So I'm back! This is the second chapter I'm writing today…. So… Yeah… Missed you guys!
I just want to say that I've known what I was going to write for a while. Just a way of typing it became the problem… Damn… Okay, I'll shut up.
Here is my attempt!
Starting at 12:42
E POV
Blinking, I stared at him for a while. "Well… Okay?" He lifted his fist to have it impact with my face but I grabbed his hand and stopped him.
"You're sick, you know that? You are all up high and middy on your stole! You don't even realize that she needs you! So all you do is wonder around out here in your self pity and guess what? It's not doing one damn person a damn bit of good!"
"Right! 'Cause everything that happened to her is my fault!"
"Good job realizing something but it's a little late!"
"Okay, dude, what the Hell is your problem?"
"Bella is in the fucking hospital and you're walking around like an idiot! That's my problem!"
"WHAT?"
"Yeah! So get up and go see her!"
We began running as fast as we could. I ended up far ahead of him in a matter of seconds.
.^.^.^.^.^.
I walked into the hospital and ran up to the desk and slammed my hands down on the desk (not too hard of course, but there might e a small indent).
"Where is she?"
"Uh, who… who sir?"
(I'm going to take a creative break. Let my juices flow more. It's now 1:05!)
(It is now 2:41! I am keeping track of this… WOOHOO!)
The lady was clearly frightened. Her dull green eyes were full of fright, wide as can be. The bottom of her thin lips was trembling. Her cheeks, which popped out because of her bones sticking out from how thin she was, lost their color. Her wrinkly hands were shaking.
"Isabella Swan."
"I'm sorry sir but she is intense surgery right now. You are free to wait with her family and friends in the waiting room," she said with a shake in her voice. She pointed to the waiting room where, as she said, her family and mine were waiting.
I growled under my breath. "Thank you." I gave her a nod before heading over to the chairs. Ruben refused to look at me as I walked by, John glared at me and Amy and Jamie were calming down their sniffles – their eyes still red from their tears. Esme blankly stared ahead, Alice was in so much pain that it affected Jasper. Emmett and Rose were outside (I could see them through the window).
Finally I stumbled upon Nick. He looked at his lap with a guilty expression. Just one look at him and you were in pain.
"Dr. Ruben?" The nurse asked.
"Yes?" He looked up at the nurse, who just walked through the door.
"There has seemed to be a problem in the surgery. We were wondering, as seeming you're the best doctor this hospital has ever had, that you could come back and help Dr. Maze, Dr. Johnson and Dr. Cullen with this surgery?" She asked in a very indifferent tone.
"Y-yeah, sure," he stuttered as he got up.
Sighing we began the wait.
.^.^.^.^.^.
Ruben and Carslile came out a little while later.
"How is she?" Jamie asked.
"She was pretty banged up. Some broken ribs, internal bleeding, bruises, bruised bone…" Ruben started before swallowing.
"She had a fractured leg, and a slight swelling of the brain. She has fallen into a medical induced coma." Carslile began, "We would like her to stay in her room alone for a while as we continue some tests on her. We still need to work on her unusually low blood pressure, her heart is weak from over beating and a possible cardiac arrest, her brain waves show lack of usage – lack of thought. We worry that anything could easily send her over edge," he looked at me, "so we ban you from going into her room. Even if you hear that she is awake." He continued took look at me and I nodded.
"What about," Nick took an unnecessary sallow, "him."
"He's probably left town," Emmett said, coming inside.
"We'll hunt him down," Jasper promised Ruben.
"No, leave it to the Volturi. They'll handle this," was Ruben's reply.
.^.^.^.^.^.
It has been a couple of days and Bella has yet to wake. They were beginning to believe it was worse than once thought. Especially since she is suppose to heal fast.
Sighing I realized today would be the 10th day of her coma. I rubbed the back of my neck and sighed. I picked up my backpack and headed out.
.^.^.^.^.^.
Two weeks ago from today was the day Bella came in. She still refused to wake up. I laid my head against the wall behind me.
Than I heard a small groan from her room, as did a doctor passing by. He walked into her room just in time to see her eyes flutter open.
(A/N so tempted to stop there. Take away 45 minutes)
"Well good morning Ms. Swan," he said to her.
"Morning." She groaned and went to stretch her arms but her IV stopped her. She looked around and took in her surroundings and eventually her eyes landed on the doctor. "Where am I?"
"You are in a hospital Ms. Swan. Now I am going to go fetch you doctor and see in he'll come and see you. I'll also call your home. Ruben I suspect you would like me to call?"
"Umm, well no. Can you call a good friend of mine?"
I smiled, getting my phone out.
"Yes. And this would be….?"
"Jacob Black." She continued to give him the number.
"Yes. And what would you like me to say?"
"Just tell him to come see me," she said, laying her head back down.
"I'm sorry Ms. Swan but you are not allowed to have any visitors," he said simply.
IDIOT!
She laughed a sick, twisted laugh before staring him straight in the eye. "You are sitting here refusing to let me see my friend for absolutely no good reason." She said getting angry.
"No, I'm doing because you aren't stable enough to see anyone."
IDIOT!
"Oh, OH! I'm not stable enough! So I'm what? Impaired? Physically? Mentally? Am I disable too? I'll let you know something you have 3 seconds to get the hell out of my room before you become the disabled one who is too unstable to see his friends!"
"You need to calm down Ms. Swan. Your blood pressure is rising."
"TWO," she started her count down."
"Ms. Swan please…"
"ONE!" She ripped the IV only to have blood gush out of her arm.
"MS. SWAN!" He yelled.
Luckily another doctor heard the yell and came rushing in to stop Bella's bleeding arm. "What was Hell was going through your mind John?" The doctor yelled before grabbing a rap and rapping Bella's arm. He sat her down before telling the other doctor, "John", to leave. "I will go fetch your doctor Ms. Swan."
"Thank you."
He walked out of the room to go call Ruben.
To bad Carslile will already be on his way to take care of her.
My phone beeped.
Message sent.
Ummm… Well wow! It feels like FOREVER since I have written a chapter…. Longer since I have finished one.
You all know what this mean, don't you?
I AM OUT OF WRITERS BLOCK!
To those of my loyal readers who are still reading this, you make my world turn. I am now officially on summer break so I'm going to try and update every week. Also try to make my chapters longer. You just have to give me time, okay?
I have missed all you guys! I would LOVE critic (constructive. I don't like the bullying.)!
I've been reading my stories and realized they seem rushed so I'll try and slow them down. If you don't want me to you should tell me as soon as you can.
Love you!
Mackzie.
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