Okay so it is exactly 12:46! lol I have been up all day with 1 hour of sleep but Im all good. I am writing the next chapter now which should be up friday. if not sooner... But make sure you REVIEW for me so I can no ur thoughts.

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Chapter 23

Major's POV

I looked back at them and laughed. They all looked scared out of there mind. I wish I would have caused of that. Before I could go out Aro grabbed my arm. Fuck what it is with everyone in this touching me. I am done with being fucking nice. I grabbed Aro and slammed him against the wall.

"I have had enough with you touching me. You touch me again and I will have no problem ripping your fucking throat out. Now I am going to go out there weather you like it or not. "I growled and slammed the door.

"Peter you idiot. I'm going to kill you!" I yelled. I ran over to him and crouched and let out a warning growl. They all started to run towards me in a rush so I grabbed the closest one too me ripped her head off. Then ripped the next one in half took a lighter out of my pocket and threw it at the next. He began to scream in pain and ran into the other newborn which started him on fire. I chuckled Newborns are so stupid. I then ran over to peter.

"PETER!" I yelled.

"Wake up! You're missing the party." I told him.

"Come one peter, your mate is going crazy without you. I am going crazy. Peter, please wake up. I can't do this without you!" I say. For the first time in my life, I frighten. I might have lost my best friend. I have to take care of his mate if he doesn't recover. WHAT THE FUCK! BELLA is giving me feelings. She is going to be the death of me.

"Peter I need you! Your mate needs you! We both won't be able to live without you. I need someone to grab me before I kill someone for no reason. You can't just leave us both like this." I told him. OH FUCK I sound like a fucking girl. What the hell? I looked around more newborns are coming into the castle. I can hear them. I went to grab Peter and I saw her she was smiling in my face.

"Commander." I whispered.

Charlottes POV

He is gone. He can't leave me alone. I love him. He promised me he would bring peter back to me. Something is wrong. It feels so awful and wrong.

"I am going out there." I said reaching for the door. Marcus then grabbed my arm. Major isn't the only one with the no touching rule in our clan. The three of us don't like to be touched by outsiders.

"You can't go out there by yourself. You're not thinking clearly." He told me letting me go.

"Look I know you're supposed to be wise and stuff but my clan is out there. They need my help and I'm going to go out there whether you like it or not. Major should have been back by now with Peter… or what is left of him." I told him whispering the last part.

"I need to go help him if he dies because of my mate. It won't make me feel any better but at least he trying to do good rather than being killed because he was a murderer. "I told them. They all backed away from me and I opened the door and walked out. I ran to the throne room and stopped when I heard talking.

"Commander." He said.

"Yes major." She said. I took a breath and ran into the room and stopped. She was smiling at him just staring at him. They were at least 2 feet away from each other. Major was squatting by peter and Commander was standing over Peter's body.

"NO!" I screamed.

"Don't move Charlotte. You take another step and I'll take his head off." She threatened. Major and I growled. That's it that's what Peter was talking about. They are both so hot headed that they will fight each other to get their message through mate or not. I then looked at major and ran to him grabbing his throat, knowing he would eventually catch on.

"Give me my mate or I'll kill yours." I told her. They both growled. He grabbed my wrists but my grip just tightened.

"Do it!" She said. She had peter by his hair, he was still unconscious.

"Peter." I whispered.

"A mate for a mate, you take mine I'll take yours without even moving but unlike you I have a backup plan. So go ahead I don't need him." She said.

"You're lying; you need your mate just as much as I need mine except maybe more. Bella and Major and You and Jasper the four of you are completely opposite from each other but you guys need each other no matter how much you guys hate it. If major dies then Jasper does to which means your power will get weaker. " She said smiling at me while stepping on my mate, which made me growl.

"Do you honestly think I need them to live? I am the most powerful vampire in the world. I can kill anyone or bring them back them back to life. I don't need have the shit the legend says I do. I used to be human so that bullshit about balance and what not is just shit to piss me off. There is a lot about me that you will not get or understand." She told me.

"Then let us understand and help you." I told her letting the major go. All she needs is someone to talk to and be there for her and to help her.

"No one can help a killer." She said looking down. Before the Major and I could say something a small voice interrupted us.

"That's where you're wrong, we can help you just like we helped major." The voice said.

"Peter." I said running over to him. I stopped right by Commander but she just moved aside.

"Oh my, baby why would you do something so stupid?" I whispered to him.


Okay so How did you like this chapter? little low key... but it's still good... nd yes I am so good.. lol I am very energtic right now I have had 1 hour of sleep and it is now 12:50 now and I am out!

-JaziD

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