Okay i would like to say...a few things...
1. Thank you all who reviewed...which really werent that many...TT i hope you guys didnt hate the last chapter...which you probably did anyway...
2. Seriously if you dont like the story give me some hints on what you would want...and i will TRY i not perfect, but i will try to make the story satisfy your needs.
3. I am now officially doing birthday chapters...
a. birthday chapter are not the characters birthdays...although they could be if you guys want...
b. birthday chapters an when one reader tells me when their birthday is and i type/write a chapter for them!
c. they will be a character for that chapter on that day...XD...
4. what do you think of the birthday chapters? is it fair? do you like it?
5. this chapter has some funny moments!
"Who are you to judge me and the life i live?
I know I'm not perfect and I don't claim to be...
But before you go pointing your finger at me,
make sure your own hands are clean"
Remember Me? Chapter 15
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Recap: Naruto's POV:
I stared at my friends. I was shocked that Sasuke has not even tried to fight back against Sakura. I was always curious to why. Why was he not fighting back? Was he refusing, thinking he would hurt her? What was he doing?
I was confused. More than usual. I mean come on! Uchiha Sasuke...the guy who always threatens anyone who even lays a hand on him IS REFUSING TO FIGHT A GIRL! I mean you have to assume something is up right?
Either way I was confused. I mean Sakura was TRYING TO KILL SASUKE UCHIHA! And Sasuke WASN'T EVEN FIGHTING BACK? I mean wouldn't that cause a million questions to pop in your head, making you confused?
Anyway I was staring at my friends, and watching their battles.
Their battle wasn't a normal battle at all. It was more of a battle of Love, Hatred, Respect, and Dominance.
Naruto's POV:
Their fight continued on for a good couple hours. But both were getting tired, and growing weak. A deadly aura surrounded my once cool headed pink haired teammate. While a calm, cool, and frightened aura surrounded Sasuke.
What could Uchiha Sasuke do. He wouldn't hit his former teammate. That is against his code. Against his ego. Against his own heart. Although Sasuke, won't and might not ever admit it, but he does, POSSIBLY if he will ever get passed,
his egotistic pride, see that he DOES IN FACT love HARUNO SAKURA! Then again...it's Sasuke Uchiha we are talking about. You know I don't see why he calls me a dope, If I am so stupid then why can I, me the one who is SOOOO dense see that Uchiha Sasuke, THE UCHIHA SASUKE, Loves his ex-pink haired teammate! I'm offended that he thinks I am that stupid! I mean sure I thought babies came from flying birds, until Hinata-Chan told me where they really come from;
and I also thought that all the letters in the aphelbet stood for different flavors of ramen, but still, EVEN I NARUTO UZUMAKI THE NEXT HOKAGE CAN SEE THAT UCHIHA SASUKE LOVES HIS EX-PINK HAIRED TEAMMATE!
Anyway; he is marrying Karin! KARIN FOR PETES SAKE! WHY WOULD HE WANT TO MARRY KARIN! SAKURA COULD PROBABLY DO IT BETTER! After all she did have his kid...so you know something happened between her and sasuke! Unless Sasuke decided to go gay since his incident with Sakura. You know I can actually see that happening...Sasuke feeling so depressed that he just did "it" with Sakura and leaving; Him never wanting to see her again; Him also thinking that he could never, and well never fall for another woman; Thus him turning gay and marrying Karin! I mean look at her! SHE HAS MAN SHOULDERS AND BUSHY EYE BROWS LIKE BUSHY BROWS...is that a mustach on her lips? OH MY GOD IT IS!
Author's Chat with the Characters:
Yami: Okay Naruto a little over board on Insulting Karin...
Naruto: You typed it! And it is true, I mean come on! IT LOOKS LIKE A RAT DIED ON HER LIPS!
Karin: DOES NOT!
Ayamari:...-bursts out into a fit of laughter!-
Sakura: ...-laugh-...OH...-laughs-...MY...-laughs-...GOD...-laughs-...THAT...-laughs-...IS...-laughs- HILARIOUS!
