"Sakura's Guy Burns"
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Chapter 8, pt.2
"Water fun"
Naruto sat in one of the shacks that sold Ramen, and scarfed down a bowl after bowl as a crowd of giggling, awing, and love struck girls hung around him as he ate. His hair style was doing something really good for him, and even though he still acted childish the new Naruto 'fan-girls' just saw it as another loving trait along with his hansom smile and nice attitude. For right now most of the girls ignored Sasuke as they viewed and squealed over the new found hunk of a Ramen-loving-blond-hottie.
"Well that gets Naruto out of the way for now." Cheered Ten Ten as she spared a side ways glance at Sakura, and at how she and Sasuke were starring awe struck at the blond.
"Yea... I guess... but how...." Muttered Sakura as she watched the girls try to flirt with Naruto... yes try... since Naruto was to dense he didn't even notice.... But Sakura did manage to have a sneak peek at Naruto's face, and she would tell that he was blushing... maybe he wasn't as innocent as everyone thought he was....
PART 2 COMING SOON!
"Okay let me think.... First of all how did Naruto's hair get that way?" Asked Sakura, looking over to Ten Ten in wonder as she pondered the idea.
"From the roller coaster." Implied Ten Ten... Sakura just starred at her in disbelief... Sasuke smirked as Neji grumbled, and loped his fingers together with Ten Ten's.
".... Okay... never going on that ride, if thats what it does to hair that is straight up... I don't even want to think about what it would do to hair that actually sticks down...." Jeered Sakura as she watched Ten Ten's face still in shock.
"Oh, you don't want to know! Good thing Neji carries around a bru-" Neji kissed Ten Ten instantly on the mouth shutting her up from the now obvious comment. Sasuke and Sakura just snickered at the Hyuuga....
"Secondly... how did all those girls... just... ugh! I give up! Let's just go!" Sakura jabbed as she walked pulling Sasuke in tow behind her as Ten Ten and Neji followed. Sakura huffed ignoring the subject as she thought about wanting to have fun today with her friends... and not fussing over Naruto.
"Sakura where's Ino and Shikamaru?" Wondered Ten Ten looking around the area surrounded her, swishing her auburn buns along with her head.
"I think Ino said something about an 'romantic' ride or something...." Coaxed Sakura as she looked back while pronouncing 'romance' childishly... she was not pleased with Ino for walking away from their group.
After a few minuets of wandering around, and trying the different rides the four managed to meet back up at the water park with the traitor Ino-pig and Shikamaru. Ino explained to Ten Ten and Sakura about the rides that they had gone on.... Making Ino blush a velvety red when she mention that Shikamaru had kissed her during one of the slow rides. Ten Ten and Sakura then told her about the excruciating rides Neji and Sasuke had forced them to go on... freaking both of the girls out at mention of the rides name.
(Flashback: Shikamaru and Ino)
"Shika-bear let's ride that one next, okay?" Coaxed Ino as she waddled over pulling Shikamaru towards one of the romantic boat rides in the theme park. Shikamaru sighed as both of them got through on the first try since the ride wasn't as popular as the others. They both hopped on one of the boats, and sat while it headed into a dark tunnel up ahead.
"Isn't this romantic Shika-man!" Squealed Ino as the boat dragged on along the water under a tunnel as the lights dimmed. Shikamaru just looked at her from the corner of his eye wondering about her comment of … 'Shika-man'... like really....
"It's all so...." Mumbled Shikamaru as he looked over to Ino and watched her eyes glistening as she watched the different colors that sprang from the lights above. ".... Troublesome...."
"Ugh!" Hissed Ino as she fumed from the ears now that the mood was now ruined from that comment, and she looked over at Shikamaru harshly and sneered. "Shikamaru why can't you be-" Jeered Ino as Shikamaru planted his lips on hers as the tunnel turned into pitch darkness, and Ino gasped at the shock as Shikamaru took the opportunity to further access into her mouth with his tongue.
By the time the ride had ended both had exited with flushed cheeks, and panting breaths... and that was exactly what Ino wanted.
