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Chapter 6 of Remember Me?
The three turned around and saw a small girl with a sadistic smile on her face. She was grinning at them and held a knife in her hands. Her smile was cold and it seemed dead.
"Welcome to Tsukuyomi!" the girl said with a grin still on her face. She stepped closer to Naruto, Sasuke and Karin. Her grin widened with every step she took.
"You put my Okaa-san through so much. She has tried to do so many things to you. She gave you her heart and you just tossed her aside like she was just a worth less tool that you were done with!" the small girl said to Sasuke.
"You left her alone on a bench. You let her spill her heart out to you, while you didn't even care. Even worse you got her pregnant and left her alone and dead inside. You were known as a hero in this village to every citizen in Konaha but to me you are a coward. You are pathetic and dead weight to the team!" the small girl said as she went on and on insulting the Uchiha in every way known to man.
Sasuke just stood there dumbfounded. A little girl stood in front of him and was just insulting him. Unfortunately for the little girl his Uchiha pride wouldn't let that happen. Sasuke pinned the small girl into a wall that appeared out of nowhere. "I wouldn't be talking like that if I were you, you dimwitted girl." Sasuke snapped.
The little girl glared at Sasuke and sent him flying across the floor. Sasuke's face was covered in dirt as he passed out from the shock of electricity that the girl held in her hand when she punched him. Naruto was still in shock and couldn't react in time when Sasuke was falling to the ground. Naruto and Karin just stood there shocked by how much force the young girl had in her small arm. Not even Naruto had ever seen her that pissed. The next few seconds were a blur as the three of them fell to the floor and their vision blurred from black to white. Then it went black…and stayed that way.
Sasuke turned his head and saw his hyper active blonde teammate and glared at him.
"Idiot," Sasuke mumbled. "NARUTO WAKE UP YOU DOPE!" Sasuke said louder than he has ever said anything before as he kicked the blonde off of him.
Naruto's whine was drowned out from apiercing scream from across the room. All heads snapped out of what the did when they heard the sound. Karin was glaring at the noise as her grogginess was beginning to wear off.
"Kami-Sama! Ayamari! Stop that this instant!" a female voice said in an angry tone.
'Ah that's right. We are in Tsukuyomi. Where could Ayamari be?' Sasuke thought as his memory of how he got into Tsukuyomi began to come back to him. Before he could think any other thoughts, he was answered by another scream that distinguished itself as Karin's. Sasuke ran to the area he heard the scream.
When he arrived there he saw the small girl Naruto called Ayamari, with red eyes and three black commas in the center of them. Her gaze could send a stream of piercing fear down one's spin causing them to be immobilized for life if she wanted them to. The girl was like the devil herself. Heartless and cruel to any human being other than herself and someone she loved.
"You recked my Kaa-san's life. She gave you everything and all she asked for was for you to stay!" Ayamari said rudely.
"Her problems are not mine!" was Sasuke's reply. His reply sent Ayamari's temper pasted freakin pissed off!
"NOT YOUR PROBLEM! SHE WASNT YOUR PROBLEM! I'M NOT YOUR PROBLEM! THEY ONLY REASON I DIDNT GO AND HUNT YOUR SORRY BUT DOWN IS BECAUSE OF HER! SHE TOLD ME THAT REVENGE WOULD ONLY MAKE ME LIKE YOU! YOU RECKED HER LIFE, AND ITS NOT YOUR PROBLEM!" Ayamari screeched at her so called father.
Sasuke'e eyes bulged out of his eye sockets. "What do you mean, Your not my problem?" Sasuke asked Ayamari slightly confused by what she said. Ayamari just stared at him like he was an idiot.
"I'M YOUR DAUGHTER YOU BAKA!" She screeched at Sasuke. Sasuke's eyes widened at the news he just heard.
"You have made us go through so much. You hurt the only person that didnt give up on you more than you could ever imange...You broke Okaa-san's heart so much that she just finally gave up putting the pieces together again. You didnt only break you bond to this village. You broke your bond to your friends. To your daughter. And you broke her heart! YOU ARE NO BETTER THAN ITACHI-SAMA HIMSELF!" the small girl said as her temper was flaring and began to reach its peak.
"I don't think I caused as much damage to her or your life as you claim!" Sasuke snapped back at the girl trying to defend himself. ( he didnt even notice that ayamari said itachi-sama...he is to caught up with his pride and trying to defend himself!...)
The little girl let out a cold and icy chuckle. " You want to see what you did to her and to me! Because if you want I will personally show you!" Ayamari said with her temper reaching its peak. Sasuke only nodded in response.
Then Ayamari's eyes began to spin rapidly and Sasuke was tooken back into the pasted...
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ok i want to know what people think about not only this chapter but...
1) how Ayamari is reacting to seeing her father for the first time in her life.
2) how sasuke reacted when he found out Ayamari was his daughter...
and
3) WHAT DO U THINK HAPPENED THAT CAUSED AYAMARI TO GET MANGEKYOU SHARIGAN???
please sumbit your review because i wanna know how you think Ayamari got mangekyou sharigan..
and it pains me to say this...but i will not type any more chapters of remember me until I get 32 reviews for the entire story so far..
now i am being pretty nice on that seeing how one of my favorite authors TACOCAT ( she is the author of YO HO )
requested that she has at least 10 reviews for every chapter she only has 6 chapters and she has 85 reviews while i have 6 chapters and i only have 22..
now i am being really nice asking for only ten reviews...please review...i do accept unknown reviews..
but if you do send an unknow review i would like you to put a name in the review so i can think you on my next update
With much thanks and 3,
Yami Uchiha
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