Hey guys I'm really glad your enjoying this got some good ideas coming up, anyways I know it's a late update but I've got do many deadlines and im doing overtime at work but since its last week of college till January I shall have to update anyways here's chapter 4 so I hope you enjoy.
Chapter 4-Trying to be strong but the pains too strong
JJ was jolted out of her daze when she heard the squeaky door open and a colder draft come into the already frozen room she was in, she looked up and pulled her arms around herself as she saw him approach her; she closed her eyes taking a deep breath knowing some kind of pain was about come, then she felt it, he grabbed her arm pulling it towards him. She felt a prick in her arm and that's when she knew that everything was going to get ten times worse. JJ woke up feeling like she was floating she felt something cold under her, she slowly opened her eyes to see she was sat down and that her hands and legs were chained up , JJ looked up to see him the man who had taken her ,stood holding a leaver she looked around her when it flashed into her head, that all the victims had being electrocuted , She took a deep breath as the tears fell from her eyes as she screamed out in pain knowing no one could here her.
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Will looked over at his 3 year old son who was sat on the floor playing with his toys, he knew he wouldn't ask what was going on but he knew he would keep asking where his mummy was, and all Will wanted to do was say she was that she was about to walk through the door any minute but he all he could do was hope they could find her in time ,he had being reading all over the other victims and just hoped they can find her before its too late all he wanted was his girlfriend and mother of his child back in his arms and never let her go. Will walked over to Henry sitting down next to him picking up one of his toys handing it to him, he watched him play.
Henry looked up as he saw his dad walk towards him and hand him one of his toys, he looked up at his daddy who was staring up at the big board full of pictures, he followed where he was looking but wasn't tall enough to see past the chair leg.
Henry
"Daddy"
Will
"Yeah buddy"
Henry
"is mummy in trouble cos everyone look sad"
Will looked down at his son pulling him into his lap taking hold of his hands
Will
"yeah bud mummy's in some trouble but we are going to find her and bring her home do you understand that?"
Henry looked up at his daddy and hugged him
Henry
"okay daddy but mummy superhero and you too so you be her superhero"
Will kissed his sons head hugging him back knowing he would be the one to keep everyone still believing and going strong. He kept his embrace not wanting to let go he was smart for a 3 year old none of them could fool them.
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All JJ could feel was pain run through her body every couple of seconds from her face to her,ribs,to her stomach and so on ,she started finding it hard to breathe ,the pain was that bad she stopped feeling it she was numb, numb from all the pain running through her, numb from the coldness that had over taken her body. All she wanted to do was get out of here and see her baby boys face along with her boyfriends and teams. But she new at this point it may never happen. She fell to the ground as she felt the pair of hands that had being hitting her stop. She was too weak to know what was going on and that's when everything went black.
When she woke up again she ran her hand along her body and pulled away as she felt the sharp pain of burnt skin along her arms stomach and chest. She just wished the team and Will would find her already she couldn't take the pain anymore it was killing her and knew she couldn't last much longer. JJ leant her head back against the cold wall she could see her body turning blue from the frozen room she was being kept it ,she knew what was going to happen next he would be her again and leave her to freeze to death.
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Garcia
"okay so I think I've got something ,I looked for someone who lives in the nearby area who has lost a loved one who looks like all our victims I have come up with a long list from the last 20 years."
Hotch
"okay narrow it down to woman between the age of 20-35 who died of a sudden or aggressive death"
Garcia
"got it boss man"
Will walked over to the team watching as Garcia typed away at her computer
Will
"got anything?"
Hotch
"maybe Garcia found a short list of people who were killed matching the victims description in the last 20 years"
Will nodded crossing his arms across his chest rubbing his hand through his stubble
Hotch
"how's the little guy doing?"
Will looked over at his son who was now sat drawing pictures
Will
"well he knows his mum is in trouble and believes his superhero dad can save her and bring her home"
Hotch
"smart kid and we will and you will bring her home and save her"
Will looked at Hotch's gaze nodding at him.
Will
"I wanna be there when we find where she is"
Hotch
"you got it"
Garcia
"I've got something"
All the team gathered around Garcia to see what she had found looking at her screen seeing a picture and names pop onto the screen.
Garcia
"okay so I did what boss man said and I found two hit's a couple who lived together in a nice big house guy cheated on girl lashed out etc, etc he killed her, but then I found out the guy killed himself in prison a few weeks ago, and then I found this a married couple guy who's a meet factory and he found his wife cheating on him and he lashed out torturing her to death. "
Hotch
"send us the address Garcia"
Will walked over to Henry pushing a hand through his sons hair
Will
"buddy we found mummy I'm off to bring her home okay"
Henry
"Daddy superhero"
Will ran out of the room following Hotch to the SUV watching as they made there way to the location, once they pulled up Hotch handed him a vest, Will put the vest on and pulled out his gun following Hotch to the main door. After they had gone in and cleared the place Will and Emily started looking for JJ , they walked out into the back of the house to see a meet factory , they rushed over there hearing gunshots from the house, when Emily stopped listening to her intercom.
Emily
"Will they got him"
Will looked at Emily nodding and running fast towards to factory. She shot open the lock on the door flashing his flash light screaming JJ's name hoping he would find her any second.
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A couple of hours earlier JJ felt her body get jolted off the floor and against the wall feeling the impact as it grazed her arm, then she felt it his fist marking her stomach again and again until he hit her in the chest ,she felt her throat started to close up, she fell to the ground clutching her chest ,as she closed her eyes feeling her breath go away.
Will busted open the door to see JJ laid out not moving ,Both Will and Emily ran over to her, Will put a hand on her neck to see if she had a pluse he pulled back laying her flat on the ground and started CPR on her.
Will
"Come on JJ"
Emily called for the paramedics and watched as rest of the team ran in seeing Will try and get JJ breathing again. After several tries JJ started choking , she opened her eyes to see Will next to her, she took a deep breath before passing out.
As the team sat waiting to here something , Will was walking up and down running his hands through his hair, as he looked at Henry who was sat on Garcia's lap holding the pictures he had drawn. Will looked up to see a doctor walking towards them.
Will
"How is she?"
Doctor
"she's doing well considering everything she has been through the last few days"
Will
"can I see her?"
Doctor
"yes but only one of you okay"
Will looked around at the team and Henry , he walked over to him and picked his son up carrying him to JJ's room, he walked in Carrying a sleepy Henry on his hip. He saw JJ's bruised pale body laying with tubes coming from every part of her body, he sat down in the chair next to her bed placing Henry onto his lap.
Will
"hey buddy you wanna put the pictures you drew for mummy next to her ,so she can see them when she wakes up"
Henry nodded at his father, leaning over to the bed putting the drawings down and watched his mummy sleep, and fell asleep himself, when he woke up he saw his daddy asleep still holding him, Henry climbed out of his hold and gently sat on the bed next to his mummy taking her hand.
Henry
"I knew daddy would save you he is a superhero , I love you mummy please wake up me scared and so is daddy he tried been big and strong but I no he cry please mummy"
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