"This one should be better," Reshiram informed Zekrom.
"It better be," Zekrom growled.
Parents
By That Wise Guy
"Let's skip the AN…" Zekrom grumbled and went on with the story.
It's been a few weeks since Ash and Serena spoke about their nightmares and he still suffers them. Luckily, they're as rare as finding Ho-Oh in a city. Both Bonnie and Clemont had noticed the two getting closer, with Bonnie teasing Serena about in private.
"It's good, but where's the 'it' in 'about it in private?'" Zekrom asked.
"Nothing bad happens in a while, so no criticism needed there," Reshiram pointed out.
Taking a deep breath, he started, "Serena?"
Said girl jumped a bit from a little shuffling, "Y-yeah?" she mentally cursed herself for such a weak reply.
"It was a good reply, really," Reshiram whispered.
"Don't get soft, Resh," Zekrom told him. "But it's true. But the 's' in she should have been capitalized, and instead of the comma after shuffling, it should have been a… uh…"
Reshiram simply told him, "Semicolon?"
"I think so. Whatever the : or whatever it's called."
"Anyways, it goes pretty good for some other time… not much to be corrected there too…"
She even felt her own throat lump up as she began to tear up from her own monologue, it didn't help that Delia was in tears. Delia was moved by the vow and even said for her to call her 'Delia' from now on, saying she would be the perfect daughter in law, to which Serena almost fainted hearing! That was a bit much! She clearly loved Ash, but marriage was too soon!
"Wow, Delia is in character. That's saying something, as we know almost nothing of her!" Zekrom commended.
Reshiram scrolled down some more and said, "Well, the rest is good! In a short summary, Ash and Serena talking about how good parents they are to Noibat!"
Notes:
Zekrom's Notes: Not very many critical points, a bit too oriented on shipping, but that's just me. Personally, I hate shipping. But it does kind of do well with talking about Ash and Serena's relationship and the possibility of them possibly being actual parents in the future.
Reshiram's Notes: Nice shipping story, with using the new Noibat to be a kid, and have Ash and Serena as its parents to bring them closer somehow. The part with Delia… kind of weird and off track a bit but still cool.
Verdict:
Excellent Amourshipping story. Also a bit on pointing out how they're kids, too. That's pretty important. Even if technically they should be sixteen or something, it's important not to forget they're ten. The use of Noibat was also pretty fun, as we're all excited to see him show up.
Zekrom sighed and told Reshiram, "I'm going to take a short nap…"
Reshiram nodded and let him do his thing.
THE END
Credits:
Keldeo the Critic- Season One
Special Thanks:
Matthias Undiostres
Imperator Justinian
Mr. Grool
AN: Sorry if this was short. For some reason I can't copy and paste fanfictions, so I'm going to shorten things out or write one chapter in three hours… I don't know which one to do. Well, good reading, guys and girls!