Hey guys thanks for all the review I got on chapter 1 glad you enjoyed it and I'm taking In everything what everyone has said I'm trying to find a different way to write but its hard to figure how ,so give me a chance so yeah I hope you enjoy chapter 2.
Chapter 2-planning your next pray
He sat holding her cold fragile body which had now turned pale blue , he couldn't remember how long he had being sat there holding her, he ran his hand down her arm feeling all the cuts he had made, he smiled to himself and leaned down kissing her what once was beautiful face. He sat laughing to himself as he stared down at her cold lifeless body. Thinking to himself that it was what she deserved she betrayed him hurt him, he had to do it like he did to all the others they were her, her the one he loved,trusted,her he couldn't live without. He threw her body onto the floor and got onto his knees rolling her body round the big sheet of plastic, once her body was wrapped he picked her up carrying her out to his van, driving off into the distance for what seemed hours, once he found his destination he dumped the body and drove leaving the lifeless whore as he liked to call them to rot.
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The team had just finished giving out the profile when they got word on a new body that had being found, some of the team got ready to go out to the crime scene while JJ was getting ready to give a press conference to the public warning everyone about the unsub, she was more nervous knowing the unsub would most likely be watching, watching her, as she spoke about him and how angry it would make him and how similar she looks to all those he had killed already. As she pushed the images and thoughts out of her head she focused on what she was going to say in a few minutes time to the press. JJ looked up from the profile she was reading to see Hotch's eyes focused right on her, she met his gaze staring back at him nodding knowing no words had to be said between to the two to understand that she was ready.
JJ stepped out onto the podium outside the police station watching as all eyes of reporters and camera crews were on her. JJ took a deep breath and looked down at the page of information in front of her before looking up at the camera and began her serious speech.
JJ
"we are looking for a man between the age of 20 to early 40's he looks like any other man of that age tall average looking he wont stand out he will fit in, may even be invisible to peoples eyes, he is a very dangerous man who we believe to already killed 8 woman we are blonde and are aged between 20 to early 30's but we are all asking all woman to be careful and to look out for anyone suspicious ,keep your doors locked don't go anywhere by yourself keep your phone on you at all times and make sure someone knows where you are at all times. If you see anything out of place please call our tip line that is on the bottom of your screens immediately thank you."
JJ walked off before anyone could bombard her with questions she headed towards to station doors knowing Hotch and other officers were following her, she walked into the conference room and sat down taking a deep breath.
Hotch
"good work hopefully it will get through to people"
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He watched as the young blonde woman stepped in front of the cameras he watched her every detail how she exhaled a breath before she started speaking, he listened as she spoke ,spoke about him a smile creped across his face ,he couldn't help but grip his hand around the arm of the sofa as he watched her and how she had a soft angel voice, she had so much beauty, he felt like he was watching her, she was her, all he could see was his lovers face the one he needed the one he would make suffer. He watched as she walked off the man behind her taking control he knew it was going to be a challenge taking her but he would take anyone down that got in his way. He got out of his seat and grabbed his keys he climbed into his van and drove down to the police station and he waited ,waited until he could see her face, all of her in person.
Morgan , Prentiss and Reid all walked over to the crime scene ,as they walked over to the body they weren't expecting to see half of what they saw, Emily looked over at the body and took a deep breath, she had never seen anyone look so beat up or cold. She bent down next to the body looking closely at all the cuts and bruises ,she looked at Morgan raising her eyebrow.
Morgan
"well he doesn't care about anyone finding the bodies anymore"
Reid
"yeah and he's expanding look at these tool marks there from being electrocuted"
Emily
"great so now he uses tools and electric to torture them "
Morgan
"what the hell happened to this guy too want to do this"
Reid
"that's what we need to figure out"
After they went over the crime scene they headed back to the station to see a full packed station of endless phones ringing police officers everywhere, they walked into the room where they were set up and sat down listening to what the others were saying.
Hotch
"what did you find?"
Emily
"other than the fact his victims are getting older and he's one sick guy nothing"
Morgan
"he doesn't care if anyone finds the bodies anymore it was an open spot that anyone driving past would notice something out of place"
Reid
"oh don't forget that he has now started electrocuting his victims"
JJ looked at Reid with worried eyes ,she took a deep breath and looked around at everyone else in the room and then focused on Hotch as he spoke.
