Okay... so Here is Chapter 22 I don't down twillight and Im at school lol so I gave you this earlier then expected... so I might update later tonight if I get alot of REVIEWS!


Chapter 22

Jasper's POV

"What?" Aro asked.

"Jasper why would we?" He asked again.

"The commander is the female version of major, she and Alice and every newborn will tear everyone apart if they aren't careful. Right now commander and Alice are the most powerful people the castle right now. The only people that will survive in this room would be me, Char, peter and possibly Alec and Jane. It is just best if we stay in this room." I told him.

"What if people that you said go out and take out the newborns only." Marcus suggested.

"I don't know it's too risky." Peter told him. I could feel his nervousness.

"How is it risky when he just said they would survive?" Aro growled.

"Because if Major comes out, then it would be a possibility that major and commander would fight for position." Peter told him.

"And?" Jane asked.

"And the only one would survive. Which means one will live with the guilt that they killed their mate." Peter explained. I felt the scared and saw the flinch come from Marcus. I know how he felt about this subject. I'm guessing but he probably imagined what h would feel like if he had taken her life.

"I think we should go out there and help." I told them.

"Jasper, that isn't the best Idea. What if you lose control?" Peter asked.

"Trust me I know. But I know but I don't think I will. I will keep myself in check." I told him.

"Jasper you shouldn't risk it." Aro said. He was only thinking of his daughter. I could tell but now isn't really the time for that Bella isn't out there, its commander. She is a newborn. She has more chance of killing me then I do her. With as much control she has over her power as she has she could kill me with the blink of an eye.

"I have a plan." I said and they all looked up at me.

"We all go out there."

"Are you crazy?" Peter asked.

"Listen then you can choose." I told them and they all nodded.

"I think we should split them up and get them all into small groups and take them down. Keeping me as far away from Commander as possible, and somehow we need to figure out how to get them to come to us." I told them.

"That's a great Idea. Why don't some of us go into the room and get the newborns attention and then lead them to where everyone else is?" Aro asked. We looked around the room. Someone was missing.

"Where is peter?" I asked mainly Char.

"He… is uhhh gone." She said.

"Char what the fuck is he doing?" I yelled. She felt some pain and then started sobbing.

"I don't know he said he would be right back." She sobbed.

Major's POV

I growled. My, it was good to be out. "Did he say where he was going?" I asked.

"No he should be back by now." She sobbed. "I am going after him." I growled.

"You can't you will let major out and kill the Commander!" Aro growled touching me. Why is everyone in this fucking castle always touching me? I growled again.

"Let go of him Aro. He doesn't like to be touched by anyone other than his mate." Char told him. At least one of us has some sense in this god damn room.

"What?" Aro asked confused.

"Major is already out." She told him. Then looked at her and bowed her head and started sobbing something is wrong with Peter and not his psychoness either. When peter and I were in the war he and I made a pact to one another. That if something was to happen to us than the other would take care of their mate. I told him I would take care of her and if Peter isn't alive then I will.

"Char…" I whispered lifting up her chin. I could feel the fear radiating off of her. which I could understand thinking about the last time touched was one of the worst times in her vampire life.

"I'll find her. It will be okay." I told her. I didn't know what to say to her. Nice isn't really my… style. But I tried she is my best friends mate. He would do the same for me.

"I'll bring him back Charlotte." I didn't say alive because that wasn't a promise I could guarantee keeping.


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