that were in her eyes were meant for Anakin, and the waves that had been coming off of her now had the strength of the most powerful tsunamis, making him flinch. Isha ran towards Anakin and kicked him in the gut. Anakin gagged and then choked, he spit up blood and then looked up at Isha, she came running towards him for another kick.
"Forward to the right!" Ahsoka said before they all set off running. Strangely, Ahsoka didn't run into anything while trying to find her way through the building. She had expected a few bounty hunters, some assassin droids, maybe even some kind of huge monster. Instead, all they got was a whole lot of metal walls and labyrinth-like hallways. Ahsoka couldn't help but think that something was up.
The group had to stop when they almost ran into a huge steel door. The clones fired their blasters at it but it did not open. Ahsoka activated her lightsaber and stuck it through the door before cutting out a circular shape. Once she was done, she stepped back while Rex kicked out the circle. They all then proceeded to jump through it to the other side. Once through the group continued running.
Ahsoka stopped and held up a hand, telling the others behind to stop as well. Ahsoka sensed something just down the hallway. She crept slowly, with her lightsaber ignited. She pushed in the door quickly, and held her lightsaber in a defensive position, only to find nobody was there. But when she walked in she found a large hallway, with a new door every two feet or so. She sensed someone in the door closest to her and she went towards it cautiously. She pressed a button on a control panel and the door opened.
Ahsoka jumped inside and saw a figure laying face-down. She ran towards it and turned it over by the shoulder. The figures clothes were cold and wet. The figure was a man, and he was dead. But he was not her Master. Ahsoka sighed in relief. She hoped with all her heart that that was not how she would find her Master. Ahsoka looked at her and recoiled when she saw that it was covered in blood from the man's clothes. She looked him and saw that all of his robes were soaked with blood. Ahsoka shivered and wiped her hand off on the wall before going back out into the hallway.
"Sir?" Rex asked, "Where do we go next."
Ahsoka thought for a moment before closing her eyes. She reached out with Force, trying to sense where her Master was. There. At the end of the hallway. But there was another person there too. A person filled with anger and hate.
Ahsoka pointed to the end of the hall. "That way, quickly and quietly!" Ahsoka said. The mean nodded before stealthily running to the end of the hall.
About half-way to the hall Ahsoka heard a loud scream. It made her want to shiver and it made the hairs on the back of her neck stand up. And that scream belonged to her Master. Everyone stopped being stealthy and just full out sprinted to the end of the hall way. Upon reaching it Ahsoka slammed the button on the control panel and ran into the room with her lightsaber ignited.
Isha was holding Anakin by wrapping her arm around his neck, and then holding a taser in her other hand near his heart. Anakin was slowly turning paler, being unable to get air. It seemed Isha was having trouble keeping Anakin up. She looked like a pretty strong chick to Ahsoka, but Anakin was super tall, and had lots of muscle, he was not a light dude. But Anakin did not have the strength to support himself from what he had been through this week. He probably hadn't eaten since before he had been kidnapped.
Ahsoka tried not to look, but she saw that her Master's injuries were extensive, and that it would be a while before he was in tip-top shape again.
Isha pulled her arm up higher, cutting off any meager air supply Anakin had. His throat was restricted and he started choking. Ahsoka tried not to look horrified but she knew she was failing.
"Come any closer, and I'll electrocute whatever life is left in his useless corpse." Isha threatened. Ahsoka looked and saw she right, the taser was on full velocity, even just being touched with the thing for a couple of seconds would be enough to make a grown man become paralyzed. A grown man who's been tortured for the past week? Ahsoka didn't even want to think about it. The clones would fire their blasters, but by the time a shot hit her, Anakin would be either dead, or more severely injured than he already was.
"Put your weapons down on the ground. Now!" She yelled when they didn't comply. Isha pulled her arm tighter, making Anakin start to turn blue. His hands were scratching at her hands but her gloves were so thick it didn't do anything. Ahsoka and the clones reluctantly put their weapons down.
"Now, I'm going to - ah!" Isha yelled out as a blast fired and dropped Anakin. She collapsed and had her hands clenched around her now blackened calf. Ahsoka turned around and saw Obi-wan and the other clones.
"Well you turned up just in time!" Ahsoka said to Obi-wan.
"I try my best." Said Obi-wan.
"Uh, what about General Skywalker over there?" Asked Echo. Obi-wan and Ahsoka perked up and ran over to Anakin, who was lying on the floor choking, still unable to get enough air. His hand was at his throat and his other hand was twitching, as well as his legs. Obi-wan and Ahsoka got on their knees, unsure of what to do. Flash came over and knelt down as well. Ahsoka noticed the medical markings on his armor.
"Ahsoka, grab his legs, you have to keep them still."
"Um, okay." Grabbing her Master's ankles was harder than she thought, since they twitching so wildly, but she finally managed to do it and she kept them down to the ground with all her might.
"General Kenobi, grab his arms and help me pull him against the wall." He said. Obi-wan nodded before complying. Once against the wall Anakin started to try to choke out something but Flash told him stuff it.
"I'm sorry General Skywalker, but this is going to hurt." The clone said, before abruptly pulling his arms back, and plunging them towards Anakin's chest. Anakin heaved hard and coughed which made tons of blood came drooling out of his mouth. It was sickening and Ahsoka had to look away so as not to lose the tiny lunch she had been forced to eat.
"No! She's getting away!" Rex yelled. Everyone by Anakin (but not Anakin himself who was so out of it that he could've mistaken Ahsoka was his mother calling him to the Great Beyond)
Isha had hopped out the crack in the wall and was limp-running behind the nearby factory. A couple of clones had hopped out after her but Isha had such a head start from everyone watching Anakin that they were gaining no ground, even with her limping. Surprisingly, Isha could limp pretty fast.
"It's no use Rex, call them back, Obi-wan said dejectedly. Rex sighed and told the clones to go back to the ship.
Anakin seemed to come out of his daze and looked up at Ahsoka while he was panting heavily. He had slumped lower to the ground and he tried to push himself up a little bit, but much to his disappointment, he did not have the strength to do so. Ahsoka and Obi-wan slowly put his arms around their necks, while Flash came forward and grabbed his legs gingerly. Despite trying to be careful when lifting him, Anakin still groaned when they had him up.
Rex navigated the way back through the building and led the way back to the ship. While Ahsoka, Obi-wan, and Rex were carefully, but still trying to go quickly, Anakin mustered enough strength to lift his head (which had just been dangling for a while) and look at Ahsoka and Obi-wan.
"I knew you would find me." He said quietly, before promptly passing out.