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Chapter 3. Travelling (Aka's POV)
Paco was already awake. He was sitting on the edge of the rocks with his legs in the deep water.
I had to look twice before I could identify what he was looking trough ; a pair of binoculars.
Paco! I yelled, where did you get that?
It just came floating by! He yelled back, I was looking if I could find the owner.
A minute after that, Paco yelled a big "woaah!" and jumped in the water.
Did you find him? I yelled.
I started jumping from rock to rock to keep up with him.
He is over there, Paco said and pointed at a mountain.
Here take the binoculars and tell me were I must go.
I nodded, and he started to swim.
My eyes made contact with the glass and I started looking for the mountain pointed at.
More left! I yelled after a while. You're almost there!
I started jumping farther on the rocks, and tripped.
I screamed and one of my legs landed in the water.
This stupidity made my dress rip and my face splashed wet.
Paco looked around after my scream, and chuckled.
Y'allright? He asked.
Ahh, yes.. I answered.
Then something grabbed my foot.
A big slaughterfish which obviously hadn't had any breakfast yet.
I screamed again, this time in pain.
Paco grabbed his dagger and trew it at the fish.
But the distance was way too big and the dagger fell in the water.
Then an arrow came flying and killed It.
My eyes shot to the direction it came from; the rock we stayed on earlier.
The eyes of a young Breton girl from about the age of 12 were peeking from behind it.
She was pretty.
Her hair was long and curly and her face was not as sharply formed as a normal breton.
Actually, the only elf-feature she had were her ears, which wasn't even usual for a half-elf to have.
I stared at her, but when she saw I was looking, she ran away.
Wait, come back! I yelled.
She pointed her bow at me.
Don't come closer, the girl said with a small voice, if you do, I'll kill you just like that fish.
She walked backwards, her bow still stretched.
We'll meet later if it's fate, she said, and she ran away.
Paco and I looked at each other blankly.
Then he said; don't move, I'm sure there is plenty of fish left which like to eat feet.
I nodded.
I'll go look then, he said and jumped over the rocks.
I guess he Didn't want a slaughterfish hanging at his toes either.
Hey Aka! Paco yelled, It's a man! I told you so!
Paco lifted the upper body up and dragged it towards me.
Take a look for yourself, he said.
I looked over Paco's shoulder, it was a middle-aged man which looked just like the little girl I had seen earlier.
Is he alive? I asked.
Dunno, Paco answered raising his shoulders, Let's leave him on that rock-island back there.
After that we should go after the girl, I said, there must be some path over there.
He nodded and dragged the man towards the island.
I followed, stepping on the stones, carefully.