Hotch
"okay well lets add all that into the profile and hope JJ's press conference made a difference"
Reid
"this unsub is enjoying all the publicity he is getting which means he's reading and watching whatever anyone says about him "
JJ
"so your saying he was most likely watching the press conference to see if anyone had found the body?"
Reid
"yes"
JJ
"that's great"
JJ gave him a little smile and stood up walking out of the room, knowing everyone would be asking her questions for what was going on with her.
Reid
"what did I do?"
Rossi
"nothing she's just on edge we all are"
Morgan
"because she represents victims?"
Hotch
"yes which means we could of just made JJ a target"
Morgan
"that's not going to happen"
Hotch
"it's not because we are all keeping eyes on her"
JJ walked into the woman's bathroom went over to the sink taking a few deep breaths before looking at herself in the mirror, she stared at herself taking in her looks, sometimes she hated being blonde, blue eyed and pretty, she always felt like she was taken for granted seen for her looks not her brain. She ran the cold tap and waited till it was rather cold and splashed the water of her face, she was glad she hadn't put any makeup on that morning otherwise she would look like a panda at that very moment. She grabbed some pager towels drying off her face and hands. She took a few moments to control herself and walked back into the station to see Rossi and Emily walking over to her. JJ smiled at them both stopping in front of them.
Emily
"you okay?"
JJ
"I'm great, what's going on?"
Emily
"where just going over the profile again,Hotch want's us to go to the morgue see if we know how she was killed"
JJ
"I'm coming with you let me just grab my jacket"
JJ grabbed her jacket and followed Emily and Rossi to the SUV and climbed into the back buckling her seat belt , once they got to the morgue they followed the coroner into the room where there latest victims body was laying on the cold table, JJ stepped forward looking at the body ,she looked closely at her face well the parts she could see she had being pretty badly beaten up, she could tell she was a pretty girl in which the unsub wanted to take that away. JJ looked up at the coroner who was showing them some x-rays
Coroner
"I'd put her death between 2-3 days ago due to the colour of her body id say she was quiet in a cold place for quiet a while."
JJ
"do you know how she died?"
Coroner
"well along with the rest of you I thought it was the same as all the other victims due to the amount of injuries ,but I was wrong until I opened her up, at first I thought it could of being from been electrocuted but then when I saw the bruising and her organs it wasn't."
Rossi
"then how did she die?"
Coroner
"she died by freezing to death"
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Once the team had done for the day they all headed back to the hotel, JJ opened the door to her room, locking it behind her, she walked over to the bed crash landing onto it, she was too tried to keep her eyes awake, and she new it was too late to call Will and Henry, she closed her eyes, taking in the silence of the room, she couldn't be bothered to change out of her clothes she was just too tried, all she wanted to do was sleep, and that is what she did. JJ woke up a couple of hours later she looked at her clock and saw the time she ran a hand through her long blonde hair sitting up on the bed when she heard a noise coming from the bathroom, She slowly stood up grabbing her gun she walked over to the bathroom, slowly opening the door but before she had a chance to see if it was clear she felt something hit her on the head and all she remembered was everything going black.
He watched as she felt the station with two others he smiled to himself, she was more beautiful than he thought he watched her blonde hair as it blew in the wind. He followed them too the hotel ,sneaking in behind he watched as she went into her room by herself. They were right when they said he was invisible, he stole a key card off one of the cleaners and sneaked into her room as he saw her sleeping, he crept into the room and into the bathroom, he looked at her stuff when he heard her waking up he smiled to himself and listened as she walked over to the bathroom as he saw the door open he saw her stood there and before either of them come do anything he hit her over the head watching as she fell to the ground blood escaping from her head, he picked her up carrying her quickly out of the room and down the stair case to his van.
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The next morning Morgan woke up and got dressed and headed to JJ's room to check on her ,when he got to her room he saw the door was slightly open he pulled out his gun and kicked the door walking in he cleared the room and walked over to the bathroom here he saw JJ's gun and bits of blood on the floor.
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