Darkest Temptations

by Katrina-H-Creates

Caroline and Klaus must put their differences aside when they decide to flee Mystic Falls together the night the hunter arrives in town. Now free of her past and disapproval of her friends, will Caroline allow her growing attraction to Klaus to be explored? And what drastic measures will Klaus take to protect her when Tyler sets out to hunt them both down?

7. DT Message

Hi readers

I've had some time to think about this story and I'd like to re-write it again as it feels rushed, already they're in Vegas and there has been no build up between the characters for a honeymoon to be taking place.

Don't worry I have no plans to take down the story Darkest Temptations nor do I plan to change the main plot line, I merely wish to go back to the start and build a deeper connection between each of the characters involved.

So I'd really like to hear back from fans on this. I have a few things in mind and it would be great if I could get some feedback from you guys.

QUESTIONS FOR THE READERS

1. Readers seemed to enjoy the slow build on the night they ran away to Utah, people enjoyed reading about the lengths that the girls went to ensure they disappeared completely. Do you want a slower build throughout that night? More mention of the cleaning involved, point of views from Klaus, Elena, April and Caroline?

2. Should we have a point of view from each of the girls while on the road to Utah?

3. Should we have a point of view from Klaus on the road to Utah?

4. Are the wedding rings a good idea? (Or would you go about the set up of that differently?)

5. Do you want a point of view from each wife as they shop with Klaus for their homes?

6. Should any of the wives be more flirty then in the original story? *Please don't just say yes for Caroline I know I know lol*

7. Is there anything you would have liked to have seen happening in any of the first few chapters that didn't?

8. Would you like to hear more from their friends efforts to find them?

9. Readers seem to love April/Klaus and obv Caroline/Klaus but what element do I need to get readers more into Elena/Klaus too?

10. Do you all like that Klaus kisses each wife every day out of respect?

Feel free to PM any ideas or suggestions you might have, I'm going to take my time with this re-write so I'll keep this message up over the next few days. Remember there is no idea too big or small.

I'll begin writing soon and remember nothing will change about the main plot.