Chapter ten:
"You're quite right!" A voice that sounds like Misa says.
"We need to alert Brutalight." ShoutingRiver says. "He'll want to know about this so we can begin planning to exterminate them."
The other two nod in agreement as ShoutingRiver told them that Brutalight declared himself king.
And so the three hurry off to go find Brutalight.
Brutalight is enjoying a kill and he is checking for a possible trophy to give to his Queen.
"Brutalight!" ShoutingRiver's voice calls.
Brutalight turns and wonders what could be so important to interrupt him only to find the three siblings racing towards him. "What is it? Can't you see I'm in the middle of something important here?" He questions sternly.
"Misa and another annoying girl named Linda are here!" ShoutingRiver quickly explains.
Brutalights eyes narrow. "WHAT!?" He lets out a growl before continuing. "Why didn't you say that right away? You had plenty of time from when you first called my name while coming here till now." He then shakes his head. "At least you knew to come to me about a rodent problem." He says. "Especially with these kinds of rodents." He looks to the three. "Did they have monsters in them? If they do it may make it a small bit harder if the monsters fully take over them."
"We couldn't tell. We only heard them." ShoutingRiver responds.
"Ok. Let's go to where you heard them." Brutalight calls his sword to his hand only to grip it when it lands in his hand. "We have some pests to take care of." He says.
The three siblings lead Brutalight back to where they heard the two females.
"It was around here." SilverSlayer says.
Brutalight looks around but doesn't see anyone right away.
They begin to look around and RaiVicious finds some footprints not from any of them.
"This way!" RaiVicious calls out.
The others go over to her and they begin to follow the footprints in the dirt on the path.
The footprints lead them to an abandoned warehouse.
The warehouse is brown with rusting metal garage like doors. The windows are also not all completely there as some are at least broken.
"So they went in there huh?" Brutalight says with narrowed eyes. He then smirks. "Well then. Seems like we should be able to surround them once inside." He turns to the three others. "I want ShoutingRiver and RaiVicious to go around back."
The two nod and race off to go around to the back door.
Brutalight and SilverSlayer begin approaching the slightly open garage like door where the footprints lead into the building. They head inside being as stealthy as they can while being fast. They go along inside and they spot the two, well Brutalight does as he peers around the corner but SilverSlayer gets a peek.
Brutalight growls when he sees that the two most likely have monsters in them
FollyAmane seems to be hypnotizing some guys by having them look in her eyes then she uses her ability thanks to the monster in her to hypnotize them in there as the guys are obviously normal people.
There is about four or five guys in there.
LinGalling is painting something that Brutalight and SilverSlayer can't see as she has her side facing them and her back to FollyAmane who is by the couches most of the guys are sitting on.
Brutalight tries to see if he can see RaiVicious and or ShoutingRiver while trying to not alert the others of their presence.
With ShoutingRiver and RaiVicious they make it to around back.
As ShoutingRiver looks for the best way in as he walks along the back area he isn't really paying attention.
Suddenly someone runs into ShoutingRiver and the two stumble with a small noise of surprise.
ShoutingRiver turns to see who he ran into.
Standing there is a male that ShoutingRiver recognizes especially since there was only some changes.
The male is a blonde; on his vest right by the area his nipple is underneath there is a design that is a sideways the tips facing towards his side black flame as a back ground with a grey with brown handle pistol slightly sideways the barrel pointing upward then above the trigger and the area around it is a simpler kind of looking fleur de lis that is dark orange. He has a red and white beaded chocker that has a dark brown cross right in the middle of his throat that is the charm of the chocker but it looks like the string holding it together went through the side ends of the cross. He also has a bracelet that is made of an actually durable black slightly thick string with a charm attached lie the cross fleur de lis that is dark blue. He turns to growl at the other only to stop as the two's eyes meet.
"Mello?!" ShoutingRiver gasps in surprise.
"Near!?" Mello gasps in surprise too. He seems to be unable to stop himself from looking at ShoutingRiver with surprise and interest.
"It's ShoutingRiver now." ShoutingRiver corrects the other.
"My name is now MetierKeehl." MetierKeehl, who used to be Mello, responds. "Seems we both had wandered into the same cemetery and we both ended up with monsters inside of us."
"It's a nice name." ShoutingRiver says.
"You too." MetierKeehl responds.
"Guys." RaiVicious says getting them to turn to her as she lets out a small chuckle. "We need to move or Brutalight will be angry."
