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Abhivi were having breakfast
Abhi - yarr yeh itna pheeka kyu ha
Purvi - yaha par essa hi mile ga don't complain
Abhi - isse zayada masala blue lays ke packet mein hota ha ..
Purvi - toh lays wali company ko boldo nashta bannane ke liye yaha log esa hi khate ha
Abhi - kamal habyarr itna paisa kaamate ho phir bhi masale dar nahi kha sakte life hi bekar ha tumhari
Purvi - masale esse milte ha mein kya hi kar sakti hu
Abhi - theek ha theek ha vese tum kaam kya karti ho ,
Purvi - (shock ) tumhe itna bhi nahi pata
Abhi - areh yarr bhool gaya hounga
Purvi - i am journalist ... media mein hu india mein bhi continue karu gi ..
Abhi started counging listening that ..
Abhi - kya bol rahi ho tum
Purvi got confused
Abhi - tumne profession bhi vo liya jo mere against ha acp sahab jann lele ge mere
Purvi - hum nahi batae ge kisi ko bhi
Abhi - phir theek ha
She came and sat on his lap and round her arms
Abhi - kya hua
she touched his bandage forehead then cheek
Purvi - zayada lag gaya kya
Abhi - areh yarr choti si chot ha ..fikar not sab theek ha ab yeh sab chodho or saman pack karo parso nikalna ha
on otherside
Prateek - i don't want to stay with that man i just hate him
Suraj - usne jo mujhe mara uska badla toh mein zarur lu ga or tumhari maa ko apni taraf karke rahu ga ..
Prateek - mom bhi pata nahi kese keh leti ha ek insan jise mene na ajj tak dekha ha na sunna ha nahi mein janta hu usse mein apna dad manlu
Suraj - hoti ha majboor kya pata paise liye ho tumhari mom ne or isi liye vo black mail kar raha ho
Prateek - app samjhao na
Suraj - mein kya samjhau vo sunti kaha ha abhi bhi dekhna ussi ke sath hoegi
Prateek - app kuch toh kijiye you are my would be dad
Suraj - agar tumhari maa ko pata chala ki school se bunk markar tumbyaha ae ho toh or nafrat kare gi mujhse
Prateek - toh mein jata kaha ?
Suraj - abhi tumhe ghar jana chahiye filhal
On otherside ..
Prateek enter and herd a laugh he saw man and her mom laughing
Purvi - daya dikhne mein pehlewaan ha andar se bacha ha
Abhi - shukar ha acp sahab adopt kar rahe ha usse .. varna mene uski demand se pareshan hojana tha
Purvi - shreya ke parents ko essa nahi bolna chahiye tha tumhe .. unhone indirectly tumhare character par ungli uthai ha
Abhi - chodho na yarr agle maa baap ha nahi lagti secure unhe unki beti mere sath isme meri kya galati
Purvi - daya or kisi ne kuch nahi kaha kya ?
Abhi - daya ne manna kiya tha fir hi toh acp sir adopt karke usse apne ghar rakha ..
Purvi - tumtoh akele hogaye na
Abhi - akela kaha ghar par toh officer sonne ke liye atte ha or sunday ko mujhe bulalete ha
Purvi saw prateek and shocked ..
Purvi - prateek tum
Abhi also got up and smile looking at his son
Purvi - tum toh school gaye the na
Prateek - mom mein dad ke pass tha
Purvi - (angrily ) prateek !!
abhi hold her hand she saw him and nodded in no
Purvi - prateek pack your
Prateek - mom why can't you understand yeh admi anjan ha na mein janta hu isse
Purvi - (angrily) tamizz kaha ha tumhari kabhi thapad nahi padha na abhi tak
Prateek - mein kahi nahi jaa raha ..
and he went into his room
Abhi - kya yarr tum acp ki atma lekar ghus gayi
Purvi - tumhe mazak sujh raha ha tumhare rehte vo kisi (but she was cut by him)
Abhi - (cutting ) kya kaha tha mene
Purvi became quite
Abhi - mature nahi ha purvi vo ajj ki soch rakhe ga lekin hum maa baap ha hume uska future sochna na ha sirf ajj nahi
Purvi - abhi vo itna bada ha ki yeh sab samjhe
Abhi - lekin vo abhi bacha ha humare barabar nahi ..
Purvi - esse hum mumbai kese le jae ge
Abhi - baharosa rakho tum bhi janti ho mein jo wada kardu usse nibhata hu ..filhal mein chalta hu
Purvi - (shocked ) kyu
Abhi - jsse acha nahi lagega ..
Purvi - tum kahi nahi jaa rahe ho
Abhi - purvi
Purvi - (determin) usse acha lage yah bura usse yeh manna hoga ki tum usske baap ho or agar tum gae na toh.. mujhse bura koi nahi hoga ..
