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When Alice got to us, she was crying dry sobs.
"Alice whats wrong" I asked a little demanding. That second Edward took off running. I went after him with Alice on my trail.
"Edward whats wrong?!" I said. I could swear he had gotten paler.
Barely managing to say anything between his dry sobs which Id never heard before he said "It's Renesmee"With those two words I ran faster than Id ever had before. All I could think was not my angel, not my Renesmee.
When I arrived at the cottage everyone: Carlisle, Esme, Jacob, Rosalie Emmett, and Jasper where in the cottage. On the sofa was Renesmee, and Carlisle inspecting her. She was even paler than Edward.
"Carlisle" I said Just when Edward and Alice arrived "Whats wrong with her" Esme came over and gave me a big hug and whispered to me she'll survive. I just starred at her and then at Edward and demanded to know what was going on.
In his place Rosalie answered my question. "I was taking care of Renesmee while she was sleeping" she said "She had her hand on my cheek. She was dreaming of all of us. Then her dreams slowly started to vanish and then they would appear, so I went to go find Carlisle. Then her heart beat would speed up and the stop. That's when I started to get really worried"
"Then"Carlisle continued the story"I examined her. I think her bodys reacting to the venom in her system and doesn't like it. I personally think she is either going to stay human or stay vampire but not in between"
That's when I broke into dry sobs. I turned around and Edward hugged me. "She'll be okay Bella. She'll be okay."
"Another thing" Carlisle said " If she stays human I don't think well be able to change her into a Vampire again. If her body reacts to the venom like this now ………Imagine it if she were human.
"You mean if she were to stay human I would have to watch my daughter…….die,and I would get to live for the rest of eternity." I said. "I'm afraid so" Carlisle said. And with those three words I felt my heart break. I think Edwards did too. We both looked at our daughter that just layed there still with her chest rising then falling, then not coming back up for a while.
Me and Edward stayed like that all night long, just watching our daughter struggle to stay alive. The others had started to leave gradually after we had heard the news to give us some privacy. I still was crying tearless sobs. Edward was next to me on the sofa, hugging me. "She'll be okay" he kept telling me. I finally responded " I feel so hopeless watching her just laying their struggling for her life"
"Honey there's nothing we can do" He said.
"I know" I said " I just wish we could do something. I turned my face toward Edward and he kissed me.
With that kiss Renesmees eyes opened.
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