Not Bad At All chapter 4
By: Fujii-kun
Disclaimer: The story is mine. The characters isn't, it's Kishimoto Masashi's. But, little Shinya is mine. she's cute... And.. it's a not profitable story. -chasing Naru in Geisha's attire while Itachi's aiming my head with a BIG kunai from behind-
Rating: say... T ??? I advised T to read it, I'm just making the teen matured sooner.
Warnings: this story contain Yaoi, I don't encouraging you to read it if you don't like it. Flamers will be used for warming me up. It's friggin cold in my new office (now I know the feeling of the veggies and fishes in the refrigerators...). As for Basher, it will be used to bash the flamers so it'll stay hot. and please mind my awful grammar and bad sentence structure, kay???
AN: good afternoon. Sorry for this inconvenience.. my deepest apology for this lateness.. And my mood is sooo dark now... I didn't mean to be, but, I was trapped between two bosses, & they want me to do both as fast as I could, but, I've only got two hands man... and to add my misery, my flashdisk is 'accidentally' re-formatted by my 'dearest' friend without copying the files. Nice. My 4 chapters (incl for House of Happiness and Paint My Love) is disappearing... Sorry for my foul mood, hope it didn't catch you. So, here is the 4'th chapter. ... Terminology will meet you at the end of the chapter.
Enjoy!!!!
Chibi Ita: How dare you...
Me : Me??? what've I done?
Chibi Ita: you dare to make me wait this long... without Naru...
Me : Weeell, I have to choose a dress for him. I got him dressed for this scene...
Chibi Ita: --perked his ears-- Dressed?
Me : Yessssh
Chibi Naru : NUUooooooooooooo... --wriggle wriggle--
Me : Here's Naru-Chan --present Naru in front of Itachi-- Taaa-Daaaaaa... BGM
Chibi Ita : --drool drool-- come're naru..
Chibi Naru : No!!!!! never!!!! --walk away--
Me : Ahahahaha... Naru-chan, look at here –holing out two steaming Miso Ramen--
Chibi Naru : --drooling-- pleaaaaaaaassseeee... -teary eyes-
Me : only if you behave and play the scene...
Chibi Naru : promised... I promised. --nod nod nod--
Me : owkay, after the scene, you'll have your ramen, now, PLAY!!!!
Chibi Ita: --dragged Naru to the center, with maniacal grin--
Me: Oh, BTW, there's another guy will come to make the story merrier. Naru will love it.
Chibi Naru : Heee... dare dare?? (who is it??)
Chbi Ita: -looking at the authorres, and activated his Sharingan-
Me:-snatched a silvery sunglasses and use it... relief sigh-
Chibi Ita: Cihhh -drags the wailing Naru-
Not Bad At All
chapter 4
"Nee-chan?" After knocking, Shinya poked her small head trough the fusuma-door, peeking to see if her Nee-chan is already awake or fall to sleep again. She saw Naruto's head moved to find the source of the sound, and she saw something alien in his usually bright eyes.
"I already prepare your bath, nee-chan"
"hummm.." somehow, he stares at the ceiling and waking up from his bed without saying anything.
"What scented bath soap you want to use, nee-chan?" she asked again. "what about peach?"
"whatever Shinya, banana would be nice..." he answered distractedly.
Shinya now looked at him with an incredulous look in her round eyes.
"Nee-chan, we never had banana scented soap!!!!" she protested,
"eh? What Shinya? Soap? I like peach..." he smiled warmly, as if just remembering something.
Shinya just heaving a deep sigh and walking hurriedly to retrieve the peach soap.
Without thinking, Naruto put himself inside the wooden tub, and start to breathing the warm vapour from the hot water. Then he slowly sunk his head under water and let his hair get wet. And suddenly, he snapped his head and breathed the peach-scented vapour. His mind now wandering far faaaaar away. And in his musing, he include a certain dark haired shinobi with red eyes that (in his mind right now) keep whispering the same words over and over again. He didn't want to replying the scene, but his brain do that task automatically.
////it's not right, is it? But, what if I just imagining it??? or.. or... maybe I'm doing something's not right? But why do I have the images and feeling that he's kissing me?\\\\
sighing, he let his body to slide to the bottom of the tub, letting his nose and cheeks covered by the water, and drown himself till only his slightly long blonde hair peeking from the water. Counted to 10, he slide his body upward and taking a deep breath.
