this is just a piece of the next chapter, it will be very NSFW...as you can see. review please and tell me if this style is good.
The red haired beauty finally slides off her lover and onto the soft grass. A refreshing little breeze cools off her sweat drenched body, falling over her bare skin like a thin cloth of silk. The stars above twinkled as the soothing sounds of the forest bring peace to the homes of the kokiri, lights and loud music turning off now that the sound that the kokiri were trying to drown out had stopped.
"I think we might have been a bit loud" said Malon, turning onto her side and watching link just gaze up at the stars. She runs her slender fingers through the grass, releasing a few of the sprites that fly around during the day, there shimmering made link break from his pensive moment and turn to gaze, not at the stars in the sky, but those two emerald stars he loves more than anything. Link brings his hand up to the side of malon's face and cups it, his thumb running across her cheek.
"I don't care if the entirety of the kingdom heard us, all that matters is that it was us. Not me, not you, but us."
Malon smiles and presses her lips to link's, the warmth of her body and the softness of her lips had link already back in his fighting spirit. His hand slides down the figure of his beloved, feeling a shiver from her as the cool air blows across her bare breasts, erecting her nipples. The hero slides his hand up to the gratuitous mounds on his wife's beautiful body, giving them a gentle squeeze before pinching and twisting the erect teats. The attention coaxed a moan from malon, her eyes full of lust and determination.
"ready for round two" she says, a smirk settling onto her face. Link grins back and positions himself above malon, leaning in and kissing her hotly. His hands continue to massage and twist on the farm girls ample breasts, squeezing harder than before just to increase the pleasure. Malon runs her hand down the front of links chest and stopping at his erect member, giving a gentle tug to get the man's attention.
Link gives a little chuckle and thrusts into the warmth of his lover, the forcefulness of his actions alredy sending malon into a frenzy.
again, just a piece of the chapter, kinda ends randomly on this. review please