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Leonardo and Mikey made their way down the path until they came upon a village. They hid in the bushes and looked on to see what type of creatures lived in this place. They saw that there were not only humans but other creatures as well.
"Well it looks like we will fit in here Leo" Mikey said.
"yea, lets just hope the people here are friendly" Leo replied.
"Good, now lets go, im hungry, maybe they have a phone and a pizza place" Mikey said as he rubbed his stomache. Leo just shook his head and chuckled as he walked out of the bushes towards a building that had music playing.
When they reached the building and open the doors, they seen it was a tavern. As they walked in everyone stopped what they were doing and looked at the two vistors. The first thing they seen was not two turtles, but the weapons they carried.
In the back of the tavern a man in a hood looked on as the two warriors made their way to a table and sat down. These two are warriors of some kind but who side are they on, the hooded man thought to himself. Leonardo and Mikey sat down and looked around to see that no one was really paying that much attention to them until a fat man walked up to them.
"Well what will it be?" the fat asked.
"Uh, what do you mean?" Mikey asked the man.
"I mean what will you have" the man said.
Mikey just looked at the man with a puzzled look. The man shook his head and looked at Leonardo and said " what will it be buddy?". Leonardo looked at him and aswered "how about some meat or fish for both of us".
"Ok, comming up" the man said and then looked back at Mikey then back to Leo and said "not very bright is he?"
"You have no idea" Leo replied as he chuckled.
"Hey!" Mikey whined as the man laughed and walked away.
"So what do we do now Leo?" Mikey asked his older brother.
"Well we have to find out where we are and then see if there is any way of getting home, besides I am sure Donny will figure out a way to get us back" Leo answered.
Back in New York, Donny was in his lab trying to figure a way to locate his brothers but was having a hard go of it. He dicided to call on Leatherhead for some assistance. Leatherhead arrived and began to help Donny come up with a way to track Leo and Mikey, wherever they were.
"Donnatello, do you think we can track them through the vortex that appeared in the alley?" Leatherhead asked.
"Of Course, just because the vortex is gone it still left some radiation and that can be used to find out exactly where it came from. We just need to get some to the alley and take a sample of the radiation of the vortex and we can backtrack where the vortex orginiated from" Donnatello answered.
"I will go to Rapheal and Master Splinter while you get started on a device we can use" Donnatello told Leatherhead.
"Go ahead my friend, I will get started right away" Leatherhead said and Donny made his way to the dojo to find Raph and Splinter.
Back at the tavern Leo and Mikey were eating their meal when five men dressed in white armour walked in. Leonardo noticed that everyone tensed up when the men walked in. they were definitly soldiers of some kind but he did not reckonize the red batlike symbol and their chest plates.
"Be on your guard Mikey, I got a feeling this is about to turn ugly" Leonardo told his brother.
"Aww man, I hate it when you say that' Mikey said and he put one hand on his weapons.
The five men walked over to a table where there was 3 guy sitting. The soldiers then grabbed the three men and threw them across the room and then sat down at the table. One of them looked over to see a man playing a harp and decided to have a little fun.
"I don't like that song" the soldier said as he then raised a short metal rod and pointed it at the man and pressed a button. the end of the rod shot out a laser that cut the harp strings. The man looked over to the soldier and raised his fist at them.
"You dam Roughians" the harp player said
"What did you call me" the soldier replied.
"Teach him a lesson" another one of soldiers said. The first soldier grabbed the man by the shirt and lifted him off the ground and was about to throw him when all of a sudden a ninja star hit his arm and caused him to drop the man.
"Who dares strike me?" the first soldier asked around the room.
"We do, I think it is time for you to leave this place" Leonardo told them.
The five soldiers began laughing and them all of them stood up and walked towards the two vistors. Leonardo and MIkey drew their weapons and took fighting stances as the five soldiers approached.
"So you two want to fight, we will teach you a lesson as well" One of the soldiers said.
"I think it will be you that will be learning a thing or two about manners" Leonardo told them.
Just then the soldiers attacked and Leonardo and Mikey jumped in seperate directions to split the men up into groups. Three of them went after Leonardo and the other two went after Mikey. One of the men lundged at Leo but he simply just side stepped the man and delivered a strong kick to the man's back that sent him crashing into the wall behind Leonardo, knocking him out cold. Mikey used his speed and his nunchucks to disarm his first opponent and then landed two strikes to the man's head with his nunchucks and that made the man crumple to the ground, out cold as well. The second of the soldiers that Leonardo faced tried to use is laser weapon but before he could fire Leonardo jumped and cut the weapon in half. Leo then placed a three kick combo into the man's chest and head that sent him flying into the wall behind him.
The last two soldiers met up and turn towards the turtles and raised their weapons towards them. Leonardo took a defensive position in front of Mikey.
"Now you two will pay for interfering with soldiers of the Horde" One of them said. They were just about to fire when a arrow went through their weapons and stuck into a wall beside them. The man in the hood stood up and removed his hood. He had red hair and wore a chest plate that had a red heart in the middle.
"Thanks, we got it from here" Mikey said as he and Leo ran and jump kicked the last two men through the door that was right behind them, the two soldiers then got up and ran off.
"Come, this way, I will take you to a place that is safe" the stranger said.
"Come one Mikey lets go" Leo said as they followed the man out the door and into the woods.
When they got a little peace into the woods Leonardo turn to the man and asked "Who are you and where are we?"
" You are in Etheria and my name is Bow, I am one of the leaders of the Great Rebellion" Bow said.
Next chapter comming soon