Hey hey hey. Crap crap crap! again with the not saving thing. At least I was only a few sentences into the chapter. Okay, redo again. I'll update dare to be dared sometime soon. In the first chapter I put Cts Outside Of Clans and left it blank. That wasn't a mistake because there will be this chapter.

ALLEGIANCES(remember, these are just the main characters)

Thunderclan

Leader: Tearstar

Deputy: MoonBlaze

Apprentices: Firepaw, Bearpaw, Rainpaw

Medicine cat: none as of now

Warriors: Eagleheart, Fallenleaf, Blackout

Queens: none as of now

Kits: none as of now

Elders(retired queens and warriors): Dustfang

Cats Outside Of Clans

Sunwave

Rainpaw snarled. "Stay back!" he screeched. "This cat isn't Moonblaze! I know him. He's a loner!" Rainpaw was afraid of this cat, but he knew he had to fight for his clan. "We don't want him in our camp!"

The other two apprentices sniffed the air and got into battle positions. Rainpaw knew it was his first day as an apprentice, but he had fought before.

Just then Blackout ran up from the camp. Eagleheart and Moonblaze came out of the woods drenched and Moonblaze's fur smelled of this cat.

"Firepaw, Bearpaw Rainpaw! Back off!" she hissed. "He's mine!" she shifted into battle position.

The other two apprentices immediately back off, but Rainpaw hesitated a bit then padded back. Tearstar came from camp and looked around a little puzzled.

The cat sneered. "Bring it on you sorry excuse for a warrior."

"Do you know this cat Moonblaze?" asked Tearstar.

"Yes." Moonbaze replied. "He's Sunwave, my brother."

"You're brother?" Rainpaw said not sure of what he heard.

Blackout's reply was only a snarl as she flung herslef at Sunwave. Her front claws me his face and her jaws met his neck. He back claws drew bloodily lines down his belly.*

Sunwave drew back surprised, but flung her off his body like a rat before she could do any serious damage. Then he leapt at Moonblaze. Neither could land a good blow on each other because they used the same type of moves.

Tearstar snuck up behind and slashed his face. It seems that about one to seven wasn't a very good matchup. But then again you never met Moonblaze.

Blackout shook herself and rammed into Sunwave. Rainpaw couldn't stand watching anymore. He screeched and leapt and twisted his body to land squarely on Moonblaze's back and sunk his teeth into Sunwave's ear and he dug his claws into his back.

Sunwave yowled and shook of Rainpaw. Rainpaw went flying headfirst into a tree. As soon as he hit the ground he shook himself and ran underneath Sunwave and raked his belly with his hind claws and slashed his flank with his front.

Sunwave winced and slashed at Rainpaw's face. Rainpaw ducked and bit his shoulder. Again, Rainpaw has been fighting long before he became an apprentice.

Blackout was kicked back by Sunwave's legs and his hear head on the ground. She grunted at the impact and passed out.

Firepaw yelped and ran over to her with Bearpaw behind. It took one glance at them to send Rainpaw into a rage. He took swipe after swipe at Sunwave's flank until his paws were stained with blood.

Sunwave knocked Rainpaw aside and backed off bleeding. "I've caused good enough damage." he hissed before sprinting away.

Moonblaze ran over to Blackout urgently trying to wake her up. Rainpaw looked around and walked up to Blackout. "Where's the medicine cat?" he asked.

Egleheart walked up do him and stopped. He coughed up some water and passed out.

"Fallenleaf!" exclaimed Rainpaw. "We need to get Blackout and Eagleheart into the medicine cat den."

Fallenleaf nodded and picked up Eagleheart, while Fiepaw helped Rainpaw carry Blackout into the den.

Tearstar spoke. "He's been in the water too long." she pointed to Eagleheart with her tail.

The medicine cat who is unnamed gave Blackout some borage for her fever and got the extra water out of Eagleheart's lungs.

Tearstar looked on worriedley at her son.

"Eagleheart will be ok." Moonblaze told her encouragingly.

Eagleheart woke up a few minutes later, and was better soon, but Balckout was still asleep and groaning.

Later in the day, Blackout had woken up and was out for a walk with Moonblaze. Rainpaw was sitting at the edge of the camp thinking about Sunwave and why he attacked. The apprentice den had been damaged and they needed to fix it.

"Come on!" Rainpaw said to Firepaw and Bearpaw. "We need to fix the apprentic den." The three cats worked on the den for a while and repaired the outside.

"Do we need some more bedding?" Firepaw asked him looking inside.

Rainpaw looked at her and shook his head. "What?"

