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I sighed into my pillow as the bugle went. It had been a week since 'it' happened, and I was totally not wanting to have to talk to you know who...
We headed down to breakfast, and I nearly relived Bill's...reaction. He was still in recovering- his reaction was very severe, and he could have died.
I sat and ate my eggs in silence.
~o0o~
I mentally prepared myself for horseback riding. After slipping on my skinny jeans, I headed out the door with Jenny, and met up Autumn half way. She was headed to Creative Writing by the stream. I saw Fang slip into the woods. I glared at the back of his head.
"Mad?" Autumn asked, looking in the direction of my killer glare.
"Maybe..." I mumbled, looking down.
She sighed. "Face the feelings Max, face the feelings." She waved goodbye, and walked to larger rocks that they sat on for CW.
"Bye," I grumbled, and kept walking.
I mounted Ringo and kicked him hard. He started trotting. I had him circle the ring a few times, but then he started slowing. I kicked his four times, hard, and he started cantering.
I freaked- I had no idea what to do. I couldn't post- he was going to fast, so I started getting bounced around, and soon, he bucked me off his back.
I grunted when my back hit the dirt. I went to get up, to capture Ringo, but it didn't work that way. Ow...everything ached.
Someone slid in the dirt on his knees. "Max!" Everything went black.
~o0o~
My eyes fluttered, the world hazy and spinning. When everything went into focus, Fang was dozing off in the corner. Great...he was the guy. I moved, and his dark eyes shot open.
The nurse came in. "Well, well, well," she glanced at the clipboard at the end of my bed, "Max. Your awake." It was really early, no girls were around.
"What time is it?" I asked, confused.
"I'd say about six."
"PM?"
"No dear, AM."
"I've been out all night!"
"Actually...for the past two days!" She gave a little laugh. "Your lucky Fang here ran you here right after you fell."
I looked at him, and he seemed angry. "I'm going to tell your counselors and sister that you have woken up. Excuse me."
She walked out the door, and I turned to Fang. "Thanks..." I mumbled.
He was shaking. "Don't ever do that to me again!" He screamed, like he had been holding it in for the past...two days.
I glared. "To you? I thought I was just some hot shot newbie."
He sighed, "You were. When you ran away. Max...I like you. I do. Give me a chance." He and I both blinked, him as if he didn't mean to say that at all, me because of what he said.
"And Lissa?"
"Trying to make you jealous."
"I do have a boyfriend."
"So? Can he do this?" He leaned in and repeated his previous actions.
"I don't want to cheat Fang!"
"Then don't. Do you like me?"
I wasn't sure. "Well...I guess but-"
"Then what are you doing? Send him a letter."
"Oh so I have to break up via snail mail? No."
"Max..."
I sighed, "All this is going to be is a summer fling. Nothing more. Sam and I have history, he goes to my school..."
"Was it a lightning strike for him? No. I know that. But it was for me." He sighed again. "Think about it."
He walked out the door, leaving me gripping my sheets.
~o0o~
The next day (they had me stay in the infirmary overnight) I headed back up the long annoying hill, and entered the cabin.
"Max!" called Abby, smiling. Fang, sitting in the corner, still reading his book, raised his eyebrows. I had been thinking over night. Maybe I did like Fang...
In that instance, a note was dropped in my lap.
Thought about it? Meet me in the Lighthouse.
Fang walked out the door...I would be with Fang...and if it worked out I would break up with Sam. And if it didn't...who cares? Camp secret. The only one hwo knew Sam was Ella and she wouldn't tell. This was out of character for me and I kind of liked- taking chances, living on the edge...although that edge was a summer fling...
I asked to go to the lighthouse (it was Siesta) and Beth agreed.
I skipped down the hill, my heart beating fast. I opened the door, and looked around. Nothing was in the immeadiate are, so I turned left for the showers. Nothing in the girls...I opened the door for the guys, and walked through it... Maybe he was in the bathroo-
Strong arms grasped my waist, and pulled me close. What happened? Well...just a make-out session, but it ended quick, because guys empty their bowels quick, and they would be wondering where he had been.
I was happy...but slightly guilty...
~o0o~
We had been going on with the secret relationship for a while, and it was July 2nd, and news had returned that Bill wasn't returning to camp.
Fang and I were walking to the tennis courts, when some guy whistled behind me. "Ooh...look at that one." He laughed to his friends. Before I had time to come up with a snazzy comeback, Fang slugged him. I shrugged, it wasn't that bad having a body guard.
I saw Ella at the courts, kissing Iggy on the cheek. "Ooooooohhh!" I exagerated with a high-pitched voice. Ella smiled, and I decided it was high time to tell her about me and Fang.
"Hey Ella!" I pulled her to get a racket with me, and I told her.
"How is that going to work"
"Well It's not like Sam's going to find out..."
We walked outside of the shed, and her eyes widened, "Um...you might have a little problem with that plan..."
"What? Wh-"
"Maxie!"
Sam. My life just got a whole lot more complicated.
A/N Heyyy...there's the twist! Hope you like. I'm going to change the summary to this maybe...
Max is sent off to the perfect Camp Sami- against her will. She decides to cheat on longtime boy-friend Sam with camper hottie Fang to be on the edge...but what happens when Sam shows up? She hides her fling from Sam to keep the peace...and makes Fang watch as she fakes being with Sam.
Alright it's pretty bad- but you guys edit it. That's the question.
Answer from last chapter: Tom Hanks. Def.
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