He let his hand slowly massaging his head. And his other hand caressing his body. He touch the places where he remember that night, Itachi's hand on his body, almost inside his furisode.
"Nee-chan... aren't you done yet? You're going to be late for your practices." Shinya peeking with one eye at the door. She saw that her Nee-chan haven't wash his hair, and didn't gave her the answer. So, sighing deeply, she just go stepped inside and grabbed Naruto's shampoo (pineapple scented) beside the tub and pouring it on her palm, she rubbed it onto Naruto's hair, and scratch his scalp. He suddenly let out a sigh of relaxed and enjoying the little hands caressing his scalp. She washed it, pouring water over his head, and grabbing a towel and drying him up. He stood out from the tub, and stepping out from it. He grabbed the towel Shinya offered to, and slid it to cover his slender hips. Then, he walked to his room, followed by a bouncy Shinya, she closed the door behind her. He just sit down on a small cushion before the mirror, and waited for Shinya to choose him a cloth, or for his mind to comprehend today's task, whichever comes first.
Apparently, the task come by earlier, so he reach out his hand and grabbing his brush. He start to brush his hair while Shinya picking up his house-yukata for practice. He knew it, how many times he thinks about it, it will be the same. He couldn't understand the Uchiha's attitude. How many point of view he took, he still don't know what to think. Whatever reason his mind try to formulate, he still couldn't grab it. It's always fleeting away. But now, there's one thing that he could perfectly understand. If he didn't come out for his daily practice and cleaning (the cleaning things is a all girl's job), he sure his ears going to be broken by the Okiya's owner's voice. So, saving his ears, he picked the cloth Shinya had choose, put it on his body, but somehow falling the small obi. After that he nodde to Shinya, and silently walked from the door to his first class. Shamisen and now, he's going to learn about Koto (1) as well.
shinya confused. She frowned her little brown eyebrows As much as her nee-chan's confused, her's a little bit different. Her nee-chan's acted weird this day. 'she' forgot to bring 'her' shamisen, and Shinya have to run to 'her' room to fetch it, while Naruto smiling sheepishly and scratching his neck. They started the training and she saw Naruto learning about Koto and she couldn't help but smile. The second class, is the same. Naruto forgot to bring his Senshuu, and Shinya, once again, have to rush and took the item to Naruto. So, the classes is over, and Naruto is punished with cleaning the tables along in three rooms without Shinya's help. "Aaaw... Isane-chaaaan... yer' meaaan..." Shinya could hear 'she's' wailing to Isane-san.
"It's your fault for not paying attention to the class!!!" she snapped back and leave the room "Don't ask Shinya's help.".
Pouting, Naruto grabbed the washcloth and start to clean the table in the room.
"Aaaaahhh... Shinya, come, come..." Naruto poking out his head and finding Shinya waiting in front of the door. She nodded and obediently come closer and Naruto asked her to go outside.
"I'm hungwyy... " now, he whined, not like a teenager's he should've. Shinya smling and asked "and..."
"Let's go outside and see if we can find a ramen stall." he brightened up at the mere image of ramen.
"Nee-chan, you havent clean it all..." She tried to arguing, even though she know she'll be lose.
"I'm hungwy!!!" no, Shinya could only sighed at his attitude. He's pouting, for holy's sake. He's pouting.
"Just one booowl, wouldn't hurt anyone ,neeeee... Shinnnyaaa..." he whined again.
"You always eat at least three bowl Nee-chan.. Don't lie to me about you and your ramen..." Now now, even though she want to keep her image as a good little sister, she couldn't bring herself not to laugh at his attitude.
He smiled sheepishly and dragged her outside the Okiya (after running to his room and grabbed for his wig, brown contact lenses, and padded bra). 'She' swatched his head to the right and left, trying to locate the said ramen stall.
"Nueee... where's the st- Ahh... he it is!!!" 'She' muttered happily and stalked towards the stall, and flopping down the small round chair in front of it.
"Jii-saaann..." 'she' called cheerfully. "I want a pork Miso ramen and one small beef ramen pleeeeaseee..." 'Her' eyes crinkling cheerfully at the smell of the ramens. Shinya just smiling beside 'her'.
