Second chances.
OK this is the first story i've made. well the first one i'm counting. i had made a chapter for a silent hill story a few years back. but it was horrible. hell i made it in notepad. Now i have put more effort in this one but it is still most likely shit. my school didn't have creative writing classes. So my writing skill isn't the best so please give it the benefit of the doubt before attacking it. i will accept helpful criticism. but hate and flames will be used to roast marshmallows. if it's bad tell me in a civials way like a normal fucking person.
Disclaimer: i do not own Mass effect. that right goes to Bioware and EA.
"Owww". I groaned as my head felt like a soccer player use it for a ball. As i looked around in confusion because i had no clue where i was at. The last thing i remember was driving down the highway and hearing honking then there was blackness. But i saw green everywhere i looked…. well green and white. As i struggled to my feet and to get my bearings i realized that i felt heavier than i should not much but just enough to realized it. I look down at my chest to try and see why i was heavier. I was in a black with crimson striped armor. Well it looked like armor but i'm not sure. Bamm! I heard sending me diving behind cover. I looked around freaking out trying to find where the shot came from. What scared the shit out of me was Saren Arterius. You know the fucking main baddie from Mass Effect. Like what the fuck am i in some shitty self-insert story for Mass Effect? But i digress i stayed hidden and watch Saren order the geth around.I tried to listen to what he said but i was to far away. He then left and the geth he was talking to dispersed to set the bombs. I tried to sneak around the geth. But sadly a geth saw me and all hell unleashed on my sorry ass. I scrambled for cover again and grab the old pistol my dad gave me when i started training for the army, Why it was on me i have no clue. But damn was i happy it was. I stood up to take a shot and manage to get a shot off before a geth shot me in the chest. It through on my back.
I groaned in pain and scraped at my chest looking for a wound but there was nothing there so my armor must have shields or something. I struggled to my feet and look at the geth i shot it was dead on the ground with a bullet clean through its head. I looked at it in shock for a few seconds I mean i'm no bad shot i've gone to the shooting range enough to be a decent shot with pistols. But that must of been a fluke that shot hit it dead in its face thing. without taking the time to get a steady shot. Hell my hands where and are shaking like crazy. But i then heard yelling and realized that Shepard should be on there way here. I panicked and look for a place to hide but saw something that made my blood run cold. The geth that shot me had set the bomb a few feet from me to go off in 30 seconds then it ran in shepherds direction. " Oh, you have got to fucking kidding me! " I growled to myself. " I'm not cut out for this shit. I then dashed for the bomb. When i got to the bomb i riped of the the cover and started pulling wires." Now i'll admit that i have no clue what im doing im just pulling wires out left and right. "DETONATION IN T-MINUS 5 SECONDS". The bomb said in a robotic voice. " come on you peice of shit Shut down! ' I yelled out in frustration. "SHUT DOWN ACTIVATED." The bomb said in what sounded like it was disapointed.
"Oh, well shit awesome." I mumbled to myself in relief. I was so distracted that i didn't hear someone walk up behind me. Well till they spoke. "Who the hell are you and what are you doing!?" Demanded a voice i was dreading sense i realize where i was. I turned around to address the woman who i really didn't want to meet like this. "Shepared…. fuck me." I mumble to myself but sadly shepard heard me."You know me? Ok who the hell are you?" Shepard growled getting angry with me. "Uhhhhhh." Was all i could think to say. while i stood around like a jackass i saw something that bout made me cry it was Ashly walking toward the prothean artifact. Ohh this is going to hurt was all i could think of as i ran toward her to save her and it look like shepard had the same idea about saving her sept mine where more selfish because if i could save ashley shepard may just let me go without a name. One problem with this plan. I forgot that the artifact would pull shepard toward it and me in tow sense we got to ashley at the same time. We pulled ashley out of the way but i'm pretty sure me and shepard had the same thought when we got pulled off the ground and that was simply two words… "OH SHIT!" Let me tell you the vision the game shows you that shepard see don't do it justice i saw a whole civilization wiped out. and i may have seen more than shepard because i saw the protheans get turned into the collectors. It was not a pretty site because they failed a lot and i got to see everyone. The last thing i saw before blackness was the harbinger hanging over a burning earth.
Ok thats it. i dont know i think i did pretty good but whatever. ok tell me if it's worth continuing. hell i might keep at it even if you dont like it just for the practise. if my writing suckes the best way tio help is tell me my problems not just hate the story because it is badly written. Any way this is Yomi-Ryoken signing out, Peace.