Firepaw laughed. "Bedding."

"Oh yeah." Rainpaw said and walked out to get some moss. He saw Firepaw shake her head amused. Firepaw's a nice cat. He thought. Was thst all he thought of her? Just nice? He didn't have time to think about this now. He had been just named an apprentice. He gathered up some moss and brought it back.

Ok ok this isn't the end of the chapter. It's time to change perspectives to another cat. Here comes the twist!

Tiger had just only scented it a while ago. So familiar, yet he couldn't grasp who it was. The only choice was to follow it. It led right into the woods, growing stronger. Tiger had to leap over branches since he was small. He stopped to watch a mouse go by and after he kept following the scent. As he went closer he picked up other scents as well. Soon he was within range of a bunch of cats. Then he saw a blue gray cat with light blue eyes dash out and come back with moss in his mouth. The cat looked strangely familiar. He decided to follow him and stopped when he saw a bunch of cats in the clearing. Then the cat stopped and said "Tiger?" That's when Tiger realized he had just found him. He had found Rain.

Back to Rainpaw's Perspective. I might change perspectives a few times in the middle of chapters.

Tiger? Rainpaw exclaimed awestruck. Tearstar walked up to the cat. Firepaw and Bearpaw walked out of the den.

"Who's this cat?" asked Firepaw.

"This, this is Tiger!" Rainpaw exclaimed. "My brother who I haven't see since he was born!"

Tiger looked equally surprised. "Rain!" he mewed.

"I'm Rainpaw now." Rainpaw corrected. Tiger looked a little confused. "I joined this clan. I'm with the warriors now! What are you doing here?"

"I scented you and followed the scent here." Tiger replied. "You're really a part of these cats now?" Rainpaw nodded.

Tearstar walked up to Tiger. "So Rainpaw is you're brother?" she asked him. Tiger nodded. "Talk to me later." She padded back to her den.

Firepaw whispered to Rainpaw "He sure is litlle."

Rainpaw nodded. He padded up to Tiger "Let's see if we can work something out with Tearstar." A leaf flew up and smacked him in the face.

Firepaw burst out laughing. Rainpaw spat on the leaf and stuck it to her flank.

"Eeewww!" screech Firepaw as she batted it off. She leaped at Rainpaw and pinned him down. The wrestled with each other before Firepaw ran out of camp and Rainpaw followed.

Tiger's whiskers twitched in amusement as he watched them play. He thought the flame-colored she-cat looked good with Rainpaw but would never say that out loud. He resisted the urge to play with them. He had always been mature for his age even though he was small but still played sometimes. He walked up to tearstar and asked "What did you want to see me for?"

Tearstar looked at him almost approvingly. "We are in need of cats." she mewed. "How would you like to join your brother in the clan?" she asked him.

Tiger stepped back and thought for a while. Finally he nodded his head. "Yes. I would like that a lot."

Tearstar's whisers twitched in amusement and said, "Alright then. In order for you to join the clan we need to change your name. From now on your name will be Tigerkit. We don't need to call a meeting because we are still used to getting new cats. But we need to find someone to take care of you until you are six moons old.

"Oh, I've taken care of myself since I was born and my father disappeared." said Tigerpaw.

Tearstar looked impressed. "Well, ok then." she mewed.

Tigerkit ran out to tell his brother.

Rainpaw chased after Firepaw his tail thrashing. He sped up to catch up to her. He was about to pounce when a low hanging branch smacked him in the face. He fell down on a mouse fleeing away and crushed it. Rainpaw laughed at the fact he fell on a mouse and stood up.

Firepaw came back to him laughing at his crushed mouse.

An alarm call came from behind him and Rainpaw did a backflip and pinned down a finch and killed it.

Firepaw stared at him her mouth open. How did I just do that? Rainpaw asked himself just as shocked as her.

Firepaw eventually just laughed and stole his mouse running away.

Rainpaw buried his finch and went after her shaking of the wierd feeling he had. He caught up to her again after a while and said. "You owe me a mouse if you eat that!" but he knew she wouldn't. It was against the code. He dove at her leg and tripped her.

Firepaw yipped and fell. "Okay, I give!" she yelled.

"Keep the mouse." Rainpaw said. "That was payment enough. We should get back to camp." he reminded her.

As they walked back to camp, Firepaw stopped dead. Rainpaw looked at her and sniffed the air. He smelled his brother. And something else...he couldn't figure out what it was.

"Fox!" Firepaw hissed.

Bum Bum Bum! Hoped you liked chapter 2 err chapter three I guess if you count the prologue.