"Hai, Hai, missus... you want veggies in it too?" he asked, smiling at 'her' antics.
"No way, jii-san. Dont put any of them in my bowl". 'She' cutely pouting at the images of greenie thing in the bowl.
"Neee-chaaan... eat the veggies. Don't be naughty." "NO!! I don't like it!!!" 'She' humphed to emphasize 'her' words.
'She' reached out 'her' hands to take two cups and a teapot of tea for 'herself' and Shinya.
"Arigatou, jii-sannn..." and 'she' start to dig in the bowl, slurping and humming like a bee. The old man is just lookig at 'her' with satisfaction that a customer eating his ramen with such a vigor. "Nee-Chaaan, eat your veggies now..." Shinya scold 'her' as she ordered the second bowl of ramen. And Yuri just humphing at the small girl.
"You must eat the veggies if you want to stay healthy, aren't you?" A deep baritone voice is heard behind 'her' back. 'she' squeaked indignantly and unconsciously dropped the teapot from 'her' hands near 'her' frontside. But, before the pot is touching the table, a firm hand reach out and catch it, before put it calmly onto the table. It's a hot pot actually, but, he doesn't show any feeling of hurt at all (A/N: Heck!! I don't know if he ever shows his emotion at all since he's joining Akatsuki).
"be careful, it'll hurt you if it splashed over your body." he bend down and whispered beside 'her' ears, and sit down beside 'her'.
"May I sit here?" he asked politely, and making 'her' slightly jumped.
"S.. sure. Aha.. hahaha.." 'she' nodded while lightly laughing to covering 'her' nervousness. Suddenly, uninvited, and unwanted, the rush of memories of last night event occurred in 'her' mind. It flooded over without blocks. So, 'she' just stare dumbfounded and, when Itachi turned his eyes on 'her', 'she' snapped 'her' mouth closed, not realizing when 'she' had it opened. 'She' turned 'her' head to the table and focusing 'her' eyes onto the bowl of steaming ramen that just placed by the ramen-stall owner. Shinya picking up a pair of chopsticks for 'her' and she picked one for herself.
"One bowl of miso ramen,please," Itachi asked with his low voice. "I figure it's nice, from the smell." he spak to Yuri with something that really (reeeeeaally realllly) looked like a faint smile, making Yuri's eyes widen unconsciously.
"Ummh, yes, it's real nice." 'she' said, all for the sake for he Ramen.
"Thank you," he said to the ramen -seller. He started to pick the chopsticks, and plucked it to the bowl. He stirred it for a few seconds. After he's been sure that it's safe to eat the not-too-healthy food (he's starred at the ramen suspiciously), he began to eat it in a slow composure pace. "It's quite nice." he said, almost to himself. "It is nice!!!" Yuri defended the ramen vehemently.
"Sure it is. I've just never taste it for a very long time. The last time I eat it is when I was ... I don't know, maybe 9?" he said absentmindedly. "And right now, I'm just remembering some of my friend back there who really in love with ramen."
Yuri choked on 'her' ramen, and coughing violently. 'She' took a deep breath while Shinya lightly pounding 'her' back. 'she' just looking at Itachi (The Eating-Ramen-Itachi) wide eyed that Itachi found very funny, seeing that 'her' eyes is really like a big ball.
"I believe he has a bright blonde hair and bright blue eyes." he said that again while slurping his noodles. Again, Yuri looked at him with 'her' big brown eyes.
"Uummh... is that so?" 'She' restrained 'herself' to just jumping around and pulling all the hair in 'her' head. A shaky smile walk pass trough 'her' lips, as 'she' tore 'her' eyes from him and looked down at 'her' second ramen bowl.
"Do you know a guy that have a blonde hair and a pair of blue eyes as well, Yuri-San?" He inquire softly, while looking at 'her.'
"Uh?? A... I don't know anyone like that... U.. U-Uchiha-san." 'she' said with a weary smile on 'her' lips.
"Hmm... I thought so. That kind of appearance is quite rare, don't you think so?" he once again asking with the same low tone (A/N: usually, the tone runs goose bumps in girls body... so sexy..) and fetching the chilli powder cup.
