I have a few things to talk about. 1) Yes, I changed my pen name cuz I use this name forever thing 2) I do use spell check, & I try my best 3) I read my "states" for my story and I guessed people from the USA & UK but OMG people from like Germany, Australia, New Zealand, and a lot of places I can't pronounce, that is so cool. 4) I need a beta reader, please please please! Thank you.
How it Should Be
Chap.15
Spencer sat at her desk playing on the computer and chatting on AIM with Ashley. When a pair of hands covered her eyes "Guess who." An unfamiliar voice said.
"Ashley?" Spencer giggled.
"NO, try again." the person giggled, and then another person giggled.
, and Spencer know who it was.
"Alison!" Spencer said pulling the hands off her face and spring around to see a heart shaped face with blond wavy hair, and tight red lips.
"Spency!" Alison yelled pulling the girl in to a tight hug.
"I have missed you." Spencer said still hugging Alison.
"Me too, sister." Alison said as the hug broke up. Spencer noticed the other girl in the back of the room. "Spencer this is Trisha, Trisha this is my sister Spencer." Trisha stuck her hand out, and Spencer met her hand and shook her hand.
"Nice to meet you Spencer." Trisha said.
"Yeah, nice to meet you to Trisha." Spencer said with a giggle.
"Soooo, now that you know my friend I want to meet you 'special' friend." Alison said plopping herself on Spencer bed, and swung her legs.
"You can sit Trisha, and you will meet her, before we go out on are date this evening." Spencer said looking in the mirror and fixed her make-up.
Alison went over to Spencer and started playing with her hair and saying "Ya know your hair is soooo pretty." And she flashed a dazzling smile.
"You have only been here for like a second and you want something, what is it?" Spencer said.
"Well I just got here and I want to spend time with you so can Trisha come. Me and Trisha can pretend were on a date or something." Alison gave Spencer the famous Carlin pout.
"You don't have to pretended Trisha and you are gay I'll call Ashley and ask her if we can go on our date another time." Spencer said picking up the phone.
"Ummmm Spencer just for the recorded I am gay." Trisha said.
"Well then you don't have to pretend you like…" Spencer looked and her sister and with a disgusted look "THAT!" Spencer said with a laugh.
"HEYYY!" Alison said then hit Spencer with a pillow. The girls all shared a laugh together.
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Spencer called Ashley and asked her if they could hold the date back. Spencer had to use baby talk, but Ashley said it was ok. Spencer, Alison, and Trisha where putting on make-up and getting dressed for their night out, then the doorbell rang. "I'll get it Spence it's always good to keep them weighting." Trisha said with a wink and a cheeky hip bump, and then ran down the stairs.
Ashley stood on the front porch with a Camellia flower in her hand. "Ummm, you must be Alison." Ashley held her hand out.
"No, I'm Alison's friend Trisha" Trisha shook Ashley's hand.
"I'm Ashley." Ashley said
"Nice to meet you." Trisha said.
"You too Trisha." Ashley said.
"Spencer is almost done getting ready, thanks for letting me and Alison tag along. What's with the flower?" Asked Trisha.
"Well when me and Spencer have a date a try to pick a flower for my emotions." Ashley said touching the flower softly and looked at it. When Ashley looked back up Trisha was right in front of her.
"What's you emotion?" Trisha said in a deep voice.
"Admiration and perfection." Ashley said low. Trisha looked at Ashley's lips. Ashley stepped in to the den quickly. "So when will Spencer be down." Ashley said looking around.
"Soon." Trisha said step next to Ashley.
"Oh." Ashley stepped away from Trisha. Ashley hared someone cough by the steps and Ashley assumed it was Alison.
"Presenting Miss. Spencer Carlin." Alison said. Ashley ran over to the stair cases and stood at the bottom and weighted for Spencer to get to the bottom. Then kissed her on her cheek.
"You look very pretty Spencer, here is a flower I got." Ashley said and hand her the flower.
"What's with the flower?" Asked Alison.
"When me and Spencer go on a date I get a flower that means something." Ashley said.
"So, what does it mean Casanova?" Alison said with a giggle.
"Admiration and perfection." Ashley said with a blush.
"Thank you Ashley." Spencer said with a kiss.
"How sweet so we read to go out?" Alison asked, and everyone nodded.
"Does anyone have any idea what to do to night?" Ashley asked.
"Yeah," Alison said.
"What?" Spencer said.
"You'll see." Alison ran to Ashley's car laughing.
& Please I need a BETA! & please ckeck out my new one-shot The True Story of: a Heart Broken Girl.