an: okay so i saw the review and it was disapointd so i looked up and saw samus is girl but i think is stupid is because nintedno doesnt make girl games and also that other things are there but are not on box so i try to make better because i want to be best so tell if i doing it wrong again kay?
suddenly jellyfish were katacad and exploded and samus looked up and saw his sister! samuses sister was samatha aran like in sg1 and also like carter she likes to be called sam. so she is sam aran. sam also had a suit and it was a pink suit because it was the gravity suit.
"hi bro" she said smiling which samus couldn't see but he knew she owuld be "i guess you did need help" "i did not was letting you get expereince" "oh okay" sam was asmued and acepted that.
"so you have yellow suit is that becuase oyu lost youyr powerups?"
"yeah" said samus who wwaas happy that had thotful sister. she give him his powerups back but not all of tem becuase she did not have all of them so samus get bcak ice beam and misles and varia wich was suit ment for samus.
"so sam how did you come to ZEBES?" asked samus who was wondring because he wanted to know. sam was not in untied fedraation marines becuase they did not hire girls for fiting.
"well i-" began sam befor metroid shotted at them both.
"die dum samus aran and sam aran. wen i get you you will be kkated until both dead and crying!"
"bro we need to run" said sam and samus did not want to agree but he had to because she was right and metroid had just shotted off the wall next to him. so they ran quickly from the machine laser guns of metroid and they ran out of phendraan down to brinstar. samus would have used speed booster to go at speed of sight but he did not have it. then he rmembered that he lost it because he thot of the chzo were dead. then he thot that the chzo were dead, so he get said again and almost fall into lava pit which was often in brinstar but he caught himself. then he rmembr that varia suit is immune to lava, and he gladed.
by the time sam and samus had outrun metroid to brinstar, they had run out of breathe. trying to gasp breath back, they were akaced by mazda. mazda blew up. "that was a close one samus!" said sam and samus regonized the familar tone and smiled and said "yeah." now they new they had to get items which was left there by the chzo, but then metroid burst threw wall to aktac and shotted at them.
this time sam and samus ran super far, all the way to norryo. norryo was a really cold place on the planet but METROID FIND THEM THERE TO. so they run to norfare, tourean and then the overworld but each time metroid find them! "is there no place on ZEBES we can hied?" asked sam who was scared becauxe she was not samus." "yes we can but first we must blow up the TACKER!"
sam did not know there was a taackrer. "there is a tacker?" "yes sam it was on my suit." "you dont think i did it do you!"
to be continued again!