"I believe so, 'couse I never heard or saw a person like that." 'she start to swirling and then slurping the noodles fastly, for the sake to occupy 'her' mouth from talking to him.
"hmmm... Ah, forgive me please, I have to go now. I have something to attend" Itachi stands up and turning to Yuri and bend his body to 'her' body. Setting his face beside 'her' ears, he said in his low velvety voice, "My treat." and blowing a small air to 'her' ear. He straightened his body, wearing a smug-look in his face, and watching 'her' face turned red, he placed money in the table, before bowing politely and disappearing from Yuri's sight.
Somehow, after the heat gone from 'her' face, 'she' deciding that she's not hungry anymore. Slurping the broth, 'she' stands up, with Shinya, and say their thank you to the old man. He smiling so bright to them and waving cheerfully.
"Nee-chan, today you're ordered by a landlord." Shinya reminded her for tonight.
////Well well, well, today is no Itachi's day... I think I could took some opportunity to relaxing. At least, the landlord -whoever he is- he wont staring like I'm a clown or something... geeeezh... and just WHAT the hell he's doing just now????\\\\
Sliding the front door, Shinya says "Tadaimaaaaa...", receiving the "Okaeri..." from someone in one of many rooms. And after putting theit outer sandals in the rack, she really dragged Naruto to his room, and start to strip him. Then she's running to the bathroom and start to preparing his bath. She put rose-scented oil next to his wooden tub. And then she walk to Naruto room, finding out that he's writing something that really looked like a letter. Well, it is a letter.
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Hey, hey, scarry-racoon, what'cha doin there? Busy huh? I'm having fun here. Now I'm a undercover agent, working for Tsunade-baba's order. She screaming shits to me when I refuse it in the first place. I know it'll going to be boring. I'm alone here. How's your job? Is it killing you? I know it is, I bet it is. Muakakakakakak...
Now now, me in here, relly boring to death, heeeyy... could you just step back here and entertain me somehow??? I know you boring too, don't lie to me. so that's why I really want to drag you here. It's not far from your village anyways. It's even in the border of Wind and Fire country. Nobody will know you here. Oh, come oooonnn, maaan, help me a little will ya... HE's here. lend me your hand or something. I'm sending you a bird incase you put some pity on me and wanna have fun here.
-you Know Me-
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Shinya slowly peeked over his bare tanned shoulder and smiling at Naruto's funny -how-to-type. She looked and saw his un-tidy handwriting. How come such a teen write so reckless. Its almost like he never learn how to put some sentences in order. After he finished his letter, he create 4 Naru-Bird and send them in a 4 different directions in order to confuse the enemy on the front of the Okiya. Shinya nudged his shoulder and dragged his hands lightly. He just grinned and ruffled her hair, earning a squeal and a pout. He stands out and walked slowly to the bathroom while Shinya pulling out a few tato-gami (2) and put them in order near the mirror. She also brushing the wig and gathering the scattered make-up tools on the table. After that's done, she just sitting in the room, waiting for Naruto to come.
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Slowly walking out from the Okiya door, 'she' immediately drew attention from everyone in the street. Walked in a slow composure pose, Yuri set 'her' head in an elegant angle and elegantly, picking up 'her' ohashori from her back feet, and hold it so it wont be dirtied. Shinya walked along, bringing the Shamisen too. Many heads swipe to their path, just to look at the beautiful sight in front of them. A very pretty 'lady' in navy blue furisode. White lilies glowing from the bellow side of the furisode and from the bellow sleeves, it's really like that it's made from a silver threads. It's glowing and it's shadow-curves making the lilies like it's carved there. The second layer of the cloth is a white, with green long-leaves peeking and scattered along. A soft yellow obi with krisan flower embroided with golden thread is really clashing with the dark blue furisode. For today, 'she' wears a high black geta. 'She' tied 'her' upper hair, divide it into two, bun it, and clipped it with silver hairpins. The rest of 'her' hair is hardened with liquid candle (3), and make it like a bow bellow the bun, and graced it with blue fabrics and silver pins. and So, 'she' soon attract all the attention, and 'she' really not enjoyed it. It's really un-needed attention, but it can't be helped since the appearance is trully outstanding.