(Flashback: END)
"Well you got lucky Ino-pig... Ten Ten and I on the other hand got dragged on some horrific rides." Muttered Sakura as she crossed her arms over her chest, looking over at Ten Ten while jutting out her lower lip in a pout.
"You got that right... but they weren't all so bad." Ten Ten chirped as she took a sly glance back at Sakura as Ino watched both of them with interest.
"Well, what kind of rides are you talking about forehead?" Questioned Ino grinning as she noticed Sasuke walking up behind Sakura gracefully startling her as he wrapped the small girl in his muscular arms.
"Uh.... Well, big, t-the...." Mumbled Sakura, and Sasuke just chuckled showing his smirk as Sakura stood there looking like a flaming tomato.
"'The Abashed', and the 'Astro' roller costars were pretty freaky... but the one that was the scariest was called the 'Smiling Death'... and it was like a walk in house that was haunted by this little girl." Shivered Ten Ten, and Neji collected one of her hands calming her nerves and possible rant about the freaky ride.
"Um... ya...." Mumbled Sakura as she looked away hopping to hide her blush that tinted her cheeks. Ino scoffed at both of the girls as she noticed the departure of most of the families that were attending the theme park.
"Well why don't we go to the water park before it gets to late?" Asked Ino as she looked around for any sign of the entrance or directions.
"Troublesome...." Murmured Shikamaru as he pulled on Ino's hand towards the entrance of the water park that was directly behind them. Ten Ten and Sakura just giggled as the two ice cubes sighed wordlessly watching Ino's bashful flush and slap to Shikamaru's arm.
Sakura stopped walking suddenly, and plastered on a blank look as everyone else noticed and looked at her as though she saw a flying unicorn just moments ago.
"WE FORGOT NARUTO!" Sakura yelled as she looked around hastily searching for her best friend as everyone else looked around as well... except for Sasuke and Neji.
"Don't worry Sakura, he'll show up eventuall-"
"-SAKURA-CHAN!" Sakura spun around and spotted Naruto running head first almost ramming himself right into Sakura but Sasuke had pulled her aside... leaving Naruto to smack his face on the gravel.
"Dobe." Chuckled Sasuke as he held Sakura in his grasp while she stared down at the blond who was now standing with rock still stuck to his face.
"Owie Sakura-chan that hurt." Whimpered Naruto as he rubbed his cheek noticing rocks as they fell from his indented face.
"Serves you right Naruto! Where have you been!?" Scolded Sakura moving closer to dust off the boy's dirty orange t-shirt noticing how Naruto's hair started to fly upwards in it's natural position.
"Anou, sorry Sakura-chan...." Apologized Naruto as he looked down at Sakura. "But... I did get to try this awesome Ramen, although not as good as Ichiraku's, but it was still pretty good!" Bubbled Naruto excitedly while shaking Sakura's shoulders repetitively.
"NARUTO!" Screeched Sakura through the repetitive rocking back and forth causing her to get dizzy, and very pissed off.
"Yes Sakura-chan?" Asked Naruto halting Sakura from falling forward as he stood her still in front of him as she regained her balance.
"Let go!" Hissed Sakura through her mess of bubble gum pink hair that was now strewn around her head as though a tornado had whipped through it.
Dropping his hands from Sakura's shoulder's Naruto stepped back as Sasuke caught her from behind after noticing that she was not stable enough to stand on her own. Nervously Naruto scratched the back of his neck looking apologetic towards the still slightly dizzy girl.
"HURRY UP MASSIVE HEAD BOARD!" Joshed Ino cupping her mouth with both of her hands to yell back to the group of friends. Shikamaru stood smashing his ears in with his palms as Ino's call ended in a long high pitch drag on of the last word.
"DON'T CALL ME THAT!" Sakura yelled back angrily, now standing on her own two feet while some people that were around watched as the trade of insults were passed through the girls at about a few feet apart.
"WHY NOT, IT IS TRUE! YOUR FOREHEAD CAN BLOCK THE WATER FOR ME!" Taunted Ino.