So MetierKeehl joins them as they sneak into the warehouse.
ShoutingRiver peers inside to where FollyAmane and LinGalling are in. "Seems the pests have monsters inside them." He quietly hisses to the other two. He spots Brutalight who meets his eyes.
Brutalight gives a serious nod then turns to SilverSlayer who can't be seen as he's hiding behind the wall completely unlike Brutalight who was peering around the corner.
ShoutingRiver crouches slightly and the two behind him do the same as they wait for the signal to move in to strike.
The wait isn't long and pretty soon Brutalight looks back to ShoutingRiver then he gives the signal that is a flick of the hand then he starts moving in.
ShoutingRiver gets up almost completely and he moves in as well ending up standing he normally does.
The others each follow the one who was peering around into the room.
LinGalling is the first to notice them as she has her side facing both groups. "Near!" She puts her stuff away and hurries over to ShoutingRiver but ShoutingRiver pushes her away.
"Don't touch me!" ShoutingRiver growls.
"W-What?" LinGalling goes a little wide eyed.
"Near is no more. I'm ShoutingRiver and you're annoying. An annoying pest." ShoutingRiver says.
LinGalling looks hurt at ShoutingRiver.
"Light!" FollyAmane heads at a fast pace to glomp Brutalight.
Brutalight pushes her away with a harsh glare. "Light is no longer." He says. "I am Brutalight and you are just an annoying pest that needs to be killed. You cannot try to charm your way to me. I never liked you and I have a gorgeous queen." He says with a growl in his tone. "Now prepare to die."
FollyAmane looks really hurt at Brutalight. She then closes her eyes then opens them staring right at Brutalight's eyes trying to hypnotize him to wanting her…. Only it doesn't seem to work.
"FollyAmane!" LinGalling turns and runs towards her friend.
"LinGalling!" FollyAmane whimpers rushing to her friend.
They meet half way and hug.
FollyAmane turns to look to Brutalight. "Don't let them touch us." She says and the five guys that were hypnotized move to her command.
"Break through and kill them." Brutalight commands.
The guys charge.
Brutalight lets out a war cry and his group charges.
The two groups clash as one against one for all of them happen.
Brutalight dodges then raises his sword slamming it down into the guys he's fighting chest.
The guy screams out in pain and starts to fall as darkness swarms the edges of his vision until he is dead.
Brutalight removes his sword and looks around.
RaiVicious has a foot on the guy she was fighting's head as she pulls out her sword.
ShoutingRiver made the guy he was fighting's head explode along with a window beside him. He didn't make things around him change this time probably meaning it was less in power but still strong enough to do the job.
SilverSlayer has slain the guy he was fighting using his scythe to cut the guy open mainly on the throat.
MetierKeehl has also shot the guy he was fighting and is putting the pistol back where he keeps it even before getting the monster inside of him.
But who Brutalight doesn't see is FollyAmane and LinGalling.
This makes him snarl in rage.
RaiVicious and SilverSlayer put away their weapons and Brutalight keeps a hold of his.
"We must find them. Alert the others and we'll gather for a meeting." Brutalight says turning and walks out of the warehouse.
The others, all but one, also head on out of the warehouse.
Curious RaiVicious looks to the painting LinGalling was painting.
It's about quite a gruesome murder.
"So she likes to paint gruesome and creepy things." RaiVicous says then shrugs. "I prefer actually doing such murders myself in my style." She then joins the others in gathering everyone.
A little bit later…
The group that have monsters in them, except FollyAmane and LinGalling obviously, are gathered together some having a little reunion with MetierKeehl though they are all obviously different now.
"So what's so important?" Pillsuda asks.
"Are we being invaded by zombies!?" Automateevas asks enthusiastically.
"No. Something much worse." Brutalight speaks. "It seems that Misa and Linda have come to this world, now they have monsters inside them and they got away when me and those four tried to exterminate them." He nods to the four that were with him. "They used guys that were under Misa's hypnotizing powers. Now it doesn't seem to work on us and I am certain that the best reason being that we have monsters inside of us which affects her powers making them useless. She isn't looking right into the eyes that leads to the true soul since there is two personalities in there as there is a ghost monster in there as well." He explains.
"I'm surprised they can even stand each other." ShoutingRiver adds as Brutalight takes a second break.
"They go by FollyAmane and LinGalling now. Keep an eye out for them and exterminate them or report it to me or my wonderful queen." Brutalight gives a smile to LawPerfidy who returns it. "That is all." He closes the meeting and the group splits up as Brutalight heads to hang out with his lover and queen.
