It's been a week and still no new reviews on this story, but I DID get reviwes on dare to be dared so I'll probably update that today if I can. Maybe tommorrow morning like 12:00 to 2:00 am that's when I work fast when I'm tired. My kittens disappeared then came back then disappeared then two came back. Ressee Cup is still missing and I'm guessing she's lost or gone so now I'm sadder thatn usual. And I've had chest pains wheneer I breathe fast or cough. Anyway enough moping.

ALLEGIANCES(just the main characters)

Thunderclan

Leader: Tearstar

Deputy: MoonBlaze

Apprentices: Firepaw, Bearpaw, Rainpaw

Medicine cat: NPC

Warriors: Eagleheart, Fallenleaf, Blackout

Queens: NPCs

Kits: NPCs

Elders(retired queens and warriors): Dustfang

Cats Outside Of Clans

Sunwave

Other Animals

Ennete

Jayfeather interrupted again. "Why did you never mention your brother?" he asked.

"Because," said Rainhead. "It would have lead to my past life and I don't want anyone but you three listening."

"Three?" Jayfeather asked looking guilty.

Lionblaze padded out of the bushes and Dovepaw ran up a few minutes later.

"You've been listening the whole time, haven't you?" Rainhead asked.

Dovepaw nodded. "It's no use hiding our powers if you already know."

"Very well." said Rainhead. "But this is where my past gets very interesting."

In a silvery forest in the stars a black cat with silver eyes stood, a top a large star-shaped rock with various strachings in it, facing a simmering sea of stars. Her name? Death. She turned to the forest behind her.

"My children it is time to make your descent, for Starclan refuses to help the clans with the new powers I have granted them." As she spoke four cats emerged from the forest. Two males, two females.

The largest was a golden tabby tom with glowing gold eyes. He commanded all attention and screamed leader. His name was Summer.

He stood first followed by his sister, who was a calico. Her fur was covered with leaf shaped patterns of black, brown, orange, and gold, only little amounts of white showed. She was Beautiful with a mischievous gleam in her eyes, she was Autumn.

She was followed by her brother, who was nearly the same size of Summer. He was snow white and powerful with a strong bite and a sharp tongue. He radiated cold and nobility. He was winter.

The last was a small she-cat who was mud brown, with snow white paws, tail, ears and chest. She seemed cheerful and quick. She was Spring. The four nodded and with a swirl of wind and were gone.

The wolves had been talking. They were fed up. Fed up with the cats, fed up with their leader for keeping them at bay. They were revolting. 10 of the wolves surrounded their leader who was sleeping. She stirred awake her eyes showed her startledness then concern.

"What has happen?"

"A murder of a packmate," a large gray wolf snarled.

"Of who?" no wolf answered, but they bared their teeth. Ennette understood and was about to flee but then the wolves attacked and she died. The wolves howled in victory.

Rainpaw threw his finch on the fresh kill pile and started to follow Firepaw after the fox scent when he heard a wolf howl. "Oh no." he whispered. Their father, Rain (like him) had gotten attacked by wolves, and their uncle, Rainwhisker, had been killed by badgers. Rainpaw knew Tigerkit was deathly afraid of wolves, badgers, tigers, and foxes. Rainpaw muttered "I need to go now." to Firepaw. "If I'm not back soon, look for Tigerkit. Don't worry about me. And don't follow me. We don't want to draw attention. And, I don't want you getting hurt." And with that, he shot off to find Tigerkit.

"Whoah whoah whoah. Rainwhisker? Rainwhisker had a brother who was your father?" asked Jayfeather.

"Well, yes. Not many knew of this because he was from a previous litter and he was taken by foxes but was able to escape and lived as a rougue." replied Rainhead.

"...ok well, that was unexpected news." Lionblaze muttered not really in anyone's character.

Tigerkit wailed. He stopped himself short. Don't draw attention, he thought. Get back to camp. He ran. Which way is camp? The howling grew louder. Tigerkit ran faster. The howling was definately closer. Now he scented fox. "NO!" he screamed. He thought he was going to die. Just on the verge of uncounsciousness from his fear, someone or something grabbed him "N-" a tail clamped across his mouth. "Rainpaw!" he exclaimed as the familiar scent flooded over him.