"WELL YOUR BODY CAN BLOCK FOR ALL OF US, YOU PIG!" Hollered the small pink haired girl as she moved her outstretched hands around her body as though holding a huge ball in front of her to describe how big Ino was.
"ARE YOU CALLING ME FAT?!" Ino huffed just as loud, and Shikamaru looked hesitantly at Ino as though she was just going to jump Sakura.
"OH, SO YOU CAUGHT ON TO THAT MISS PIGGY!?" Retaliated Sakura glaring at the blond across the way.
"THAT'S IT--" Bantered Ino as Shikamaru quickly grabbed on to her. "SHIKAMARU LET ME GO!"
"YOU PIG!" Called Sakura taking an a offensive stance as Ino practically lunged at her while trapped in Shikamaru's arms. "YOU HAVE TO BE HELD DOWN, WHY DON'T WE JUST GET YOU HOG-TIED!"
"BILLBOARD BROW!"
"PIG!"
"UGLY!"
"FAT ASS!"
"PINKY!"
"OBESE!"
"SHUT UP!"
"...."
"...."
Both girls looked over to Neji in astonishment, and he glared back at both of them when he noticed. Neji pointed over to Tenten as she looked back at the pinket and blondy in confusion then turned to look at Neji... realization came to everyone as they looked over to the Hyuuga. Neji was looking away over at the water park and glaring as though he could burn it up by just looking at it.
"Neji... I think you might have anger issues...." Cooed Tenten latching onto his arm while he still refused to look back.
Sasuke chuckled under his breath and Neji turned his head swiftly towards him still holding the intense glare. Sasuke smirked and chuckled again, and that seemed to set off the Hyuuga as he squinted his eye's smaller slowly walking towards the young Uchiha. Pushing Sakura behind his back Sasuke squared his shoulders as neither of the guys eye's strayed from the other.
"Neji." Hissed Tenten as she walked over to forcefully grab onto the back of the Hyuuga's collar halting his venture forward. "We're all going to go and have fun." Told Tenten harshly looking at everyone who had seemed to have frozen in place... even Neji. "This is Sakura's last day in Konoha, and we promised to be good. So if you all had anything to add as to why you think we should be fighting about your problems... I suppose we should get going over to the water park. Now! Don't you agree?" Hissed Tenten darkly as she glared gripping at her pocket knife she always seems to carry around.
Naruto gulped loudly and stepped back the same time Sakura did, as Neji still stood still under Tenten's clutches.
All of them nodded their heads while starring at Tenten as she glared back.
"Okay! Let's go!" Cheered Tenten while smiling happily, and skipping off towards the entrance pulling Neji by the hand, while passing Ino and Shikamaru who followed her movements with their eye's.
None of them moved until Tenten was by the till waiting to enter the water park, shakily Ino and Sakura forced fake smiles at each other, and Naruto still stood with wide eyes looking down at his open palms of his hands questioningly.
"What the fuck." Whispered Sasuke looking back at the now peppy Tenten as she hopped up and down while holding Neji's hand.
"I think thats what we call the 'Apocalypse'...." Concluded Shikamaru following Sasuke's gaze as it lingered longer in deep thought.
"I think we should listen to her...." Pipped up Sakura, looking over to Ino who had the same knowledge about the situation when Tenten would get angry.
Ino giggled as Shikamaru starred contemplating his thoughts over Tenten's reaction.
"Or else." Bubbled Ino walking out from Shikamaru's hold to beside Sakura as she walked by.
"I'm so confused." Strained Naruto looking up from his hands and over to Sasuke and Shikamaru.
Sasuke shrugged and followed behind Sakura and Ino, stuffing his hands in his tight gray pocket's of his skinny jeans.
"I think we all are Naruto." Contemplated Shikamaru patting Naruto's back reassuringly as he led the blond towards the water park.
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"I think this was a good idea. Don't you think so?" Sighed Ino as she practically melted against the white tiled walls of one of the many hot tubs that were kept outside next to the water park's building.