Karin: WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING AT ME!
Sasuke: hn...
Yami: Uchiha your to stotic...have some fun...
Sakura: ITS UCHIHA SASUKE THE ICE PRINCE. FUN TO HIM IS DOING TAXES!
Naruto: OR READING HOW TO GET MORE TAXES DONE!
Ayamari: or trying out some tips from a magazine like "HOW TO LOSE YOUR ANNOYING GIRL FRIEND IN TEN DAYS"
Yami: -raises eyebrow- Nani? He would read that?
Ayamari: YUP! LOOKIE HERE! -shows everyone the magazine!-
everyone but sasuke: -LAUGHS SO FREAKIN' HARD THEY FALL OUT OF WHERE THEY ARE AND ON TO THE FLOOR!-
Sasuke: -frowns- annoying people...-leaves-
Karin: SASUKE-KUN WAIT FOR ME! -runs to sasuke and trips-
everyone (but Sasuke and Karin ): -LAUGHING AGAIN-
(BACK TO STORY )
Normal POV:
Sakura's and Sasuke's battle still raged on. Both growing weak. Sasuke has already used up most of his chakra by using his signature jutsu that was known through out most of his whole clan: Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu ( great fire ball technique ) and his ever so famous Chidori. He was tired not only from how much chakra he used, but also at how many hits he has taken by Sakura. So far he counted:
6 major hits.
5 cuts that if they were any closer to a vital organ, the would have been deadly wounds.
4 bruises on his face.
3 minor cuts on his arms and legs.
2 kunais sticking out of his right arm.
1 gapping hole on his left shoulder where Sakura had thrusted his katana blade into him.
Yes Uchiha Sasuke was counting everything they were doing. So far he has counted their steps ( they are at 300,567 each ), and both of their wounds.
He has a 21 wounds, while she has one. Which she can heal anytime she wants, especially since it isn't as bad as his. Unfortunately she was winning.
She had the fewest cuts, the most chakra, and wasn't as tired as he was.
Karin's POV:
I was waiting egearly for MY Sasuke-kun to finish off this battle and come and sweep me off my feets so we can revive his clan! -Sighs Happily- Oh, how I would love to be craddled into his arms and have his lips pressed softly against mine. I would love his hands to travel farther down my body...
-Sakura's interruptions into Karin's POV-
Sakura: OH PLEASE. WE ALL KNOW THE ONLY REASON HE CHOSE YOU WAS BECAUSE YOU WERE WILLING TO GIVE YOURSELF AWAY!
Karin: -smirks- So were you. But he chose me!
Sakura: HONEY, LET ME TELL YOU SOMETHING...EVERYTHING HE TELLS YOU NOW, HE TOLD ME FIRST. SO STOP THINKING YOUR SO SPECIAL. BECAUSE HONESTLY YOUR NOT! YOU NEVER HAVE BEEN. AND YOU NEVER WILL BE!
Karin: ...
Sakura: -smirks- Now who is the one with the come back? Hmm?
Karin: ...
Naruto: -interrupts the cat fight- Sakura-chan Sasuke-teme is still a member of our team!
Sakura: Naruto there are 11 letters in b.e.s.t.f.r.i.e.n.d...
Naruto: sooo...
Sakura: but there are also 11 words in B.A.C.K.S.T.A.B.B.E.R!
Yami: ...
Naruto: Saku-Chan are you okay...
Sakura: -sighs- yeah, Yami you can continue with the story now...
Yami: okay Sakura-Chan...
( BACK TO KARIN'S POV )
Karin's POV...Again:
Anyway where was I, oh right. I would just love to have Sasuke-kun All over me. To be honest him sweating was turning me on. I mean come on!
His shirt drenched in his sweat, and his lips looked so moist I could just eat them up right then and there! OH MY GOD HE IS TURNING ME ON!
I really am starting to crave his touch right now! KAMI SAMA WHY CAN'T THAT PINK HAIRED WENCH TAKE A HINT AND LEAVE! OUR LIFE WOULD BE SO MUCH BETTER OFF WITH OUT HER, HERE IN KONAHA, ON THE SAME TEAM AS MY...YES MY SASUKE-KUN!