"Ok, first," said Rainpaw, "Kits don't hunt by themselves, if at all. Second, don't go to the middle of the forest if you're a kit. Got it?"

"Yes" Tigerkit muttered.

Rainpaw picked him up and dragged him towards camp. The howls were closer. Rainpaw ran harder. They were almost to camp. Just as he was nearing the entrance, he caught a flash of red. Before he even knew what it was, he tossed Tigerkit foreward through the entrance. He turned around to face the fox. "Finally some fresh-kill big enough to feed some of us." He sneered. And he jumped into battle.

"You fought a fox?" yelled Dovepaw.

"Yes. And for the love of Starclan stop interrupting!" yelled Rainhead

Rainpaw winced. His side hurt but wasn't bleeding. He had gotten slammed by the fox but was still fine. He jumped on top of it with his unexplainable backflip move. He bit down as hard as he could on it's scruff. It yelped and flung him into a tree. His head was spinning. He slashed its nose open and barely heard it yelp and run away before he started passing out passed out. He faintly heard Tigerkit screaming for help in the camp.

Tigerkit ran into the center of the camp. "HELP!" he screamed. "Rainpaw's being attacked by a fox! We need to help! Come on!"

"Stay hereBearpaw ordered his sister to stay and raced out of camp, sniffed rainpaw,and rushed after the fox.

Firepaw, ignoring Bearpaw's instrutions darted off to where Rainpaw was attacked. She picked up the slightly bigger cat and carried him to camp. She dropped him offin the medince cat den, told Tigerkit that she'd be back and rushed off towards Bearpaw.

Rainpaw was having a dream. There was a deep mist around him and he couldn't see much but he heared growls and caught scarlet liquid and gray fur. The seemed to be heading toward him "Oh, no. The wolves." he hissed.

He woke up and stumbled foreward. Firepaw was staring as Bearpaw lied bloody and limp in the center of the wolve's semi-circle. He wasn't dead. Firepaw bounded over, she stood protectively over her bleeding brother and hissed. The sun came out and lit her pelt a flame. The wolves hesitated then attacked. She reached blunt scratch across her left eyes and a batter to her ear. They flung her aside and she hit a tree, hard. The wolves walked over to Bearpaw and stepped on his chest, instantly killing him. They closed in to finish Firepaw, but something scared them and the ran off, leaving her with a broken leg and a bleeding body.

"HAHA!" Rainpaw called in triumph. "My alpha-male wolf call worked! Unless somethig else scared them off." He dashed over to Firepaw. "Oh, no!" he wailed. "Bearpaw!" Rainpaw stumbled on his bad leg from hitting the tree. "Firepaw?" he called "are you all right? They killed bearpaw!"

Rainpaw became angry. Very, very angry. "I'm going to take out those wolves!" he vowed. "One by one!" he paused "Firepaw!" he exclaimed "Are you hurt?" he asked suddenly forgetting his bad leg.

Eagleheart suddenly ran up and saw Firepaw. "Firepaw! Oh-no, wheres your brother?" he asked.

Firepaw faintly pointed to Bearpaw and passed out.

"Bearpaw!" Eagleheart yelled. He begin to shake him with his paw."H-hes dead..." Eagleheart started to cry with the tears he couldn't really produce. He put both Firepaw and Bearpaw on his back and padded towards camp.

Rainpaw jumped up and padded behind Eagleheart worriedly until they got to camp and got her in the NPC medicine cat's den.

The four cats of the seasons were converseing together.

"How will we get the message through?" Spring qeustioned.

"Prephaps Tearstar?" Autum inquired.

Summer shook his head, "No, it would startle her too much. Shadowsun?" he suggested.

Winter looked up from his pool with a smile on his face. "The sun herself has been hurt, she won't be counscious for a while. Her body won't know, but Sun will be waiting. We can tell her."

The four nodded in agreement. They vanished in a roll of power.

So? How you like? Well, now its 9:15 and let's work on dare to be dared.