Most going their own way but a few like SilverSlayer, RaiVicious, MetierKeehl and ShoutingRiver go together.
MetierKeehl obviously quite in to ShoutingRiver as he even puts an arm around his shoulders.
Without knowing things would get more interesting…..
To be continued in the sequel.
AN:
That is the end and there is a sequel. It'll be called The elements of harmony against the elements of insanity.
So look out for that as I'll post it when I complete it so be patient.
Don't forget reviews bring smiles and flamers will be used to make cookies!
Now as promised I will explain the names but this is the major spoiler for names. Also some things may make more sense when I finish and post the sequel. You have been warned.
Let's begin.
Light Yagami turns into Brutalight. This one is easy as it's just a combination of Brutal and Light.
Brutal means (of persons or their actions) able or disposed to inflict pain or suffering.
L Lawliet turns into LawPerfidy. This one was a little tricky. I used the first part of his last name and put it with Perfidy.
Perfidy means An act of deliberate betrayal / a betrayal of trust.
I intend his name to mean he betrays the law that he used to help protect.
Near; Nate River turns into ShoutingRiver. This one was second easiest. I hesitated at first but in the end it was the best out of the names I made. I'm sure you know that shouting means.
Mello; Mihael Keehl turns into MetierKeehl. This was another tricky one. I wasn't fully sure what I was going to do until I was bored playing my dictionary and I found a word that I found I could use. I mixed the word metier with Mello's last name.
Metier means An occupation for which you are especially well suited / an asset of special worth or utility.
Matt; Mail Jeevas turns into Automateevas. This one was tricky as I knew what I wanted but I couldn't find the perfect word. It had to go with that he's now part robotic now. I ended up using automaton and putting it with Matt's last name.
Automaton means a mechanism that can move automatically / someone who acts or responds in a mechanical or apathetic way.
Rai River turns into RaiVicious. Now this is one of my OC's that I decided to use. She is younger than her brothers Near and Silver by three years. I obviously took her first name and put it with Vicious. I'm sure you know what Vicious means.
Matsuda Touta turns into Pillsuda. At first I thought about making someone else the one addicted to pills. However I saw this as a comical opportunity. After all not everything has to be always dark. I put Matsuda and Pills together. I meant for it to sound a little like a creature with an example being Godzilla. I thought it would be a nice little thing for his name.
Sin; Silver River turns to SilverSlayer. This is my other OC. He is Near's twin and is older by a few seconds or so. He was one that I struggled a little with to make a form for him for this story. I didn't want to make him the same as he was before and yes I probably ended up making it the one that is closest to being like himself before the monster going in him but of course there is differences. I combined Silver with Slayer for this name.
Halle Lidner turns into Covetidner. Now for her I was originally thinking to have something about gems or jewels in her name…. But nothing seemed just right to fit the bill. So I took another path with her name while keeping the idea of her personality in my mind. I mixed her last name with Covet.
Covet means Wish, long, or crave, for (something especially the property of another person.)
Misa Amane turns into FollyAmane. This one I just had some fun with in making it and how she looked. I purposefully made her clothing a little different with the thought of why not after I messed up on the drawing of her new form since I make drawings to get a good grasp of character's scenes and looks. Folly is mixed with her last name.
Folly means Foolish or senseless behavior / a stupid mistake / a trait of acting stupidly or rashly / the quality of being rash and foolish.
Linda turns into LinGalling. I also just had some fun with this one. I thought about making Misa have the lines on her but in the end I decided to go with how it is now. I was just playing around with it and first try I got what I liked. Now she has no last name that is cannon, I couldn't even find her in my death note handbook, so I used what I had. I put Linda and Galling together.
Galling means Causing irritation or annoyance.
I do hope to get more profiles done and add more of the ones with monsters in them in the next
Now for a little detail for those who don't hate MLP/My little pony so for those turning away now thank you for reading and hope you enjoyed while the rest of you can continue on.
The marks on their shirts is their new cutie marks that has at least one part from their normal cutie mark.
The closest to showing the pictures of them is in my youtube video of the death note version of what my cutie mark is telling me. I'm sorry but as of right now that is the only thing I have to tell you what any of the cutie marks originally look like and it's been awhile since I looked at the video so I don't remember fully if it has any that aren't a part of this story.
Anyways I hope you enjoyed this story and don't forget there is a sequel to this story.
Mello.