Abhi - or tum itna bhi kya karo gi tumse bura koi nahi ban pae ga
purvi looked at him and picked butter knife
Purvi - sulli par chadh jaungi tumhe marne ke baad ..
Abhi - areh baby mein mazak kar raha tha ..tum naraz bahut ho rahi ho or kisne bola mein kahi jaa raha hu nahi mein yehi hu
Purvi - pehle kya bakke the
Abhi - areh yarr ab mazak bhi nahi kar sakta butter knife butter lagane ke liye acha ha patni udhane ke liye nahi rakhdo
IN ROOM
Abhi was sitting and thinking he was watching TV aswell as his mind was stuck on one thought
tumne or purvi ne bhag kar shaadi ki ... kisi ki beti bhagai shayad ussi baat ki saza ho ..
he took a deeo breath purvi entered in room
Purvi - abhi prateek ko mein suraj ke ghar bhej ne wali hu thodi der mein tum abhi jao or shuru hojao
Abhi nodded
on otherside
suraj enter in house on the lights and found abhi sitting on sofa and drinking water
Suraj - (angrily ) tum yaha kya kar rahe hk
Abhi - maffi mangne aya yha mera betaa chahta tha ki tumse maffi mangu lekin mood nahi ban raha abhi
Suraj - nikal jao warna police bulalu ga
Abhi - cid wala hu 5 minute mein ma bahar tum andar so yeh galati maat karna
on otherside
Purvi enter
Purvi - prateek
Prateek looked at her
Purvi - yeh book mujhe packing ke doran mili ha suraj ki ha tum jao as i don't want to meet him
Prateek - theek ha dedu ga
Purvi - go and give it now
Prateek made irritate face ..got down and left
on otherside
prateek reached to the gate when he herd suraj anger he stafted listening it
Suraj - kya lene ae ho yaha ?
Abhi cell vibrate he understood
Abhi - (loudly ) suraj mein tumse ek sauda karne aya tha
Suraj - dheere bolo behra nahi hu or kesa sauda ?
Abhi - (loudly ) dekho prateek na bahut jaldi hoagaya tha or vese bhi tumhe meri age dekh kar lag raha ha ki mera 13 saal ka beta ha mein abhi khud 35 ka honne wala hu or purvi bechari ek saal choti ha mujhse 22 ki umar mein toh bhag gaye
Suraj - saf saf batao kehna kya chahta ho
Abhi - (loduly ) mujhe prateek mein koi intrest nahi tum prateek rakhlo mein or purvi khush ha kyuki prateek tumhare sath khush ha (prateek became happy )
Suraj - abbe pagal ha kya baby sitter nahi hu mein samjhe (prateek got confused ) matlab main item tu rakhe ga or free ka mujhe lapet de ga (prateek shocked to hear that )
Abhi - (loudly ) areh tum toh usse scholl se pick up , restaurant lejana , games toys shopping yeh sab karwatte the mujhe laga tumhe prateek mein intrest ha
Suraj started laughing
Suraj - tum jesa na bewakoof mene ajj tak naho dekha .. sahi kiya kyuki jessa tu haina purvi ka baap kabhi tumhe hath toh kya ghar mein ghusne na deta .. 4 baar shaadi ki ha mene vo love marriage samjhe kya ek ko toh mene agli raat hi chodha tha ..mere pass sab ha jo tere pass nahi ha samjha
(prateek eyea filled with tears )
Suraj - or meri baat kaan khol kar sunle yeh tere or mere beech ka game na ab shuru hua ha purvi ko mein apne iss 4 baar ke record ka hissa na banaya na toh mera naam bhi suraj nahi or prateek yah tu beech mein aya toh toh kisi ko jaan se marna mujhe bhi ata
(prateek tears fall down book gall down from his hand and he just left )
Abhi - agar esa ha suraj ji toh
(he got up dusted his hand )
Abhi - apke ast hone ka samy agya ha.. suraj 10 saal jo hum door rehkar mazboot hue haina uss mazbooti ko tum jante nahi..(he came near his face) tu jo bol chuka so bol chuka ab mer sunn ...mere bache or meri biwi se door hi rehna warna itna tukde karu ga ki 4 bar investigation karne par bhi teri body nahi mile gi ..
and he left
Suraj - karne kya aya tha yeh yaha ..
on otherside
Purvi was sitting prateek entered sobbing directly went to his room she felt sad but bit happy
Purvi - prateek kya hua
she went to his room
On otherside
Purvi open the door and saw prateek hiding his face in pillow and crying
Purvi - prateek kya hua
She came near and sat she transfer prateek head in lap he started cryimg abhi entered purvi saw him and smile abhi indicate he will come later purvi sign to stay but he disagree and went out closing ghe door and give son and mother a precious time