'She' stepped slowly and maintaining the composure stance in the path, but right after 'she' turned to theleft, a big alley near the restaurant, 'she' drop the act, and 'she' must support 'her' body to the wall. Taking a few real deep breath, 'she' tried to calm 'herself'. Shinya looking at 'her' in confuse, and she titled her head.
"Nee-chan, are you OK?" She nudged Yuri's hand in order to gain 'her' attention.
"Huh?? yes, I'm okay, you know... just nervous." smiling to ensure the little girl, 'she' continue to walk and once again composuring 'her walk'. What that she didn't let Shinya know is that 'she' felt a big weight on 'her' shoulder. Since the first time 'she' stepped out from the Okiya, that pressure is getting more and more unbearable. 'She' know exactly who is it, but 'she' couldn't figure out the reason. It's burning 'her' back and pressing weighing 'her' step. It's really hard, kinda like, as if that person tried to nail 'her' on the ground and making 'her' immobile.
////yeah, what d'you expect?? It's his speciality afterall...\\\\
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Well, it's really a funny night for Naruto (beside the burning look scene), when he remembered the act he put to the landlord. He's now lying down onto his futon. This is the first time for him. First day without Itachi, and he find it amusing, but still, not funny in the same time. The first funny thing is that the first time the landlord and his friends landing his gaze onto 'her', he actually dropped his sake saucer and his eyes went as wide as the saucer. He practically gaped and gasping in the same time. Naruto snickering at the mere idea of the landlord nearly drooling at 'her' when 'she' poured the sake for him, accidentally exposing 'her' white slender wrist. And of course it's really funny to saw the landlord's face when 'she' mildly rejected his wish to see 'her' again with the saying of "I'm not available to received your invitation. It's the Owners will." along with a bow that clearly exposing 'her' neck to the rest of the room. And watching the landlord ordering his servant to run and make an appointment for tomorrow night, even if that means he had to pay double.
But, the un-funny things covered it all. How come you're trying to impress a lady by drooling at the mere sight of her fingers? And the hand... the hand is... is... reaaaaallllly annoying. It can't stay away from any part of 'her' body. It's really bad hand. Baad baaaaad hands. It's like he's hand is glued to any part of 'her' body. Tried to touching, tried to carresing, and even try to touch 'her' face. It's really not fun. But that's not all. No no no... The most annoying part is that how he kept to remembering a certain person. And 'she' unconsciously comparing those two all the time.
One is quiet, the other one is too noisy.
One is slender and tall, the other one is fad and pudgy.
One is rarely smiling, the other one is smiling his ugly and almost disgusting smile.
One is keep his hand on himself (most of time), the other one seems like gluing his own hands to 'her' body.
One has thin (but somehow wonderful) lips, the other one had the thick lips that always licked in glee.
One has a slender and long fingers, but very soft, the other one is thick and pudgy fingers, not to mention rough.
How come... how come he has a real smooth fingers? He feels it when he caressing 'her' cheeks yesterday. Naruto felt the fragile-looking fingers again wraped on 'her' wrist. And on 'her' waist as well.
////It's not fragile at all. It's strong. It's powerful, and demanding. But still, soft\\\\
closing his eyes, he drifted his mind to the ramen-land, where everything is in order, where there's no one chasing him, and he danced along with the leeks on the bowl.
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The next day passed without interruption, and he finished all of his tasks and lesson without complaint. He even jokes about the landlord and his friends. The girls told him hat yesterday, not only the landlord's servant that came to hire Yuri. His friends' servants is came along and try to bid. Nevertheless, the landlord's the winner, since he's real rich and more than willing to pay thrice of Yuri's prize for one visit (4). he just smiling and joking about it.
"If this continued, I'll be a rich man, you know???" he teased the girls and wriggling his brows.
"Yeah, and don't forget to give us new furisodes (5), kay?" they teased back.
He laughed and shaking his head, before continuing his job of cleaning the tables.
