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Maka's POV
We walked into this small run down bar. There were tons of people dancing as the strobe lights flashed by. No one seemed to be botherd by her young age, in fact she even saw acouple students from the DWMA.
"Oh, I'm Charlie by the way." He mentioned as her pulled her towards the bar.
"Oh, I'm Maka." I smiled looking towards the scary bar tender that stood in front of us. Charlie sat down and urged me to do so as well. Charlie ordered his beer, and I knew from experience I did NOT like beer. But I definatly wanted to forget today.
I looked towards the bar tender and asked "Give me something really strong." I looked towards Charlie ho gave me a surprised look, yet he shrugged it off.
"So whats been bothering you?" Charlie asked as we received our drinks. Mine was definitely strong, right when I grabbed the handle I could smell it, yet it was quite sweet. I took a sip of it and gagged from its intense burning flavor, and yet it was quite relaxing.
I spun in my chair to look at him. I was feeling quite buzzed from my drink.
"Well its my partner.." I started from beginning to end, Starting with Violet, and the soul and some how continued to talk until I couldn't take it anymore.
Charlie looked at me with a sympathetic smile and ordered another beer. I looked at my glass to see it had become empty. I waved to the bartender and he brought me another.
Charlie looked at his watch and his eyes became wide. I looked at him with curiousity when I was about to ask him what was wrong, he suddenly opened his mouth.
"Im so sorry Maka! I have to go! are you going to be okay? Should I call you a cab?" He asked me giddily ready to leave.
At this point I was way past the line of drunk...in fact... I'm so far away from the line I cant even see it anymore.
"nnoo imm ok" I slurred trying as hard as I could to keep my self intact. I took another sip of my drink as I watched him walk away. I looked towards everyone that was dancing and I felt compelled to join them.
in fact...
Where am I? I looked around, remembering the bar and Charlie. Everything had a duplicate and I realized just how drunk I was. I tried to move from my chair but I couldn't walk straight for more than 2 seconds before falling over. The Bartender wasn't even concerned.
I made it to the corner of the bar, where there was little light and very few people. I sunk down, my back up against the wall in the very dark and gloomy part of the bar.
I cant get home like this.
I pulled out my phone and called the only person I could think of.
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