"I agree...." Sighed Sakura in agreement closing her eyes as Ino and Tenten seemed to do the same and they let the bubbles massage their skin.
"Yea...." Sighed two more voices at once as the calming atmosphere of the hot tub soothed everyone's worries while Ino, Sakura, and Tenten sighed in agreement.
Slowly Sakura opened her eyes and peered around, suddenly Sakura jumped and squeaked when she noticed both Michiko and Malaya sitting beside her.
"I-I didn't see you guys there!" Stuttered Sakura sitting back in her seat next to Malaya, and when Sakura had jumped she managed to land right on top of Ino who slipped and crashed into Tenten.
Angrily Tenten sighed about her wet hair as she pulled on the elastics to undo the buns that held them up. Ino screeched and frantically tried to pull her hair up from the chlorine filed hot tub worrying about split ends. As Sakura just smiled slightly at her short hair noticing how Malaya had her long hair up with a towel wrapped around in it with perfection.
"Sorry Saku, I bet you couldn't of heard us either! Michiko and I are Ninjas that's why! Isn't that awesome!" Pipped Malaya gushing about the topic as Sakura smiled at the smaller girl laughing in content about their conversation.
"Sakura, me and Tenten are going to fix our hair, meet you at the main park okay?" Ino said pulling Tenten out of the hot tub behind her, as the both of them stumbled off without bothering to wait for Sakura's answer.
Sakura looked back over to Malaya as she continued to talk about how awesome it was to be a ninja, and how she wished she could be the next Hokage... whatever the heck that was.
Hearing a sigh, Sakura turned to Michiko who was shaking his head slowly as he listened to what Malaya was blabbing on about.
"It's so much fun using all the different kinds of jutsu's, and to beat Michiko into a bloody pulp!" Cheered Malaya as Michiko chuckled while he watched her demonstrations of some crazy ass hand signals.
"What I believe she is trying to tell you Sakura, is that Malaya enjoys her karate classes." Explained Michiko laughing as Malaya hit his chest repetitively with her small fists shouting insolents about him being weaker than a dead fish, and about how dead fish can at least feed the birds.
"I see." Sakura smiled at the two, before laughing as Michiko grabbed both of Malaya's wrists with one hand while tickling her sides with the other.
Screeching and laughing Malaya struggled until she managed to loosen her wrists and pull Michiko's face under the water, surprisingly to Sakura. Michiko's head resurfaces as he grabbed at Malaya, and when he did he lifted her up attempting to throw her into the water.
"MICHIKO!" Hollered Malaya as she hanged upside down hanging over the taller boys shoulder still hitting at his back, and Sakura laughed. "SAKU!"
"Yes Malaya." Giggled Sakura noticing how red Malaya's face was from the steam as she laid limply in Michiko's hold.
"Can you please help me hon." Pleaded Malaya looking up at Sakura.
A smiling Sakura poked Michiko's side making him jump as he moved away from Sakura's prodding fingers.
"Traitor! How could you do this to me Sakura!" Cried Michiko.
"Sorry, but it's a survival instinct." Jeered Sakura as she followed still poking in Michiko's side as he laughed moving away still carrying Malaya over his shoulder.
"Well if you must have it that way... so be it!" Going deeper into the hot tub where it got wider Michiko ran through the water in a slow pace around in a circle while Malaya boobed up and down. Sakura chased after him until Michiko soon enough retreated and Malaya was lowered into the water next to Sakura.
"FREEDOM!" Cheered Malaya splashing Michiko with water, all he did was look at her with an appointed look.
"Do you really want to go down that road?" Asked Michiko, and slowly Malaya shook her head and instead started poking Michiko's sides just like Sakura was doing, and watching as he flinched trying not to laugh.
All three of them erupted in laughter as Malaya continued to poke Michiko's sides along with Sakura helping as they slowly tortured the boy.
A clearing of the throat interrupted their laughter as they all turned toward where the sound was generated from.
"What is going on here?" Hissed Sasuke as he glared at Michiko.
The one thing Sakura thought as she saw that look on Sasuke's face, was....
Oh shit....
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