an: sorry that it was so long for the updating but i forget were i was and so i have to do homework.
"here iam" said samus who was alright.
"whre" they all asked becuase they did not see samus. than samus decloked and said "here!" and was behind them. samus had gotten the cloaking shield.
"samus how did you get that!" they all asked. "okay" samus said and said his story about how he got it.
when samus was backflipped into the lava, he was okay but hurted. he was okay because the lava was fake, but hurted because he hit the head on the ground. samus went to sleep and then pressed the botton to open the trap door. samus fell through the trap door. he found a chzo room! the chzo room was where the chzo were to pray and make stuff. they put statues for praying and techno music for making stuff. they made a stuff here and it was a cloaking shield!so samus woke up and saw the item to take so he took it. then samus climbed back out and turned the cloake on. he said "he iam!" and surprised everyone because they did not know he was there.
"okay" said sam but what now? they did not no what to do now because they were lost. then the choir sang directions and the knew where to go so they went. they took the elevator to find and they went to the blood.
ELSEWHERE
"argh samus escaped my ridleys" said metroid. metroid was aganry because hhe sent his ridleys for aktcinang and they were nothing. so he was angry. "why dont they die and so does samus!"
then a pirate walked up to metroid. "when are you going to attac?" "rite now!" and metroid shot him.
"but wat shuld i do to kill samus and the fedraation?" then metroid realized that he was stupid. "i will attak fedraation wile samus is still here!" said metroid. so metroid pressed the button and sent the space pirate feet which exploded the fedraation concil and the newspapers said the next day "metroids attac!" but it was just the concil so don't worry.
BACK TO THE OTER PlACE!"
now samus was at his ship to chek on his upgrades. he also looked at the news and did not see anything because the newspapers only updated the next day. "i guess it will be okay to not look at the newspapers for a few more days." said samus and would not know about the explosions. so he went back to norfare.
in norfare they decided they were bored so they went to bryyo. bryyo was like norfare but instead of lava it was oil. i think it was like because oil is bad or something. thats wat my brother said. anyway, in bryyo they were walking and suddenly metoid came on radio. "i am going to annonce my" said metroid but then gertrude blew up the speaker. they all laughed and admin said "im sure it was nothing important." then they laugged again.
but soon after this a new man shhowd up! he was in shadow but he said "samus i have sometgibf you must here!"
samus said "who are you!"
to be continued