I've been working on other things lately trying to figure how how to make my writing better and I noticed something about this story, It's a bit sloppy and inconsistent. So hopefully I can fix that a bit, I will kinda sort not really rename Dom in this one. Next Chapter will be more about Del.
Jack and Delta sat patiently, Barely able to hear each other over the large group of '' Fontaine's army ''. These men had obviously not heard the war had ended and had been here the whole time, The ones who Fontaine didn't send to protect the area and look for information were casually chatting while getting ready for war.
While Fontaine's men prepared themselves for a non-existent war, Fontaine sat nonchalantly behind his desk with his legs on top, Leaned back in his chair. Delta and Jack approached him, Hoping to actually do something themselves instead of waiting on Fontaine's men.
'' So, Fontaine.. Any chance we'll get going? ''
'' You guys aren't glued to my ass, Go. ''
'' What the hell is with the hostility? ''
'' I'm someone again that's what, I don't gotta write crappy articles anymore or spy on people. Get lost and just let the Fontaine do all the work. ''
'' Sorry to break it to you Fontaine, But you aren't anybody. Me and Delta, We one man armied through Rapture all by ourselves, You? You got your ass kicked by a guy with a wrench and 5 minutes of plasmid training. ''
'' I sure hope you aren't bringin up … ''
'' Bringing up when I kicked your ass? Oh yeah I was, Remember how you thought you won and you got impaled by a of 6 year olds? ''
'' Get the hell out of here before I order my troops to tear you to ribbons. ''
'' Yeah, I bet you would send the troops, Not like you could do it. ''
Fontaine lifted himself from his seat, He stared so hard at Jack, Delta swore he could see a red line connecting the twos eyes. He quickly jumped between the two and tried to calm the tension.
'' Look, Fontaine. You do what you gotta do and me and Jack will just go about our own business, We'll see you later okay? ''
'' Yeah whatever.. ''
Delta dragged Jack out of the building, Whom was still staring back angrily. He sighed and put a big hand on Jack's shoulder.
'' We'll take care of that after we find Johnny and Dell, Lets go see if we can find anything out ok? ''
'' Yeah.. ''
Eleanor and Dom sat in silence, Neither saying a thing. Dom was too distraught to talk and while Eleanor had a lot on her mind she didn't want to stress out Dom even more. To her surprise Dom broke the silence.
'' Eleanor.. Do you believe in Karma? ''
'' I guess. ''
'' Do you think.. This has happened to me for all the horrible things I've done? ''
'' You haven't done anything horrible Dom. ''
'' Uhh Eleanor, In case you forgot I run the black market. ''
'' Well.. You make a living doing a wrong thing, Lots of people in Rapture do that. ''
'' Eleanor, I've killed innocent people, paid off cops, funded terrorism and even took part IN terrorism.''
'' Well.. When you say it like that. ''
'' Are you even listening? ''
'' No I'm not Dom, I have something on my mind and I need to get it out now. ''
'' What? My son is missing.. How selfish could you be? ''
'' sigh.. Dom, Kinda one of my points. ''
'' How is my kidnapped son a point? ''
'' Well.. Why do you have a son? ''
'' What kind of screwed up question is that? ''
'' Will you answer it? ''
'' Because... I.. slept with your Father. ''
'' Exactly. ''
'' Okay, I made a mis- ''
'' How many times did you sleep with my Father after that? ''
' I.. Uhh... ''
'' Well? ''
'' Okay.. I don't remember... Lots. ''
'' Dom, I.. I don't think were right for each other. ''
'' Are you breaking up with me? ''
'' …. Yes. ''
'' Eleanor? I.. ''
Doms eye's began turning red, Despite all the stress already thrown on her Eleanor couldn't help but speak her mind. While she had to admit they had a good, albeit short run, Dom had slept with her father and she herself wasn't any better allowing Dom's sister to her on her. '
'' Dom, I know this is a bad time but maybe.. Considering all that's happened, You should be with my Father. ''
'' Eleanor, Don't - ''
'' I'm sorry Dom. ''
The room once again entered an awkward silence, Other then the sound of sniffling and crying coming from Dom. Eleanor was surprised, She had expected to be upset but suddenly felt a great deal of relief. Was she happy that they weren't together anymore?
Dell felt like a stud, As he walked down the dimly lit streets of Rapture he could hear some Big Sister's wolf whistling and commenting on his form fitting daddy suit. Of course, This wasn't what he had come for, He had to find his baby brother. Problem was, He had no idea where the hell he was going.
Any second now he thought to himself, The arm would take control and do everything for him. Although even he knew this was a fools dream, He knew he would have to put in some work, His little training was all he had but he didn't want to rely on the powers of Him too much.
Still though, He was curious. This mysterious Mercenary, Was he really controlling his body from beyond the grave? How could a mans soul be trapped in an arm. Rapture had some pretty weird crap going on but it all had technology behind it, He just couldn't find how this could be plausible, Even in Rapture.
Still, It was better then nothing. His thought was interrupted by a pulse which traveled from his arm and shock-waved through the rest of his body. He could feel his mind, His train of thought slowing down. Here it comes..
His head drooped down, As if though his brain had shut down. Then in a flash his eyes opened and lit up, The normally arched man now walked with his back upright, A confident march and a whole new arsenal of powers. He stopped and took a glance at his surroundings, He recognized this area, So much had change since then but he knew he was on the right track.
While Dom sat crying, Eleanor tried to tune It out by idyll playing with her hands. She couldn't care less that Dom was crying and it felt great. She almost felt like laughing, Her extreme new found happiness was interrupted by the doorbell. Dom, Stood up quickly and walked angrily to the door. Without looking through the peekhole, She swung it open and it was immediately greeted with an eletro bolt to the face, Which knocked her unconscious instantly.
Eleanor quickly sprung into a battle stance, Hearing the bolt and poked her head around the corner to see what had happened. To her surprised the intruder had already walked in and raised their arms in surrender. Eleanor held out an arm, Getting a better look she saw it was the Blue armored sister from before.
'' Yeah, I came to talk. ''
'' Any particular reason you just bolted Dom In the face? ''
'' You ought to know Dom well by now, Do Dom and Talk work in the same sentence? ''
'' Good point, Come in. ''
The sister casually walked over Dom and sat with Eleanor and the two began chatting. It wasn't till about 2 hours later that Dom came too, Rubbing her head in pain. She walked over to the living room were Eleanor and the Sister were laughing and talking casually.
'' WHAO.. What the hell are YOU doing here? ''
Eleanor stood up and crossed her arms.
'' She, Informed me of a lot of things. Domino, If that's even your real name. ''
'' Oh god.. Please don't tell me she told you... ''
'' Dominique? ''
