Okay this is the next chapter also I have taken a look at the four first reviews and to my great suprise they werent anything bad, something that I kinda expected seeing how my two previous stories were not all that good. Now as for Hinatalover13 Yes Iam planing on giving naruto the five treasures of the 6 path sage( even if I only know what the first four are so I'll most likely make one up myself or wait and see if it appears in the manga) but I want to make it in good way and not just have them appear out nowhere.
so thanks for the kind words.
''Talking''
'Thinking'
Konoha park one month after the first chapter.
Naruto was sitting in a tree at the park watching the other children play as he himself was wondering if anyone of them would be joining him at the academy in five weeks. As he thinking about this a small bird came and landed on his shoulder. '' Well now what do you have for me today my little Tori(Bird)'' narutoasked the bird turned it's head towards him showing it's small gray-ish blue rinnegan eyes before dropping a look of hair and then fly of. Naruto made a small frown at the info he gained when the bird looked into the his eyes. Apparently the hair was from a little boy in Water country named Ranmaru who has impressive eyes but sadly a rather weak body. 'So Kyo-sensei do you think you can do anything with this?' Naruto mentally asked his tenant. ''Hmm not sure I'll see what I can do so until then just be patient and see if you can find something else to perocupie your time with'' was the demons response as naruto put the hear in his mouth and swallowed. Naruto closed his eyes and started to think on what to do in order to forget this latest disappointment. Now you are probably wondering what this was all about well the thing is that since Kyo couldmake naruto's body gain the mokuton, sharingan and rinnegan then he could most likely do the same with other bloodlines but they soon learned that was not the case after trying to get the byakugan. Kyo had discovered that at most he would be able to add a small fraction of another doujutsu to naruto's eye any more would result in the eyes hurting like hell and the improvements being rejected. Body based bloodlines however would be easier to deal with but only a few would get added completely others would end up as weaker or incomplete versions. Chakra based ones could easily get added the problem however was that naruto didn't really need them in the first place as his rinnegan not only allowed him to use the all the *Godai Seishitsu Henka (Five ElementsNature Transformations)* but thanks to the Senju DNA the rinnegan also lets him combine them without to much trouble, still adding the other bloodline would make all of them easier and more effective since the potency of elemental affinities would increase and also mix together easier.
As Narutowas just sitting there he was closeto falling asleep but quickly became alert when he felt a small pulseof chakra now normaly he wouldent care as things like that was common in a ninja village but naruto having to deal with Kyuubi-haters more then once turn to were the pulse came from and used his eyes that now had bit of the byakugans telescopic vision and what he found was not what he was expecting.
Kuroame Kumojin a proud and powerful (or atleast thats what he likes to think) jonnin of kumogakure was positioned near one of the park in Konoha hiding while going over his self appointed mission in his head and keeping an eye on his targets the clan heir of Konoha. He licks his lip while graping the item by his waist as a way keep a hold of his own confidants as the item was the main reason for this. The item is the *Shichiseiken (Seven Star Sword)* one of the*Rikudō Sennin no Hōgu(Treasured Tools of the Sage of the Six Paths)* that Kumo had collected. The Shichiseiken was given to his grandfather by the Nidaime RaiKage after the death of the *Kingin Kyōdai (Gold and Silver Brothers)* and has since then stayed in the family but now was at risk of being take away after the failure and death of his brother in his mission to steal the byakugan two years ago and that cannot be allowed it was HIS! nobody else was more worthy but for some reason the Raikage doesn't understand but soon he and everybody else in Kumo would see the greatness of the Kumojin and then...
''You do realise that your thinking out loud don't you?'' Naruto said in a deadpanned voice as he stood behind the Kumo Shinobi causing himfreeze up a few seconds before turning around. ''Huh? Your just a... whatever get lost brat I don't have time for you'' the (from now on I'm going to call him Baka) Baka said before he saw naruto making five handseals before saying ''*Inton Genjutsu: Sekai no Yami (YinRelease Illusion: World of Darkness)*'' and with that the baka could no longer see or hear causing him to freak out, start to slash around with a kuni and finally trip over a root making Naruto sweat-drop. 'Is this guy for real? evenan academy student can get out of this just pulse your chakra or use the *genjutsu kai (Illusion release)* once to get back your hearing and then again to get back your sight in fact it would most likely break if you channeled more then a D-ranked jutsu's worth of chakra' naruto mentally deadpanned as he reached down and graped the baka's head and started to use the mind reading abilities of the *Ningendō (Human Path)*(Just in case you don't know the main body can use the path's abilities as shown by Nagato in his battle with Hanzo were he repealed a lot of kunai with something similar to the *Tendō (Deva Path)*) to steal any useful information he may have will also talking to Kyo. ''So how dose the fact that you took down a jonnin feel?'','I really don't think this guy counts as a jonnin seeing as apparently he used his father and grandfather's glory and fame along with the reputation of the sword to worm his way up the ranks this guy only has two jutsu besides the basic three of all villages and only has a low chunin training in Kenjutsu as he only knows half of the sword style he was taught',''Wow this guy sucks big time'','I know but any way I'm finished so let go home',''What about the body?'','Hmm how about we give him a nice and proper burial',''Really?'','Fuck no lets just leave him here to rot' Naruto told the Fox before pulling out the baka's soul, picking up the sword and other equipment and then started walking home.