And so the night continues, and the night brings along the appointment with the fatty landlord. Once again, 'she' felt the pressure and the tension when she walked out from the okiya. The same pressure and tension from yesterday. The same weight, the same burning feeling on 'her' back. All the same. All heavier. 'She' took a shaky deep breath and try to straighten 'her' walk, never minding the sweaty palm. Never minding the slight sweat on 'her' forehead. Purposefully strode forward, trying to getting as far as 'she' could -without ruining the appearance of an elegant woman- from the hot burning tension. And once again the sheer amount of relief is flooding through 'her' senses as 'she' turned to the big alley. But this time, no stopping, as 'she' don't want to make Shinya worried again.
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Tired... very tired. So very very tired. That's what Naruto felt the morning after he served the landlord again. Tired of maintaining the soft mysterious smile on 'her' face, tired of have to pouring sake every five damn minutes just because the landlord want to see 'her' sexy-white-slender wrist. Tired of dancing just because the landlord want to gawking and ogling 'her' gracious body. And of course, tired of trying to shoo-ing another person's image from 'her' mind when 'she' saw the landlord's face. So that's why... that's why he became very very VERY irritated when he heard someone running down the corridor and making so much noise on the hall.
////Why cant they stay quiet for a moment? Is that really hard to lower your noise??\\\\
Right after that thought passing through his mind, someone pounding his front door and Shinya slowly opened it.
"Nee-chan, someone is here to see you." she slowly told him. When she got no response, she started to poked his side with her little fingers.
"Nee-chaaaan... he's here to see you.. and he's waiting in the guest room."
"Tell him to come again tonight." some muffled sleepy voice heard from under the blanket.
"he said that you have an appointment with him" a sleepy blue eye peeked from the blanket, trying to digest the information. He vaguely remembered something, but the sleep-mud seems don't want to go yet.
"He said you asked him to come"
That's the last straw. He bolted from his futon and running down the stairs, making a really noisy voices of hurt and pain. He slammed the guest room open and saw a person standing near the window.
A redhead. And a pair of green eyes slowly making it's way to the door, to a stupidly grinning blond.
"You're here..." Naruto says.
"I'm here..." Gaara replied.
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Terminology:
KOTO: is a traditional Japanese stringed musical instrument derived from Chinese Guqins. Koto are about 180 cm long and have 13 strings that are strung over 13 movable bridges along the length of the instrument. Players can adjust the string pitches by moving these bridges before playing, and use three finger picks (on thumb, forefinger, and middle finger) to pluck the strings.
Tato-gami: basically it's a box por keeping your expensive kimonos. Made from Washi paper that somehow could contain the moist and fleas / moth from eating and making holes in your kimonos.
Well, at some era of geishas in Japan, they usually used liquid candles to tidy their hair. And since it's liquid, it means HOT. (A/N:I mean have you ever got a drop of candle liquid?) It's hardening your hair in place. But, usually, it's done on a hair specialist place. it's not everyday for them since it's hot and taking too much time. They came at least once a week, to wash their hair and get a new hair-do.
And of course a Geisha didn't serve only one guest a night. Popular Geishas usually just drop-by for approximately 30 minutes before she had to flew to the next appointment. It will raised your pride and your rank, since their way of thinking is that 'if you are a famous and popular one, you will have sooooooo many appointment to finished for one night. And because you have many customers, you will (shall) not stay too long in one guest.' something's like that.
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Chibi Naru: My Ramen... ooh, My ramen -- lying on the floor--
Me : -put the bowls near him-
Chibi Naru: --wolfing down the ramen-- why it has so many veggies?
Me : I'm the one who makes it. -humph-
Chibi Naru: Nevermind that --start wolfing again--
Chibi Ita : here's your drink
Chibi Naru: --nod nod--
Me : okay guys, that's it for today. This is the script for next scene. -handed the script-
Chibi Ita : --glares glares--
Me : and here's 5 naru-chan pics in kimonos -handed the pics to It-chan-
Chibi Ita : -snatched it- -smirk-
Chibi Naru: ghivee ith bachk
Me : do we have a deal?
Chibi Ita : we do.
Chibi Gaara : what about me?
Me : ooops, minna-san, here's Gaara. He'll entertain us in the next chapter.
Chibi Naru: Yaaay...
Me : -petting Naruto-chan- So, my dear fellowr eaders, hope you're satisfied by this chapter, and I actually managed to make Itachi-kun come and play again next time. And there's Gaara too. What else do you need, huh??? lets just read and review kay??
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