Well, I have to say I am very happy with the story, even though the ending feels a little unsettled, like I rushed it. I am also very happy that I successfully completed a sequel and didn't quit halfway through it! I changed the title to A Brother's Blood, because it really all comes down to Snowpaw's decisons and Blazepaw's devotion to protect his family. A Father's Love didn't quite work with how the story turned out, because originally I had planned for Snowpaw to kill Acornpaw or Moonpaw, and Flarestrike take up the blame. That's not how it ended up. Anyway, you're probably wondering, what the heck! Why would Snowpaw attack and nearly kill Moonpaw! This is how it went:
The second set of mentors sent Stormpaw and Icepaw out shortly after the other four in different directions. Stormpaw decided to go the opposite direction his mentor had assigned him, preferring to hunt where Snowpaw was. Stormpaw ruins Snowpaw's hunt, and Nightowl pushes him to jumping on Stormpaw, reminding him of the rush with the fight with Moonpaw. Stormpaw actually ends up kicking Snowpaw's butt until Nightowl jumps on him, shredding him. Snowpaw becomes angry with Nightowl and chases after him, and Stormpaw finds Applepaw. And it goes from there... You might notice that Snowpaw nods to something invisible(Nightowl) as they were beginning to fight. Nightowl's line, "Finish what I started. Draw his blood, you know how much power it gives you!" Anyway, thanks to my miniscule amount of readers and reviewers, couldn't have done it without you!