First I wish to apologize to everyone that I have been gone for so long. However, there is some good news. I have recently gone over everyone's reviews and the one thing that's kept coming back was everyone liked the story so far, but you wanted to see better spelling and grammar. I have already gone in and fixed chapter one of spelling and grammar and I added a little bit of extra text to the chapter. Please let me know of another mistakes for that chapter ONLY, since I will be taking care of the others.
Another thing that people mentioned was that Donald is swearing. I've skimmed through the entire story and I don't see it, so could someone please point it out for me?
Finally please keep the reviews coming I will try to fix the spelling and grammar over the net few days and upload some new chapters as well. Bye
~corinne15999