I felt like just killing that Pink Haired tramp right where she stands! Oh that would put her in her place for sure! I can almost imagine her Happy-Go-Lucky attitude squashed as she sees Sasuke-kun kiss me once his fight with her is over. That would surely crush her!
Sasuke's POV:
I was panting hard. I have never had to work so hard just to survive. Never had I expected I would have to defend myself against anyone besides my brother.
Especially not against Sakura. I mean what happened to the girl that promised me everything. All that she could offer me. What happened to the girl that said she would always love me, and stay by my side? What happened to her?
Those thoughts kept appearing in my mind over and over. Everytime her fist landed a punch on my body. Before I knew it I was coughing up blood. Just my luck.
I am really beginning to miss the old Sakura. She might be weak, but at least I never had to worry about her trying to kill me! -Sighs- What am I going to do?
I can't hurt her, Tsunade will kill me. Along with Ino Yamanaka, who is apparentally dating Shikamaru Nara, And Naruto will kill me for sure, seeing how Sakura and him have formed a brother and sister kind of bond with each other while I was gone.
Man this is getting tiring. I never thought I would ever fight against Sakura Haruno. Not ever. I mean come on, she was always so weak and defensless. She was never worth praise, or even time back then. But now, she is worth everything. Men buy her drinks just hoping to get inside her pants. She is a respected doctor, and head of the Anbu medical squad. She has surpassed the 5th Hokage who is the Legendary Sannin,Tsunade. She has surpassed Kurenai, Asuma, Gai, Kakashi, Anko, Ibiki, Shizune, Iruka, and Ebisu all while I was away. She has TRUELY become worthy enough of praise and attention.
Author's Chat with the Characters:
Sakura: O.O SINCE WHEN DOES UCHIHA SASUKE GIVE COMPLIMENTS!
Sasuke: I don't, I never will, So don't expect any!
Sakura: -glares at Sasuke- Uchiha...
Sasuke: hn...?
Sakura: Do you have a wish at all?
Sasuke: hn; no, why?
Sakura: Because if you did that was your death wish, YOU FREAKIN' TEME I HOPE YOU DROP DEAD RIGHT NOW!
Ayamari: -sighs- Can we please go back to talking about Karin's rat that is on her face?
Karin: I DO NOT HAVE A RAT ON MY FACE!
Naruto: THE DAY YOU DON'T HAVE A RAT ON YOUR FACE IS THE DAY I QUIT EATING RAMEN!
Yami:...we all know that is never going to happen!
Sakura and Ayamari: -nods in agreement-
Naruto, Sakura, Ayamari: OKAY YAMI YOU NEED TO GET BACK TO THE STORY!
Yami: okay okay i will...
Rin No Sakura/Sakura's POV:
I lunged towards Sasuke. How hard could it be to just back down from a fight and admit defeat? I mean come on, he already knows he lost this fight right?
I mean it's not hard to tell, especially since he is panting extremely hard!
"Face it! It's his dumb Uchiha Pride that wont allow him to back down!" Rin No Sakura exclaimed.
"-Sighs- I know that. But still he has to up sometimes!" I argued.
"Why don't you just throw in the towel?" Rin asked me with curiousity burning in her voice.
"It's simple, love has taught me to lie. And to never give in." I replied coldly.
"Mhm, what is the real reason? I am you, I know when you're lying!" Rin's arguement continued, much to my dislike.
"Love has to me to lie; That is not a lie. But it has also taught me to never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game. This is a game to me, which I shall not lose.
He is my prey, while I am his predator!" I growled with deep satisfaction in my heart.
"This battle isn't only to show him I am not weak anymore. It's also to show him that I don't need him IN MY LIFE! I am perfectly fine with or with out him. I still don't need him judging me no matter what!" I continued. " It is a fight for respect, dominance, trust, and revenage for everything he has done, and I will not lose!"
"Seperate the space...
between
love. and. lies."
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