If you read chap. 3 I fixed all mistakes & added new stuff so re-read if before you read this, and sorry I was so mad the first time I wrote chap. 3 my computer didn't save it so I had to redo it so I didn't read it over, but it's all better cuz I had awesome day.=] Italics are a flash back.
How it should be
Chap.4
Spencer opened her locker, it was about 15 minutes before first bell. It was a hot Wednesday & Spencer wore a long sleeve shirr & a pair of shorts. Spencer hadn't talked to Carmen since Sunday, it was the first time it happened. Carmen and Spencer where at Carmen's new studio moving her things. "Baby, lift with your legs." Carmen hollered.
"I am," Spencer answered annoyed.
They finally put it down, "Baby, you're not as strong as you just to be, you're getting a little chunky." Carman walked over and squeezed Spencer's but.
"Heyyy," Spencer swatted Carmen's had away. "I'm out of there if that's how your going to talk to me." Spencer grabbed her jacket and head for the door.
Carmen pulled Spencer's wrist and pulled her, "Don't walk away from me when I talk to you." Carmen held Spencer's hand so tight.
"Carmen I have never seen you like this, you're hurting me." Spencer whimpered.
Spencer was taken away of the memory of last Sunday, by Madison coming over to her. Then she felt a kiss on her cheek, "Hi baby, here I got these for you." Carmen handed Spencer a bucay of flowers.
"Wow you're so luckyyyy, I wish Aiden would something like that for me." Madison said to Aiden who just walked over & gave him a look.
"Can I walk you to class?" Carmen asked, Spencer nodded and put the flowers in her locker. Let me carry your books." Carmen took Spencer's books. Spencer waved good bye to Madison and Aiden.
Spencer woke up from the dream, that's when is all went downhill. It happened more and more often after that. Now Spencer feared for her safety, but she knew what to do. She walked down the stairs in to the kitchen, where her mom Pula Carlin and dad Author Carlin sat at the table.
"Good morning sweetie," her dad said "sorry we didn't talk last night, how was your day yesterday?" her dad said apologetically.
"Ummm good, yesterday in health we talked about relationships. In one scenario a girl said she was in an unhealthy relationship and wanted to know how to get out, but the bell rang so we didn't finish, but I wanted to know I think it would be interesting to here. So I thought you might know the answer." Spencer asked pretending to take inters in something she know her dad was interested in.
"Well first she should tell someone, then go somewhere public with friends nearby and brake up with the person she is dating." Her dad was happy to talk to his daughter about everyday things he dealt with. "If you want we can run through other scenarios?" Author was happy to see the inters in his work, he didn't talk about it that much.
"Yeah, maybe later I have to go to school, but yeah I would like that." Spencer smiled, kissed her parents goodbye and drove off to school. She wondered how she could tell, to help her she would tell the dad first and just try to keep this discrete.
Try not to talk to Carmen, avoid her at all cost. Spencer told herself, you can make it through Spencer.