Loren and Eddie were still at there spot talking

Eddie: Loren what kind of things do you like to do

Loren: well I like to sing and write my own music

Loren's thought: really Loren why did you tell him that

Eddie: you write your own music

Loren: yeah but its not good

Eddie: I will like to hear one of your master piece one day

Loren: sure

Eddie: you don't sound so sure

Loren: well I really don't like to share my music to anybody

Eddie: ah so I guess I won't be able to listen or see any of your work that I'm sure is amazing

Loren didn't say anything she turn to look at the view and got lost in her own thoughts Eddie just stared at her when he heard his phone ring and saw that it was his father he answer his phone and got up and walk away

Eddie: hey pops whats up

Max: I just wanted to know what are you doing

Eddie: I'm at my spot

Max: oh I thought you might be with Chloe

Eddie: nah we kind of broke up

Max: what when? Why?

Eddie was going to and answer him when he heard singing he turn around and saw the singing was coming from Loren

Eddie: um pops I will call you later

Max: Eddie who are you with

Eddie hang up and got closer

Loren: Try to hear my voice

You can leave, now it's your choice

Maybe if I fall asleep, I won't breath right

Maybe if I leave tonight, I won't come back

I said it before, I won't say it again

Love is a game to you, It's not pretend

Maybe if I fall asleep, I won't breath right

Can anybody hear me?

I've got a lot that's on my mind

I cannot breathe

Can you hear it, too?

Loren stops singing and opens her eyes she looks at the view she feels tears she wipes them away she gets up and starts to walk away but Eddie stops her

Eddie: Loren whats wrong

Loren: nothing I have to go

she walk away Eddie fallowed her but when he got there Loren was already gone his phone stared to ring again he saw that it was his dad he ignore it he wanted to know why Loren just left like that he didn't know why he cared so much he got in his car and left to his penthouse when he got there he saw that last person he wanted to see


Loren got home she stayed in her car and cried she didn't know why she was crying she wiped her tears away and got off and went in the house

Jack: where have you been

Loren: its not your business Jack

Jack: don't you talk to me like that I'm your my father

Loren: your not my father okay I'm going to my room

Jack: oh your not going to your room

Loren: why can't I go to my room

Jack: cause it almost dinner

Loren: I'm not hungry

Jack: your going to eat with me and your mother

Loren: no thanks

Loren stared to walk away when Jack grabbed her wrist and pulled her back

Jack: I don't like your attitude

Loren didn't say anything she just looked at the floor

Jack: Loren look at me when I'm talking to you

she kept looking at the ground Jack was getting tired he made Loren to look at him

Loren: I HATE YOU LET ME GO

Jack slapped her to calm her down he let go of her wrist Loren but her hand over her cheek

Jack: Loren I didn't

Loren just ran to her room she slam


Eddie: what are you doing here

Chloe: I came to apologize

Eddie: for what can you just leave

Chloe: no we need to talk

Eddie: there's nothing to talk about so goodbye

Eddie went and closed the door and went and lay down on the couch when he heard his phone it was Max again he answered

Max: finally

Eddie: I'm sorry pops for hanging up on you

Max: what happen

Eddie: oh nothing

Max: are you sure

Eddie: yeah

Max: so are you going to tell me what happen with Chloe

Eddie: can we talk in person

Max: yeah of course I will be there in ten minutes

Eddie: okay

they hang up ten minutes pass and Max was already there

Max: so what happen

Eddie: I caught her cheating

Max: really with who

Eddie: Tyler Roark

Max: Tyler

Eddie: yeah the one and only

Max: I'm sorry son

Eddie: its okay some how I knew they had a thing

Max: well she's out of life

Eddie: you can say that if she stops coming

Max: she will get tired

Eddie: I hope so

Max: so what else has happen like hanging up on me

Eddie: well its kind of long story

Max: I have time

Eddie: okay well like I told you I was at my spot when this girl this my sound crazy that look like ma just came out of nowhere so I couldn't help and stare at her then she tells me to stop staring at her then we star talking about who was going to find another spot but we ended up sharing the spot so we start talking then I ask her what she like to do and she told me she liked to sing and to write her own music and I told her that I would like to hear some of her work then she told me she didn't like to share so I was upset I really wanted to hear one of her songs then she starts to look at the view then you called me so I get up and walk away then I start to hear singing it was her when I got closer to her she gets up and walks away when I stopped her ask her what was wrong she told me she had to go so I went after her but when I get down she was gone so that's what happen

Max: wow so whats the girl's name

Eddie: Loren Tate

Max: Loren Tate are you sure you didn't imaged her

Eddie: what no I'm sure she's real

Max: so describe how she looks

Eddie: she had beautiful long brown hair and really beautiful brown eyes and beautiful smile

Max: sounds exactly like your mom are you sure you're not just missing your mom

Eddie: I do miss her but I'm sure I didn't imaged Loren

Max: okay son well I guess I will be going

Eddie: okay pops

they hug and Max left and stared to think what his dad told him about imagining Loren he shook his head and went up to his room with a lot in his mind


Well here's chapter three I'm sorry if there's some spelling mistake I type this all on my tablet well I hope you like it or and the part Loren sang was from "Hear me" from Imagine Dragons