Unkonwn to Naruto someone had been watching him and had been sitting frozen in fear when naruto meet the baka as memories from two years ago came back, that person was Hinata Hyuga who just sat and watched as the same boy who saved her from a group of bullies a year ago now most likely saved her again from one of the bad men that wants to take her away somewhere. It wasn't until an hour later when a branch family member came and said that it was time to go home that she regained the ability to move and later when she had fallen asleep in her bed the name she once heard the Hokage call him one time in the park a few weeks ago was something she repeatedly mumbled in her sleep ''Naruto-Kun''.
The Next Day.
That morning naruto could be found in a clearing surrounded by trees training in using his new sword with the help of the sword style that he had take out of the Baka's head, another thing was the power of the sword itself witch Kyo had a good amount of info on (Then again he was part of the things sealed inside the sword original owner so that not to strange seeing as in this story the Kyuubi unlike the other more mindless Bijuu also haslarge parts of the Juubi's memories) the most well known thing about the sword is what it can do when used togheter with the other tools by having the *Kōkinjō (Golden Canopy Rope)* pull out someones soul and then use the Shichiseiken to cut off and curse the soul after that the soul would be recorded by the *Benihisago (Crimson Gourd)* after that if the cursed one breaks the words curse( Say the word they said the most in there lifes) they would be sucked into the Benihisago there might be something after that involving one of the two remaining tools but Kyo is having a hard time remembering at the moment however he dose recall that the sword has more then one curse in fact there are six curses and one anti-curse giving it a total of seven curses( Yes its a lot but it is called the SEVEN star sword for a reason).
The curses are the Word Curse: The standard curse that sucks the victim into the gourd if they say there most used word this is also the only one that you need to cut the soul with the others will still activate if you cut the body this is also the only curse that is used since nobody knows how to use a different one, the Illusion Curse: When the victim is cut by the sword they will slowly start to hallucinate and most likely going mad after some time, the Beast Curse: When the victim is cut by the sword they will slowly start to turn into an animal what kind is a bit random mostly something fitting for the one cut, the Penance Curse: : When the victim is cut by the sword they will forced to experience all the pain both physical and emotional that they have inflicted upon other for unjust reasons( so things like self defence or things like that doesn't count) and if enough (like for someone as Orochimaru) it might even kill the victim, the No-Evil Curse: When the victim is cut by the sword they will hear someone in there head say See no evil, Hear no evil and Speak no evil and then lose the ability to see, hear and speak, the Misfortune Curse: When the victim is cut by the sword they willhave extremely bad luck all the time for seven years (so its the same as breaking a mirror) and the seventh and last curse the Anti Curse: The user can by wishing for it make the names of those cursed appear on the sword and then by speaking there names release them from whatever curse there under. The last thing about the sword is that the Illusion, Beast, Penance, No-Evil and the Misfortune Curses can only be used once a week each no matter what day they were used so if you use all five of them then you wont be able to use them again until the end of Saturday and beginning of Monday and that in order to chose witch curse you want you will have to say it's name shortly before the cut, during the cutting or shortly after you cut the victim.
In short it is a powerful and nobody would know that it is the Shichiseiken as Naruto had found a way to form a connection between the sword and his rinnegan and can now summon and change its form whenever he wants and has now change it into a completly new form (It now looks like the cursed sword that Saga has in the One Piece Movie Curse of the Sacred Sword).
As Naruto was training another one of the little animal spies that he had summoned came into the clearing this time it was a lizard but it didnt have anything with it but that okay after while they dont have Naruto's sharingan abilities they can still see chakra and observe as people train and when Naruto made eye contact with it he smiled as it scamperd of before continuing his sword training while looking at his new memories making sure to pay close attention to what the Sandaime Tsuchikage was saying as he was teaching his granddaughter Iwa's secret flying jutsu.
And there is the second chapter just so you know I'm going to be working for a few day so it might take some time before I get the chance to make another chapter.