The False Prophecy

by EternitysTale

Moons ago,Riverclan,Shadowclan,Thunderclan,and Windclan medicine cats met in the forest every month.One meeting,Thunderclan's medicine cat decides to do something that will change the clans forever.He tells the other medicine cats to tell a "false" prophecy,but what if the prophecy is actually real?

2. Chapter 2

Authors note Hi 's just get straight to the point,here.
Yesterday,when i submitted "The False Prophecy" something went wrong.
It ERASED some of the words that i had origanally an example:
What the first paragraph origanally said:
Wind blew through the forest,scattering newly fallen was leaf-fall and all green leaves turned gold and night,however,everything gave off an eerie glow.

What it said after publishing:
The forest was blew through the newly-fallen leaf fall and the leaves were golden and night,however eerie glow.

See what I mean?!
I got a few reviews saying that my grammar was bad and the story was all over the place.
And after reading it over,they were right.
To resolve the problem,I'm using my dad's computer to see if the problem will go away.
If it doesn't,then I will be switching accounts.

Thank you for your time,
EternitysTale